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Originally posted by: rasikasarisha
Hi chitra how r u???
Thx for speedy updates, actually that makes reader more intrigued in ur story.I like d way all the characters are getting unfolded.👏Hi Rasika, so good to hear from you...i am good thank u, just a little exhausted HAHAYes i agree when there is a continuous flow to a story it keeps the readers glued...will try to keep teh pace😃My thoughts...Chapter 9 n 10The smashan scene was really appriciable means you just made it live for me. The way u narrated d scene keeping everything in mind like there is scene between advay- mother n advay- nearby person family. U have shown about advay doing sadhana n using bhasma n all. Never thougt about it.Ur advay is so multilayered person n m liking d way u r unfolding it.👍🏼Thansk u so much my darling, TBH when i wrote it I wasnt sure how people would react to it, but most of you appreciated it so i am really very happy and delighted that you enjoyed that scene... Yes it was a truly emotional scene... yes Bhasma is what Shiva always applies isn't it , as he is the ultimate Aghori...so Advay too is similarly mutli faceted like Shiv, he can be bholey and can be bhadrakaal... so i guess thats what makes his character so fascinating. thank u for liking it 😳The scene made me cry was Advay- shikha scene. I really dont know y i cried. U know when advay was reliving his old memories that time it is mentioned shikha was unwanted child her mother wanted boy so she was not much bothered about her n even how advay n chandni considering her as their child. I never thought about advay shikha bonding n their scene was so beatifully writtern by u.Oh Thanks...Awweiiiee U cried... oh come here let us give u a warm hug 🤗...I agree Advay Shikha is a beautiful bond... it shows how well rounded he is emotionally...he may be unkind to chandini but towards everyone else he is so balanced and caring. And these two share some of the most endearing moments in teh story ...so I too love their dynamics and so glad to know that their scenes would touch i so deeply ...tho when she licks his finger, i did feel emotional when i wrote it ..it was pure love... pure untainted unconditional love that they have for each other. 😳...and yes Advay Chandini consider her thier child in a way and hence hwy he says u are never kabab main haddi..as kids are always welcome between parents isn't it. 😃...and Indrani yukkk😡, lets not even talk about her ...she is a disgusting witch 😡The scene between yash narayan shikha advay n chandni was really amazing. Interpersonal conversation between was so well scripted.Yash natayan remembering his master n having so much respect n says this in front of advay thats really nice.thank u again my love, I wanted Yash to be the mahant that he is, jsut wanted to show through him that mahants are not ordinary people they have a lot of spiritual wisdom, and Guru is paramount in the order of Mahants and all these great spiritual masters...so it was needed to show that he was Dev's fathers disciple and hence why he could never wrong him. What they showed in teh show was an insult to the order of Mahatns...i am only trying to redeem him and I am so glad that you liked it 😳Chapter 11U nicely unfolded indrani means how she considering chandni a pawn n even her thought about her n even calling a own sister barren such selfish woman is she. Thx for showing kajal as kind hearted woman buthelplesss.Liek i said Indrani is not worth talking about ...she is a witch but we need a strong villain for a good story and Indi is that strong dark villain ...teh bad man 😆😆...as of Kajal i truly liked her character in the show and hence hwy want to show her as a woman who is good at heart yet not strong enough to stand up to her sister. i am sure a lot of women are like that ... but i am sure once Advay comes things might start to brighten up for everyone 😃Chapeter 11Chandnis confused feeling abt advay dev n PPjeee. Yeah bichari...i really feel for her TBH 😳It is so true that we can not forget our first kiss also the way u have narrated romantic scene between advay n chandni that makes remember mills n boon. So lovely n passionate. I was in d different world .Awweiiie thanks a lot for liking the romantic scenes between the two, its get steamier by the day so prepare urself...TBH yes the kiss was a lil M n B type tho not really as MnB are so romantic ,...but trust me this story is no mushy like M nB this is dark, Advya can be ruthless so please be ready to take a not so nice advay 😆...But thanks again fro appreciating that scene, I really wrote it with a lot of heart and was totally exhaysted after that scene, it was truly romantic yet scorching hottt 😳Would love see scene between miku n chiku. Yeah yeah of course it will happen in due course... this story is very close to the original plot so yes we will explore every chemistry, including AdVeer which will happen to be a good plot I promiseOnce again thx for speedy updates.Thansk again my lovely for liking my story and for all ur detailed lengthy reviews, really means a lot 😳❤️ Chitra
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