My own version of JJKN! Updated Oct 28!! - Page 3

My own version of JJKN (Part 8)

 

Purab and Tamanna are in the car going to Dehradun.

 

Tamanna: Dehradun mein toh bohut mushkil ho jaye gi.

 

Purab: kyun?

 

Tamanna: arre yaar itni khoobsurat jagah hai. Ek se badh kar ek location hai. Kaun si choose karenge?

 

Purab: isi liye toh tumhein saath laya hoon. (He laughs.) wese tum pehle Dehradun aa chuki ho?

 

Tamanna: of course tum bhool gaye right? Hum jab college mein the toh trip hi toh aaya tha.

 

Purab: oh yeah of course. Yaad hai. College ke din bhi kitne suhane the. Na koi tension, na dar. (he looks sad.)

 

Tamanna looks sad too and puts her hand on his shoulder.

 

Tamanna: Tum nahin jante Purab. College ke dinon mein bhi koi rota hai. Tab bhi dil toote hain.

 

Purab looks at her and suddenly there comes a very strange noise and the car stops.

 

Tamanna: kya hua?

 

Purab: dekhta hoon. Oh god engine over heated ho geya hai.

 

Tamanna: ab kya karein? Ek toh tum bhi plane se anhin jana, train se nahin, yahan tak keh driver bhi saath nahin liya.

Purab: acha baba ab agar tum mujh se ladna bandh karo toh is problem ka koi hal nikale.

 

Tamanna: yeah go ahead.

 

They get out of the car. Purab checks the engine and suddenly there comes lots of clouds, lightning and finally rain starts.

 

Purab: Tamanna tum car mein beth jao.

 

Tamanna: kyun? Kyun? Bin mausam barsaat ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai. (she keeps standing in the rain enjoying every drop!)

 

Suddenly lightning hits very hard and Tamanna gets scared. She turns around and hugs Purab. For a moment both don't realize anything. they just keep standing in the rain in each others' arms. But after a while Tamanna realizes. She opens her eyes and gets away from Purab. She then runs to the car. Purab keeps standing in the rian for awhile feeling something different for the first time for Tamanna.

 

Purab and Tamanna are on the location taking pictures. Tamanna is talking to herself.

 

Tamanna: kyka yeh sach hai? Kya Purab sac mein mujhe se pyar karne laga hai?

 

She doesn't realizes but she comes towards the end of the cliff. Purab runs and grabs her hand.

 

Purab: Pagal ho gayi ho tum? Agge khayi hai! Kya kar tahi thi tum? Nazar nahin aata kya?

 

As Purab goes on scolding her, she sees the same pain in his eyes for her that is called love.

 

Purab: ab tum sun bhi rahi ho? Agar tumehin kuch ho jata toh?

 

Tamanna turns around to tease him.

 

Tamanna: agar mujhe kuch ho bhi jata to kya hota? Kisse farq padhata?

 

Purab looks very hurt.

 

Purab: meri aankhon mein dekho aur kaho keh kisi ko fark nahin padhata! Mujhe fark nahin padhata ya us bache ko fark nahin padhata jis ki zubaan tumhein Didi kehti nahin thakti?!

 

He turns around.

 

Purab: fark nahin padhata!

 

Tamanna: acha baba sorry! I was just kidding! Kaha naa I am sorry ab tum…(suddenly Tamanna's foot turns and hurts badly.)

 

Tamanna: ouch! Ah!

 

Purab: are you alright?

 

Tamanna (trying to get up): yeah…. Ouch!

 

Purab: I don't think so!

 

He goes up to her and carries her in his arms. Tamanna's face is blank while Purab is very strong and firm and a bit angry. He carries her to the car and they drive back to Mumbai. Purab drops her to her house and brings her into her room in his arms.

 

Tamanna: thanks Purab!

 

Purab turns around, looks at her and smiles. He doesn't say anything and leaves. Now Tamanna is all alone in the room by herself. Her own image begins to question her.

 

Tamanna's image: toh tumhare sapne ab phir se jaagne lagge hain?

 

Tamanna herself: toh kya hua? Pyar karna koi gunah toh nahin hai.

 

Tamanna's image: nahin hai par agar feelings mutual hon joh is matter mein nahin hain!

 

Tamanna herself: yeh tum kese keh sakti ho?

 

Tamanna's image: ha ha ha apne aap koi jitna dhoka dena chaho delo Tamanna. Who tum se pyar nahin karta.

 

Tamanna herself: nahin yeh sach nahin hai! Who meri itni care karta hai. Mera saath chahta hai. Kya tum nein nahin dekha who kis tarhan mujhe mere kamre tak chodne aaya.

 

Tamanna's image: he he he apne aap ko dhoka dena toh koi tum se seekhe Tamanna. Yeh toh tum bhi janti ho aur main bhi keh who tumhari care sirf ek dost ki tarhan karta hai.

 

Tamanna herself: yeh sach anhin hai. Ho sakta hai who bhi mujhe chahne laga ho.

 

Tamanna's image: ho sakta hai. Huh? College ke days mein bhi oth tum nein yehi kaha tha naa aur anjaam dekha?

 

Tamanna herself: par zaroori toh nahin keh joh tab hua who ab bhi hoga.

 

Tamanna's image: tum joh chaho soch lo Tamanna. Sach sirf yeh hai keh us nein sirf Jassi se pyar kiya aur hamesha sirf usse hi chahta rahega.

 

Tamanna herself: please mujhe akela chod do. Leave me alone!

 

Tamanna cries a little then decides to go to Purab's house.

 

There Purab is facing himself too. He goes infront of the mirror and his image appears to ask him questions.

 

Purab's image: toh tum us se pyar karne lagge ho?

 

Purab himself: kis se?

 

Purab's image: yeh toh tum jante hi ho naa?

 

Purab himself: nahin main Tamanna se pyar nahin karta.

 

Purab's image: par main nein toh naam hi nahin liya phir tumhein kese patah chala keh main Tmanna ki baat kar raha hoon?

 

Purab looks confused.

 

Purab's image: tum sare jahan se chuppa sakte ho par mujh se nahin Purab. Apne aap se nahin!

 

Purab himself: nahin nahin karta main us se pyar! Pyar ka matlab hi nahin bacha meri zindagi mein.

 

Purab's image: toh phir usse chot lagti hai toh dard tumhein yahan apne dil mein kyun hota hai? Purab tum Jassi ki saza apne aap ko kyun de rahe ho?

 

Just then Purab's brother Rohan enters the scene.

 

Rohan: bhaiya?

 

Purab: aao Rohan.

 

Rohan: Bhaiya aap se kuch kehena tha.

 

Purab: kaho Rohan.

 

Rohan: Bhaiya mujhe Tamanna Didi bohut pasand hain. Kya who hamesha ke liye hamare saath nahin reh saktin?

 

Purab: Rohan who hamare saath kese reh sakti hai?

Rohan: kyun Bhaiya? Aap un se shaadi kar lein.

 

Purab doesn't say anything.

 

Rohan: Bhaiya kya aap un se pyar nahin karte? Karte hain naa Bhaiya? Mujhe se jhooth mat kahiye ga.

 

Purab finaly admits: haan karta hoon! Par main yeh usse kese kahoon?

 

Rohan: kyun Bhaiya? Kyun nahin keh sakte?

 

Purab: tum nahin samjho ge Rohan.

 

Rohan: kyun nahin Bhaiya? Aap kahein toh.

 

Purab: rohan who yeh janti hai keh main Jassi se pyar karta hoon. Main nein Jassi se bohut pyar kiya hai. Ab main usse ja keh yeh kese kahoon keh main tum se pyar karne laga hoon.

 

Rohan: par Bhaiya pyar dobara bhi toh ho sakta hai naa.

 

Purab: ho sakta hai Rohan par who nahin samjhe gi.

 

Tamanna enters the house and goes to Purab's room. she's standing at the door and hears this:

 

Purab: issi liye yehi sch hai keh main usse pyar nahin karta. Nahin karta main usse pyar Rohan.

 

Tears come out of Tamanna's eyes. Purab sees her but before he could say anything, she leaves.

 

Purab: Tamanna! Tamanna!

 

To be continues….

My own version of JJKN ( Part 9)

 

Tamanna's in her car. She is crying a lot. The car gets out of control a few times. Finally she stops infornt of Gulmohar. She enters Gulmohar and goes to Jassi's cabin. Jassi is wearing a sari with sinndoor and mangalsutra.

 

Jassi: Tamanna! Kya hua Tamanna? Tum is haalat mein? Kya hua?

 

Tamanna: Jassi main London ja rahi hoon.

Jassi: par Tamanna kyun? Itni achanak yeh faisla kyun?

 

Tamanna: bas Jassi ab aur bardaasht nahin hota.

 

Jassi: kya bardaash nahin hota Tamanna? Hamain tumhari zaroorat hai.

 

Tamanna: kise Jassi?

 

Jassi: mujhe, Gulmohar ko, Tamanna Purab ko!

 

Tamanna: nahin Jassi. Ab meri zaroorat kisi ko nahin. Gulmohar ab theek hai. Infact back to it's previous state.

 

Jassi: par Tamanna hum sirf professional nahin haiin. Tum meri dost ho. Mujh se kaho shayyad mian tumhari madat kar paon.

 

Tamanna: nahin Jassi!main ab yaha se door jana chahti hoon.

Jassi: Par kyun Tamanna? Kyun?

 

Tamanna: kyunki ab Tamanna, Tamanna nahin rahi. Mere who sare sapne joh main barson pehle apne dil mein daba diye the who ab phir jagne lagge hain. Na jane kyun mujhe lagne laga keh shayyad Purab bhi mujhe chahne laga hai keh shayyad who bhi mujh se pyar karta hai. Par Jassi aaj main nein jaan liya hai keh who mujhe nahin chahta. Aur yeh mere liye bardaasht karna bohut mushkil hai Jassi. Bohut takleef hoti hai aur agar who mere samne rahe ga toh yeh dard aur badhata jaye ga.

 

Jassi: toh agar tum usse door raho gi toh kya dard kam ho jayega?

 

Tamanna: nahin Jassi! Par ab main yahan nahin rehena chahti. Main aaj raat ki flight se London ja rahi hoon Jassi. Bye.

 

Tamanna leaves cryinhg and Jassi is shown standing there with eyes full of tears talking to herself.

 

Jassi: Purab joh anjane mein main nein tumhare saath kiya who tum Tamanna ke saath naa karo please!

 

Purab there reaches at Tamanna's home. Her bai opens the door and tells that Tamanna hasn't reached yet. He says he will wait for her here. He sees her diary again saying, "My life: Tamanna Chopra." He goes towards it and opens it.

 

There Tamanna is again driving wildly and is about to turn when her car hits a truck and her car falls over. She's badly hurt.

 

There Purab's face is shown and he suddenly shivers.

Purab: Tamanna theek to hai? Na jane kyun ajeeb lag raha hai.

 

He opens the diary and starts reading the 1^st page.

 

Purab: "Dear diary,

                          Tum janti ho aaj college ka pehela din tha. Aaj ek ladke nein who himmat dikhayi joh main naa dikha payi. He stood up for me. I am so happy that people like him still exist. I hope we'll become friends soon! Purab naam hai us ka."

 

Purab turns a few pages over and reads another entry.

 

Purab: "Dear diary,

                          You won't believe it aaj Purab nein dosti ka haath badhaya meri taraf. Main kitni khush hoon yeh main khud nahin janti. Na jane aaj kal mujhe kya hota ja raha hai? Usse dekh kar main qaboo mein nahin rehti. Kya yehi pyar hai?"

 

Tears start appearing in Purab's eyes as he turns a few more pages over.

 

Purab: "patah nahin mere saath hi aesa kyun hota hai Bhagwan? Kyun aap mere saath aesa karte hain? Jisse bhi main pyar karti hoon aap usse mujh se cheen lete hain. Meri maa, baba, behen ab Purab. Theek hai jesa aap chahein. Purab main tum se bohut pyar karti hoon bohut. Janti nahin keh tumhare baghair kya karoongi. Ji paongi bhi ya nahin.. main nahin janti. Par main hamesha dua karoongi keh tum khush raho tum America ja rahe jo jis bhi wajah se who puri ho. Tumhein har khushi mile jis ki Tamanna tumhara dil kare. Kaash tum nein kabhi Tamanna ki tamanna bhi ki hoti! Purab main tumhein bohut chahti hoon aur hamesha sirf tum hi se pyar karoongi. Chahe tum mujhe chaho ya naa chaho. Main dua karrongi keh tum yeh din kabhi mat dekho joh main nein dekha. Tum jisse bhi pyar karo who tumhein us se zyadah pyar kare. Par main hamesha sirf tumehin hi chahoongi.

 

                          Meri saanson pe likha hai tera hi ek naam

                          Teri yaad humsafar subha shaam…

                                        Teri yaad humsafar subha shaam.

                          Tu mere din mein raaton mein, khamoshi mein baton mein

                          Badal ke haathon mein bhejun tujh ko yeh payaam….      

                          Teri yaad humsafar subha shaam..

                                        Teri yaad humsafar subha shaam.

 

                          Gham ki hai ek badri chayi dil de keh main nein payi

                          Veerani si veerani tanhayi si tanhayi

                          Aankhein bheegi dil jale mile yeh chahat ke sile

                          Lekin tum se hain mujhe na koi shikwe na gile

                          Mar jaon toh bhi naa lagon koi tujh pe ilzaam

                          Teri yaad humsafar subhu shaam..

                                        Teri yaad humsafar suhbu shaam.."

 

As Purab finishes the last line, tears come out of his eyes and drop on the page. And he smiles like he misunderstood again. A hurt smile. He then gets flashbacks when Tamanna was singing kal ho naa ho at Armaan and Jassi's wedding. She came closer to him singing, "us haath ko tum thaa lo who meherbaan kal ho naa ho." He also gets the flashback when in the car she said, "college ke dinon mein dil toote the." He gets all her flashbacks jab Tamanna nein keh kar bhi nahin kaha tha keh who Purab se pyar karti hai.

 

He goest onto the last page and he reads it as he wipes his tears.

 

Purab: "Bhagwan Tum mujhe takleef de kar hi khush hote ho naa? Tum nein mere saath kya kya nahin kiya main nein usse tumhari marzi samajh kar accept kar liya par ab nahin.  Kyunki ab tum nein takleef mujhe nahin balkeh us insaan koi di hai jisse main nein sab se zyadah pyar kiya.  Jisse main nein apni zindagi se zyadah pyar kiya. Purab! Ab main is ke khilaaf ladoongi. Purab who insaan jis nein sab ka hamesha bhalla chaha. Sab ke saath neki karta geya aur kabhi ehsaan bhi nahin jataya. Tum usse bhi khush nahin dekh sake. Kyun Bhagwan? Kyun? Us ka bhai yeh nahin janta ke Purab is tarhan behave kyun kar raha hai. Purab jis nein aaj tak sharaab ko haath nahin lagaya tha aaj kal us ke din ki shurwaat bhi sharaab se aur ant bhi. Aap ko insaanon ko takleef de kar khushi hoti hai kya? Toh theek hai par ab main usse aur barbaad hone nahin ddongi. Ummed karti hoon keh atleast ab aap mera saath denge."

 

Purab wipes his eyes as he finishes reading her diary.

 

Purab: toh issi liye tum whaha se yun chali aayi Tamanna. Aur main..main sochta tha keh tum mujhe se pyar hi nahi karti.

 

The phone bell rings. Purab picks up the phone.

 

Man's voice: kya yeh Tamanna Chopra ka ghar hai?

 

Purab: ji haan.

 

Man's voice: please aap us ke ghar se kisi ko City hospital bhejein. Tamanna ka accident ho geya hai.

 

Purab: WHAT?????

 

To be continued….

My own version of JJKN (Part 10) Last one!

 

Purab rushes to the hospital. he goes there like crazy. He asks about Tamanna to the receptionist and she tells him that Tamanna is in the ICU. He runs towards the ICU and meets the doctor.

 

Purab: Dr. ab kesi hai Tamanna?

Doctor: kuch kaha nahin ja sakta. In ki haalat bohut critical hai. Accident bohut buri tarhan hua tha. Bohut khoon beh chukka hai.

 

Purab: Doctor, kuch bhi kijiye kese bhi kar keh is ki jaan bacha lijiye please. Jitna marzi kharcha ho I don't care but please save her Doctor. Please! (he breaks into tears.)

 

Doctor: hum apni taraf se puri koshish kar rahe hain Mr..?

 

Purab: Purab.. Purab Mehra.

 

Doctor: haan Mr. Mehra but we need blood. Us ke ghar se kisi ko bula lijiye. Any blood relation.

 

Purab: us ka koi blood relative nahin hai Doctor. Par aap jitna chahiye mera blood le lijiye .

 

Doctor: par Mr. Mehra blood match bhi toh hona chahiye naa?

 

Purab: blood match hoga Doctor.

 

Doctor asks nurse to take Purab to check for blood. The blood tuype matches and Purab gives Tamanna his blood. While lying on the bed next to her he talks to God.

 

Purab: please Bhagwan Tamanna ko mujhe se mat cheena! Please! Ab yeh main she nahin paon ga Bhagwan please. Be shak usse meri zindag ide do par please us ki jaan bacha lo.

 

Purab comes close to Tamanna and starts talking to her while she is unconscious.

 

Purab: kese Tamanna? Kese tum mujhe chod kar ja sakti ho? Main nein toh hasna hi chod diya tha mujhe jeena tum nein sikhaya. Mujhe zindagi de kar pyar de kar tum kese ja sakti ho? Please Tamanna wake up. main ek baar apna pyar kho chukka hoon ab khona nahin chata kyunki ab main ji nahin paonga. (He cries hiding his face in Tamanna's hands.)

 

Next, we see Tamanna packing up her stuff. She closes the door and meets Rohan there. Rohan is crying.

 

Rohan: Didi aap ja rahi ho?

 

Tamanna: haan Rohan mujhe jana ho ga.

 

Rohan: mat jao please.

 

Tamanna: tumhein chod kar jane ka man toh nahin kar raha Rohan par jana zaroori hai. Bye.

She hugs Rohan wiping his tears and then leaves running. After a minute Purab arrives and finds Rohan crying.

 

Purab: Rohan kya hua? Tamanna kahan hai?

 

Rohan: who toh chali gayi Bhaiya chali gayin.

 

Purab: kya? Driver Rohan ko ghar le kar jao.

 

He runs to the car and drives as fast as he could for the airport. He reaches the airport and runs wildly in the airort shouting Tamanna's name. Finally he sees Tamanns's back and calls her name. Tamanna stops talking to herself but doesn't turn around.

 

Tamanna: please Purab tum chale jao. Tumhare samne main ja nahin paongi. Please Purab chale jao.

 

Purab runs towards her. at the time he reaches infront of her, he is just out of breadth. Tamanna turns around and has tears in her eyes. For awhile Purab doesn't say anthing then….

 

Purab: ja rahi ho?

 

Tamanna: jana hoga.

 

Purab: sab ko chod kar ja paogi?

 

Tamanna: meri ab zaroorat nahin hai yahan.

 

Purab: kisse?

 

Tamanna: sab ko.

Purab: toh yeh ab tum decide karogi keh hamain tumhari zaroorat hai ya nahin. Kisse chod kar jana chahti ho? Rohan ko? MUJHE?

 

Tamanna doesn't say anything and tears fall from her eyes.

 

Purab: ghalti shayyad meri hi hai. Mian kabhi izhaar na kar paya. Darta tha keh kahin tum bhi mujhe chod kar chali naa jao. Par tum.. tum nein kabhi kyun kuch nahin kaha?

 

Tamanna: kyunki main tumhara pyar chahti thi Purab. Sacha pyar. Tumhari deya nahin, dosti nahin. Aur ab bhi.

 

Purab: janti ho? Us din jab mujhe laga keh main tumhein kho doonga, keh tum mujhe se door ja sakti ho toh mujhe ehsaas hua keh tum meri zindagi mein kya maine rakhti ho. Utm nein hamesha meri khushi chahi hamesha mujhe kuch na kuch diya. Bas apne dil ki baat nahin kahi. Kyun Tamanna? ,kyun tum itni achi ho keh koi bhi tum se pyar karne ko magboor jo jaye? Please mat jao. Please mujhe chod kar mat jao main jee nahin paonga.

 

Tamanna: itna kuch baghair saans liye keh diya bas 3 simple words nahin keh sakte?

 

Purab smiles with eyes full of tears. He steps back a little and opens his arms smiling.

 

Purab: I love you! I love you Tamanna!

 

Tamanna smiles as her tears leave her eyes and runs in Purab's arms.

 

Tamanna: I love you too Purab!

 

They both smile and hug!

 

Now it's Purab and Tamanna's shaadi. The wedding itself has taken place. Tamanna is wearing sinndoor and mangalsutra. Everybody is happy!  Armaan and Jassi show yup on the reception.

 

Armaan: congrats to both of you!

 

Jassi: congratulations Purab and Tamanna!

 

Purab: thanks! Glad you came!

 

Tamanna: thanks a lot!

 

Then Rohan comes up on the stage and hugs Purab.

 

Rohan: thanks Bhaiya!

 

Purab smiles. Rohan goes towards Tamanna.

 

Rohan: main soch raha hoon keh ab main aap ko kya kahoon?

 

Tamanna: matlab?

 

Rohan: main aap ko Didi kehta tha par aap ki toh ab Bhaiya se shaadi ho gayi hai toh ab main aap ko kya kahoon?

 

Tamanna: joh tum chaho Rohan.

 

Rohan: kya karoon ab sare faisle mujhe hi karne padhate hain!

 

Everybody laugh at this.

 

Rohan: aap ki shaadi Bhaiya se hoyi hai aur bhai ki wife ko Bhabhi kehte hain toh main aap ko Bhabhidi kahoonga.

 

Tamanna smiles as tears come in her eyes but this time tears of happiness.

 

Tamanna: thanks Rohan!

 

Rohan hugs Tamanna and everybody is happy.

 

We have two happily married couples and our favorite Rohan. This ends at a happy Kodak moement.

 

 

 

I would like to thank first of all my jaan Maheen for making me always believe in myself.

 

I would like to also thank all those who appreciated my story!

 

Overall, I had fun writing this story. (only my fingers ache a lot) I hope so did you reading it! Thanks once again!

wow naina tht was a great ending!! And your fingers probably do hurt!!
bye
Hera