My own version of JJKN! Updated Oct 28!!

I didn't like the show after Purab was being humiliated in this show and now he is not in the show so a lot of JJKN viewers, who were Purab fans, are mad.

Well, after sometime I had realized that Jassi doesn't deserve Purab and Purab doesn't deserve Jassi. He deserves someone just like him who would love him unconditionally like he does. Jassi and Purab were not made for each other. But instead of making him leave the show and weakening his role, the directors could have done something else. THAT something else is what I plan on writing about.

I am not strictly posting it for Purab fans as Jassi and Armaan are also in the story together but there are not a lot of Jassi-Armaan romantic scenes as we have already seen a bunch of that in the show. I am paying more attention towards something else. Towards the story.

I am starting it after Purab left the show in June. When he had attacks and went to California. Then the real culprit was caught and Jassi proven innocent about the pictures. I am starting it right after that. Hope all of you will enjoy!

Jassi is sitting in her cabin when Armaan enters the scene.

Armaan: Jassi! Jassi! Jassi! Kesi ho tum?

Jassi: ab toh bohut khush hoon. Sab kuch theek jo ho geya hai par…

Armaan: par kya Jassi?

Jassi: Armaan, in sab mein Purab ka koi dosh nahin tha. Yeh kaam us ke manager nein Purab se chuppa kar kiya that toh who kahan hai?

Armaan: haan yehi toh main bhi soch raha tha keh kisi ko baghair bataye who kahan chala geya?

Jassi: samajh mein nahin aa raha. I hope sab theek hai.

Armaan: of course Jassi. Ho sakta hai vacation pe geya ho par ab hamain Gulmohar ke bare mein sochna hai. Jassi… who joh Tamanna Chopra ko Gulmohar ke next collention design karne ka invitation diya tha us ka kya bana?

Jassi: well, Armaan Tamanna aaj ki best designer toh hai hi par suna hai keh asulon ki bhi kafi pakki hai. Joh kehti hai wohi karti hai. Aaj who aa rahi hai meeting ke liye dekhte hain kya hota hai?
Armaan: I hope who maan jayegi.

Next, Jassi's gang is talking.

Mathali: aaj Gulmohar who best designer Tamanna Chopra aa rahi hai. Nakhre dekhne wale hon ge us ke.

Then the camera focuses on someone's feet and slowly goes up. she's wearing pretty salwar kamiz. The camera doesn't show her face. She goes to the reception.

Tamanna: hi main Tamanna Chopra. Kya aap bata sakti hain keh conference room kahan hai?

Maria: of course! Yahan se right. Veeru in ko le jao.

Tamanna: no, it's ok main chali jaongi. Thanks a lot!

She leaves for the conference room leaving everyone amazed behind her.

Methali: yeh toh bilkul hi alag hai. Zara bhi show-off nahin hai is mien.

Everybody's sitting in the conference room when Tamanna enters opening the door and that's where her face is finally shown. She is very beautiful and charming. A perfect lady.

Armaan: Hello Ms. Tamanna. Welcome to Gulmohar! Bilkul time pe hain aap.

Tamanna: kyunki mera mana hai keh joh time ki care nahin kar sakta who kabhi kamiyaab nahin ho sakta. Anyways, meeting shuru karein?

Mr. Suri: I am sorry Tamanna but one of our boardmembers isn't here yet. We are waiting for Mallika.

Then Mallika enters the door very proudly.

Mallika: oh I am sorry I am a bit late. Hope it's okay. Oh hi Tamanna!

Tamanna: Hello Ms. Mallika but it's not okay. Jab meeting ka time fix hota hai toh sab ko on time hona chahiye. Aap 10 minutes late hain. Anyways, take your seat so we can start the meeting.

Mallika ( a bit annoyed): well, I am sorry.

Jassi: toh Tamanna kya socha hai app nein hamare offer ke bare mein?

Tamanna: main aap ki next collection design karoongi.

Armaan: oh well that's great news! Thanks Tamanna!

Tamanna: par is se pehle main kuch kehna chahti hoon. Ass everybody knows, main kisi bhi ek company ki pehchaan ban kar nahin rehti. I keep on taking projects as they come from any company so I will not be bounded to Gulmohar.

Mallika: par tum aese kese kar sakti ho yeh toh….

Tamanna: meri baat abhi puri nahin hoyi hai. Main tab tak koi aur project nahin loongi jab tak aaap ka collection launch nahin hota par us ke baad main Gulmohar ki official designer nahin ban jaongi. Yeh meri shart hai.

Mr. Suri: pehle aesa kabhi hua nahin hai keh….

Tamanna: well, Mr. Suri main nein hamesha se aese hi kaam kiya hai aur karti rahoongi. The decision is all yours. Right now Main Gulmohar visit kar leti hoon aur aap discuss ar lijiye then we'll meet here right after half an hour.

Tamanna leaves and all board members start discussing the pros and cons. She goes out and meets people outside.

Tamanna (To Veeru and Methali): excuse me! main Gulmohar dekh rahi thi kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain keh Gulmohar ke previous designs, collections vaghera kahan hon ge please?

Veeru: of course Ma'am main..

Tamanna: Please don't call me Ma'am. Aap mujhe Tamanna keh sakte hain.

Veeru: Par Ma'am hum aap ko kese naam se pukarein?

Tamanna: Well kyun nahin? Jese main pukaroong gi. Aap ka naam kyua hai?

Veeru: Veeru

Tamanna: aur aap ka?

Methali: Methali

Tamanna: toh Methali aur Veeru ab aese hi aap mujh bhi bula sakte hain. Dekho, kaam se koi bada ya chota nahin hota. Agar hota hai toh mehnat se keh aap kitni mehnat apne kaam pe karte ho. Aur I am sure keh jitni mehnat maint karti hoon utni hi aap bhi karte hain. Toh ab chalein?

Methali: yes Ma'am. I mean Tamanna.

There, board mebers are discussing the matters. Mallika doesn't want Tamanna while Jassi is in favor saying Gulmohar needs her right now. Then Tamanna enters the room.

Tamanna: toh kya decide kiya hai app sab nein?

Mr. Suri: well, Ms. Tamanna we all agree with you.

Tamanna: thankyuou! So I'll start working on our next collection. Par main jana chahti thi keh in case of any questions who should I contact?

Armaan: Jassi. Tamanna Jassi is collection mein aap ke saath help karegi.

Then we see Jassi working in her cabin when Tamanna enters.

Jassi: oh come betho Tamanna.

Tamanna: toh Jasmeet main..

Jassi: oh Tamanna you can call me Jassi.

Tamanna: oh sure! Toh Jassi main kehna chahti thi keh material mein budget nahin dekha jaye ga. It should be the best material and supplies.

Jassi: of course Tamanna par collection…..

Tamanna: Jassi I know. Gulmohar nein recently losses recover kiye hain so now we need a very successful show. You please don't worry about that. it's going to be a hit.

Jassi: I know Tamanna aap ka koi bhi collection aaj tak flop nahin hua.

Tamanna: aur yeh bhi nahin hoga. I promise.

Jassi looks satisfied and Tamanna confident.

To be continued…………

Thanks for reading!

great starting 😆
please contiue soon 👏 👏 👏

great start....plz continue soon hun and keep up the great work

Great story!!!!! Can't wait for Purab's entry!!!!
when is that going to happen??
Please do go on!!!! 😊
*Khushi*

wow good story cant wait to see wht happens next! continue soon!

bye

Hera

That was cool naina....I hope ke purab ek kabab me haddi nahin hoga...but the story's going great hon! Please continue!

By Khushi's request I will now be posting all the parts together!!! For now I am only reposting the second part. The third part will be up soon!

I thank all of you who replied to the first part! Only because of you all I am posting this one!

Days are passing by as the preparations for the next fashion show are taking hype. Everyone is excited and doing hard work. Jassi, Angel, Mallika, and Mrs. Suri are in the board room.

Mrs. Suri: toh Jassi kesi tayyari ho rahi hai?

Angel: Well Mom, ab Tamanna hai naa toh achi hi hongi. Us mein taste aur class hai ab joh chotte logon mein nahin hoti.

Jassi looks angry and sad. Tamanna enters the board room.

Tamanna: Well Ms. Anjali sorry for interrupting. Par ek successful show ke liye class aur taste ki nahin balkeh mehnat aur lagan ki zaroorat hoti hai. Anyway, main show ke bare mein decide karne aayi thi. First of all, the designs are almost ready. What about the materials and supplies Jassi?

Jassi: Tamanna meri financer se baat ho gayi hai aaj papers sign hone ke baad within two days material will be ready.

Tamanna: ok then we'll get stuff ready par uss se pehele main ek baar materials dekhna chahongi.

Jassi: sure Tamanna!

Tamanna: ok now what about the publicity?

Mallika: well, hum we'll get boards all around the city. Wese bhi aap ko le kar market mein bohut hype hai.

Armaan enters the board room.

Tamanna: par hamian kuch aur chahiye logon ki puri tarhan se attention grab karne ke liye.

Armaan: well, for that I have an idea. kyun naa hum TV par promos dein? Visual publicity aur media yeh toh janti hi hai keh is successful fashion show ke baad Jassi aur main shaadi kar rahe hain.

Tamanna: oh really? Congrats! Yes this will be a good idea. So let's start working on that.

Everybody leaves the board room while Mallika is still there angry, furious talking to herself.

Mallikaa: shaadi toh tab hogi naa Armaan jab yeh show successful hoga aur who main hone nahin doongi.

It's the end of the day. Everybody is leaving when Tamanna calls Veeru.

Tamanna: Veeru, Jassi kahan hai?

Veeru (very sad): ghar ja chuki hai.

Tamanna: ghar chali gayi? Itni jaldi? Aur tum itne naraaz kyun ho?

Veeru: Arre kuch nahin Tamanna Jassi ka phone aaya tha. Usse yeh file chahiye. Aage late ho geya hai Preetu meri jaan nikaal degi.

Tamanna: Preetu?

Veeru: haan meri behen. Aaj Raksha Bandhan hai. Chodo tum kya samjho gi?

Tamanna: kyun? Kya main insaan nahin hoon? Haan yeh aur baat hai keh mera koi bhai nahin hai.

Veeru: arre aesa kyun kehti ho? Yeh lo yeh tum mere bandh do. Main nein yeh aese hi le li thi. Preetu nein koi aur raakhi li hai par abhi lagta hai keh yeh tumhare liye hi thi.

Tamanna has tears in her eyes.

Tamanna: chalo toh ab tumhari yeh behen tumhara problem solve karrti hai. Lao file mujhe dedo. Main Jassi ko de doongi.

Veeru gives her the file and leaves. Tamanna also leaves for Jassi's house. Jassi opens the door.

Jassi: Tamanna tum?

Tamanna: haan main tumhari file dene ayi thi. Who Veeru jaldi mein tha toh main nein socha keh main hi..

Jassi thanks Tamanna!

Tamanna: no problem! Wese tum akeli rehti ho?

Jassi: nahin actually is waqt sab shaadi pe gaye hain.

Tamanna: tum nahin gayi? Aaj tum office se bhi jaldi aa gayi?

Jassi: nahin kuch nahin!

Tamanna: Jassi tum nein mujhe dost kaha hai naa? Tumhari problem ko kuch kuch main pehchaanti hoon. Mrs. Suri aur Anjali.. Acha tum mujhe shuru se batao apni zindagi ke bare mein. Kese tum nein Gulmohar join kiya aur aaj tak kese?

Jassi: chodo Tamanna!

Tamanna: Jassi ab dost se itna toh kehena hi padega. Aur phir dukh bantne se kam hota hai.

Jassi smile and starts her story since the first day of Gulmohar. She tells her and Tamanna listens carefully. Then…..

Jassi: aur phir Alibuaghmein main Purab se mili. Purab Mehra.

Tamanna looks shocked at Jassi's words. She is now totally lost in thoughts, talking to herself.

Tamanna: Purab Mehra? Nahin…Purab Mehra naam keh aur kitne log honge. Duniya bohut badi hai. Bohut..

Jassi: Tamanna kin khayyalon mein kho gayi ho tum?

Tamanna: k..kuch nahin Jassi tum sunao.

Jassi continues and tells her everything.

Jassi: hamar pyar itne utar chadhav se guzra hai ab jab manzil kareeb hai toh na jane ab bhi mujhe dar lag raha hai. Main..

Tamanna: Jassi…. Don't worry. Everything will be alright. Tumhein bas sab ka dil jeetna hai. Bas!

Papaji enters the room.

Papaji: Jassi beta… aap?

Jassi: papaji yeh Tamanna hai. Gulmohar ki designer aur meri bohut achi friend.

Tamanna: namaste!

Papaji: namaste betaji!

Tamanna: acha Jassi ab main chlati hoon.

Papaji: par beta bohut raat ho gayi hai. Tum yehin reh jao aaj.

Tamanna arre nahin Uncleji. Aap to itni takleef nahin..

Jassi: kya takleef? Tum run sakti ho.

Tamanna: Nahin Jassi main..

Papaji: to phir aap akele nahin jayengi beta.

Tamanna: par Uncleji..

Papaji: naahin beta aap hamare ghar mein hain aur hamari zimmedari hain toh hamara farz banta hai. Ya toh aap yehin ruk jao ya phir main aap ko chodne jaon ga.

Tamanna: theek hai Uncleji. Main yehin reh jati hoon. It's the new fresh morning! Jassi and Tamanna wake up. Tamanna is shown very restless. She is having very strange feelings. She talks to herself.

Tamanna: aaj itni becheni kyun ho rahi hai? Jese who mere aas paas kahin hai? Kyun?

Jassi and Tamanna go downstairs. Somebody's feet is shown and a plane landing. A few people say welcome to him but his face is not shown yet.

There, at Jassi's house…

Bebe: aao beta Billu bata raha tha.

Tamanna: aap Bebe ho naa aur aap Auntyji, Jassi ki Mama. Namaste!

Mama: Namaste beta! Aao nashta kar lo.

They take breakfast.

Tamanna: thankyou Auntyji! Bade dinon ke baad itna acha khana khane ko mila. Thankyou so much! main ab chalti hoon.

Tamanna touches Bebe's feet.

Bebe: yeh kya kar rahi ho beta?

Tamanna: Bebe bohut dinon ke baad kisi bade ke paon chune ka moka mil raha hai main is ka pura fayda uthana chahti hoon.

Bebe smiles: Jeeti raho beta!

She touches Mama's and Papaji's feet too. As she's leaving the house she becomes more restless talking to herself.

Tamanna: kyun aesa lag raha hai keh us ke kadam mere kareeb aa rahe hain? Kyun main usse yehin kahin aas pass mahsoos kar rahi hoon? Kyun?

Nandu enters the house.

Nandu: Jassi, Purab aay hai.

Jassi: Purab?!

Tamanna looks at them shocked!

To be continued…

ok cool cant wait for the third part! hope you post it soon!
bye
Hera

Originally posted by: Aabha

That was cool naina....I hope ke purab ek kabab me haddi nahin hoga...but the story's going great hon! Please continue!

Hi, Actually Purab wasn't kabab mein haddi, it was Armaan who came in between Purab and Jassi. But that is another whole issue!

Thanks!