AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Why are so nervous . It's really a great start .

Why I find Avni/Ananya behind this murder 😆😆 That too u mentioned NGO
Hey this is not a drabble . Drabble is a part of a story where characters grief/ emotions are put in form of small poem right . If I'm wrong sorry 😔


Thanks! I am glad the start has been appreciated. But like television industry serves the initial episodes of a story as good and unique but they degrade it with time. -_- I dear exactly this. I am confident of the concept but how well would I be able to execute it and till when, is my concern.

About Avni/Ananya's involvement is concerned, I cannot answer that. You will have to read to find out.


You don't need to be sorry about anything. You are partially (most of it) correct. Just to lay down a couple of facts before I say something, find the below definition as per Wikipedia :

A drabble is a short work of fiction of around one hundred words in length. The purpose of the drabble is brevity, testing the author's ability to express interesting and meaningful ideas in a confined space.


So drabbles aren't just poems and not just to express grief and emotions of a character but a short crisp piece of writing with a limited word count.
Drabbles are used in different context across the forum. One of which is what you stated and the other is series, where a story is split into chapters with each of a word limit of hundreds.

I, for one, write something on the lines of pentadrabble. Where each chapter consists of approx 500 words. I know, pretty confusing. But it's only until now. Because there's this new found information, the literature team has strictly come out stating that only write-ups with a word count of maximum 100 words is eligible as a "Drabble"

So, bottom line of the story is that, I better rename the title. Not a short story though, because I won't be able to wrap this story within 10 chapters. I guess so! It is a Fan-fiction now, with each chapter consisting of a word limit of 500 words approx!


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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: avneil2

Superb,its awesome.waiting for avni entry.I think murder ki avni ka haath hai.cont soon.

Thank you! I so wanted to get Avni's entry in the previous chapter itself but it did not happen.

Anyways, read to find out more. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lenageorge

Wow atlast u decide to write one.

So happy😃
I'll surely comment on this once I read it


Yup, At last I did ;)

Thank you! Comment when you get the time to :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: docritu99

Good start.!
I love to read mysteries.!
Continue this.!

I think its going more towards human traffcking..
The saved/victimised girls of sexual abuse from NGO are sold or something like that. Basically NGO is just the pretence for this ugly work.

Make Avni Reporter and dighing the case on her level. That would be fun. Avneil can together solve this.

Ohkay i have said enough.! Go acc to ur story. But plz do write.


Thank You! I am working on the next chapter anyways.
LOL! You have got a creative mind. But as I need to, I cannot disclose if the story travels the same path as you think it does.

My lips are sealed. Though, I am surely gonna write more. There's a reason why I enjoy jotting such a write up, with short chapters :P It's easy and quick.

Thanks again ! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Intriguing!

Ananya outwitted Supercop Tillu😆😆

The mystery is only getting deeper and deeper!! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I cant believe You're writing for avniel as well, how fantastic. And this too, Anaya always intrigues me and the you characterized them both here is very interesting, can't wait for more. Terrific job.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This story has me hooked! I'm glad it's a whole new take! Please update soon and please finish the story too! It would be a bummer if you left it hanging! The writing is great too!
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