RikaraSS-AANkhon ki Gustakhiyaan-SeasonII-Mumbai Chapter-Parts 3&4

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So people, I am back with a weekend treat, two updates.
Actually it became too long and I couldn't figure out where to break it.
Also, in true IB tradition, I have a new entry in the SS. I am sure you all will love her, I am imagining someone like Farida Jalal for her character. So, enjoy!

Aankhon ki Gustakhiyan Season II Mumbai Chapter
Part 3 and Part 4

Gauri was content. Life had fallen into a rhythm she very much liked. Three months had passed since her last conversation with Omkara about continuing with her studies. After that, he had disappeared for two days informing her that he had some work out of town. She missed him terribly, although they spoke on the phone 6-7 times in the day. When he returned, he was accompanied with a middle-aged lady who had a serene face only saints are capable of.

Gauri, meet Divya Ma, your tutor', said Omkara. The lady smiled at her, Gauri was already spell-bound, she touched her feet and Divya Ma hugged her. Your place is in my heart, just like my Omkara', she said.

Gauri was confused, Aap Omkaraji ko pehle se jaante hain?' To this, both Omkara and Divya Ma broke into laughter and Omkara hugged her just like he hugs Jhanvi Ma.
Yes, she home-schooled me as well, and Shivaay and Rudra. She is the best guru in the world' said Omkara.

Gauri who was known for her pitter-patter had no words, she was in shock, first she couldn't believe Omkara would get HIS OWN guru to tutor her, then the fact that all three Obros were home-schooled by her, so she could also turn out like them, a class apart. Whilst Gauri was in her reverie still...Omkara broke the silence.

Divya Ma you take some rest and we can start tomorrow with Gauri's lessons'. Omkara then took her to the Guru Quarters in a secluded part of OM she had occupied long time ago, Omkara had instructed his staff to fix it with all modern amenities and refurbish with new furniture and flowers, whilst he was away to fetch Divya Ma.

The next day they had started the lessons and as fate would have it, both of them struck it off like match and fire. They were unstoppable. In Gauri, Divya Ma had found a spark of life, a lust for learning, energy that was unhindered, and love, that had no depth, there was no bottom to this ocean. She was very happy that her Omkara had found Gauri, no one else, could have brought him out of his shell, like Gauri could, when the time comes.

Shivaay and Rudra had barged into their first class itself, hugging Divya Ma and laughing and smiling like there was no tomorrow. I cannot thank Omkara enough for finding you, and bringing you here to school Gauri. Thank you Gauri, bcoz of you we have her back' said Shivaay whilst holding Divya ma by her shoulders and Rudra was playing with her saree like a little kid. It felt like tears of joy were brimming in Rudra's eyes and a strong sense of pride and adulation in Shivaay's eyes. Why did you leave' complained Rudra, do you have any idea how much we looked for you?'

My work here was over, there were others who needed me Ru, so I had to go, had I told you guys where I was going, you would have followed me and never let me leave, so I had to do it that way' explained Divya Ma.

I had detectives looking for you everywhere. How did Omkara find you?' quizzed Shivaay
He knew where I was. I had retired to the ashram and didn't want to come, but Omkara insisted that he will have no one but the best guru for his Gauri, so I had to break my resolve for him.' explained Divya Ma with a guilty look.

See, Shivaay bhaiya, I always knew O was her favourite. But she never admitted' Rudra complained again, after all he had all the right.

Shivaay, you know the truth, don't you?' Divya Ma looked at Shivaay expectantly.
Of course Ma, you don't need to explain anything. Ru is always jealous of no matter of what, such a baby he is' said Shivaay, Ok, we will not disturb the lesson anymore, carry on, see you late Ma.' With that Shivaay left, taking Rudra with him who didn't look like he was planning to leave at all.
After this, all other members of the family had visited them that day, to say hello, pay their respects and greet Divya Ma. It seemd like everyone in OM loved someone unanimously after Daadi, and that was Divya Ma. Even Pinky aunty surprised Gauri by hugging Divya Ma like a long lost friend.
Gauri had so many questions brimming in her mind. She wanted to know so much about Omkara's childhood, his life, but gradually she will quiz Divya Ma she thought. For now, she wanted to get on with the lessons.

And so, the rhythm of life had taken over.
Shivaay, Daadi and Gauri were the early risers in the house; they were up when the first rays of sun hit the earth. Shivaay to prepare breakfast for the family, which he did since he was 16-17 every day, when he was in OM. Daadi woke up to do morning veneration of the sun and puja thereafter and Gauri out of habit, but now also to join Daadi in the morning rituals. She would shower, venerate the sun, water the tulsi and then join Daadi for puja, they then did aarti and distributed Prasad to the whole family. She would then go to her lessons with Divya Ma.

Although OM had 100s of servants milling around, food preparation was sacred to the family, and so each meal was personally prepared or atleast supervised by one family member.

Jhanvi Ma and Pinky Aunty were responsible for lunch, Gauri for Tea time and Anika and Daadi were jointly responsible for dinner. Gauri and Anika were both amateur cooks, and had added responsibility, Anika was running the Aniri Orphanage chain supported by Gauri when she could; and Gauri was studying. So, Gauri was given the tea time responsibility, which involved just snacks and mostly only the ladies of the house, sometimes joined by Ru baby who liked being pampered by all ladies. Anika was learning to cook from the expert herself, and her best friend Daadi, so they would prepare dinner together where Anika was developing a nuanced approach to food-making. She also got to get a deeper insight in Oberois life and her favourite topic SSO, spending time with Daadi.
And Daadi couldn't be happier, she made sure she spent her mornings with Gauri and her evenings with Anika, her two favourites in the house, towards whom she had a bias, all were aware of by now. And the Obros came a very close second, she couldn't choose between them, so they were grouped together as usual.

This morning, Gauri woke up as usual and after her morning rituals, had just started the puja with Daadi, when Daadi insisted that Gauri sing a bhajan for her. Gauri tried to refuse saying that she didn't want to wake up the household but Daadi wouldn't listen, she told Gauri that she was feeling anxious and wanted to hear a bhajan. To this, Gauri had to give in, and started singing. Shakti was in his room meditating, when he heard the most beautiful, mesmerising voice shatter his concentration. He got up to find the source of the voice and ended up in the puja house to find Gauri singing and Daadi, swaying with her eyes closed, mesmerised. Shakti, involuntarily, joined them and sat down and started swaying. Tej was jogging in the back garden when he heard the most soothing voice coming from the house. His feet just started moving towards the source without having any instructions from the brain.

Omkara woke up with a smile on his face, to the sound of a soulful song which sounded familiar and checked on the side for Gauri but she wasn't there. Omkara got up and made his way towards the sound.

By now, the bhajan had ended, all bowed to the deities, and Gauri took Daadis blessings and offered her Prasad. She then took Shakti's blessings and offered him Prasad Shakti Uncle' she said.
Thank you beta, but what wrong have I done? Are you punishing me for being Pinky aunty's husband? pleaded Shakti taking the Prasad.
Nahin, humne kuch galat kiya? Quizzed Gauri, confused.
What do you call her? He pointed towards Daadi
Daadi' said Gauri, even more confused, this was the most obvious Q&A in the world
This is partiality beta, if she is Daadi, how am I Shakti uncle?' said Shakti, I would really like it if you call me Chote Papa. Can you do that?'
Chote Papa' Gauri said and hugged him, tears brimming in her eyes.
Thank you beta, for being my daughter' Shakti hugged her back.

Four pair of eyes were watching this play out from afar, full of pride but also jealousy.

Jealousy, in case of Tej. He had come to love his Gauri beta ever since Chulbul days, but he couldn't admit it even to himself. The way Chulbul had proven to be Omkara's friend and protector, was endearing. After that, Gauri had saved Om from Buama and Svetlana which Tej himself couldn't do for his son. He will never admit it even to himself, but Omkara was his weakness, and when he was in coma, Tej was dying every day watching his son like that. But Gauri was strong, she had some strange belief that Omkara will come back to them, she never left his side and she was successful in waking him up. Tej felt indebted to Gauri for life, and he was dying to hear Papa' from both Gauri and Omkara. He knew he didn't deserve them, but a man can hope, cant he?

He had a new resolve in his eyes, It will happen' he thought Gauri will bring me and Omkara close, I am sure. And I will do anything and everything for that to happen'. With that he walked in the direction of puja house, Where is my Prasad Gauri?' Gauri smiled and offered him Prasad, taking his blessings. Daadi and Shakti were awe-struck, she couldn't believe it, Tej, of all people, was in the puja house, asking for Prasad!'
Tej? Tu? Quizzed Daadi
Nahin maa. This is someone else, a changed man, I couldn't help it, Gauri's voice dragged me here, I don't know what happened? Explained Tej guiltily, after all he had to think of some justification even for himself.

And they were not the only ones, Omkara standing far away, couldn't believe that Tej was in the Puja house. He was already full of pride with what happened with Shakti, and now this?
How much more happiness can Gauri give him?' thought Omkara,' what had he done to deserve this precious gem? Well, whatever it was, he certainly deserved a reward for deserving her' and with a smirk developing on his face, Omkara walked to the puja house.

END

So guys, what will Omkara do now, to reward himself?
Why were the Obros home-schooled?
And what is it about his childhood that Shivaay and Divya Ma were discussing? Will Gauri find out?
Keep reading to find out, and leave comments.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First thank you for
This weekend gift
I loved tej part
Th story ils getting more ans more interesting
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Thank you for the wonderful weekend treat :D
Loved it
gauri slowly brought everyone together, ther bubbly nature and pure heart are the reason that everyone loves her
Hopefully Tej and Om will brought closer by her
Wonderfully written
Update soon :D
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I have already read it
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This was sooo good...
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This was sooo good...
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Thank you so much for this wonderful piece of writing
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