Chap 14 on Pg 136 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF - Page 30

Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

Please update soon Chits❤️

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Thanks again my dear, yet again you are really generous with your praises...

Firstly thanks for letting me know that you weren't aware of the Indian geography, this is really an insight for me, as i expected all my readers to be aware of these facts, silly me 😆

Speaking of the show, teh less said the better IMO ... yes you are right, there was no heart to it, the costumes i dont even want to go there or i mind need a blunt knife to slit my writs, why blunt because it will cause more pain 😡

They had a beautiful story, excellent cast IMO...Ritu Shivpuri as Indrani was magnificent. They shud have dressed her up as one, they missed out on an extra ordinary story ... hence why i am writing this.

Barun as Advay taht too tek bearded version of the first two weeks, he was exceptional ...enigmatic , just OHH LAAA LAAA !!! I fell for his charms in the promos, especially teh temple promo and the Ravan dhahan promo, had they stayed true to that plot and that set up ... it would have been explosive. BUT NO ALAS !!! Chalo koi nahi ... I am trying to make up for the loss... this story is a whisper from my frustrated heart. 😆😆

AS far as painting a pic of India is concerned, i am going to do full justice to it, i love reading about new places and love imagining how it looks etc, so i also love writing about places...as it is the container in which the story flows. It tells the reader what to imagine and how to imagine it. If i jsut say temple makes no sense, but if i said it has a dome or if its a pyramid structure what we call Gopura in South ... and has saffron flags flying from teh top ...now that paints a better picture.. so i am descriptive and i love writing in detail... Thanks a lot for appreciating it, tho sometimes i have to hold the horses and not get carried away or i can write pages and pages on nature and surrounding 😆😆

I wrote Mumbai marine drive in my other FF, and a lot of my readers came back to say how well they cud imagine it, one of them even said it reminded her of her first outing with her husband. SO thats the aim, to be able to strike a chord while doign justice to teh story and the place it is based in.

WRT Allahabad, OMG its incredible i have been told, never been there, want to one day, it has teh Sangam ...wehre Ganga, jamuna and SArasawti merge, it one of cities where Kumbh Mela takes place. Now that you have brought all fo this to light, i think i am going o write about all this in my story...i will give a Kumbh Mela, a ganga aarti ... i have been to harifwar, trust my Ganga aarti is an extraordinary experience , really surreal ... if you ever can make it, do take a short trip to north, its exceptional ..and once you see teh Ganga nothing really matches. I have taken a dip in teh Godavaru too at Nashik...Godavari too is a beautiful river... but Ganga... she just brought a tear to my eye...she made me so emotional, hence why i keep mentioning her all the time. I fell in love with her, this is a love affair with Ganga that is pouring out on these pages. They way she gushes, non stop, the sound, teh speed ... its just other worldly experience, I felt she is truly alive... and we filled a bottle at Haridwar, teh waters looked really murky ... but yet we filled it nevertheless... and in a week, the silt settled down , trust me the water now is cleaner than bottled water...tahts how pure she is ... and my grandmother has a bottle she filled in 1985, we use it regularly for pooja... it has never had any worms or doesnt even smell... its so pure to drink even after almost thirty years...so these stories abt teh Ganga are true and she is truly Pure ...

But thanks again love, i will try and get as descriptive as i can and include as much of geography and cultural relevances as i can in this story as it fits with the premise.

as far as Desi dom, dont worry i wont let you down in that dept as well...😆.. to imagine our HOT ROD ADVAY as Desi DOM !! OMG i need my FAN !!! and my COOLER

Oh you did ask me in ur earlier posts if Advay will have a red room of pain, was it you who had asked me? I think it was ? So i hope my chap three where he assess Chadnini;s room shud have answered most of ur questions 😆😉

Also may i ask whats your name , if you dont mind that it .. .. Rosemary and thyme is an extraordinary

combo, never tried Mango and thyme,...now seriously want to do so 😳

as always ❤️ Chitra

Please read it on wattpad, link is on first page 😃

Please read it on wattpad, link is on first page 😃

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Hello all ...

Okay guys, I hope u like this update...sorry abt the delay, it wasnt meant to be this long, but Kya Karein i got carried away ...trying to fulfil the heart felt requests of some of you ..

Anita ji @mangothyme ... i went back and wrote about the temple, the floating diyas, a glimpse into the Ganga aarti and the diyas in the ganga jsut for you my darling.. i hope you like it...😃

There are some cheesy parts in this chapter, which i am loving by the way...however if you find some bits too cheesy my good friend Juhi @ amortentia is to be blamed, ... an innocent convo between Juhi and me about onion bhajias resulted in a totally unexpected sensuous cheesy discussion between Advay and Chadnini 😆😆😆, i loved it tho ... and the fact that how different things mean different in different language.. So thank you Juhi for inspiring the entire dinner conversation.

Finally Mahim mera Bachcha ... TBH i dont know how old you are, but there was a five year old which demanded me for lengthier updates, like a kid at a candy store...and so Mummy Chitra had to cater for that little Bachcha within you...so here is a lengthy chapter... i added some extra bits only to give it more length, hope you relish it ... but Mummy is strict tooo...wont be giving treats like these every time...so you will have to wait again till i give you another long lip smacking lengthy treat😳🤗

Finally about the kids from the slums, that is from my own real experience at Rishikesh, it is heart breaking to watch little kids sell Diyas, but kya karein, thats the truth of the day, tho we did buy all thier Diyas, that evening...kaahe ke my hubby is a softie like that😳

Hope you guys enjoy it, do let me know what u think... i will try and reply to all of you as quickly as i can, if not then let me take a moment her to thank you all for your wonderful words and for willing to join me on this journey...your words truly mean a lot and truly make me feel fulfilled and accomplished in my own little way. 🤗

❤️ Chitra

Originally posted by: 2filmy

my bad luck
your updates are so enticing
yet I have to sit with books

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

Ha ha!! Mine also! Exam tomorrow!!😕