Arshi Ishveer Ranjan Payash FF - Race

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This is for the Payash readers. Please give a detailed comment & mention your fav scene & fav couple.

Part 16

Akash to Sheetal: I am going to have my lunch now? If you want to join me, then we can have it in the canteen.
Sheetal: Sure.
Akash & Sheetal go to the canteen to have their lunch.

Ranveer & Ishani are having their lunch.
Ranveer: I think we need to take mom to our house. As soon as Ranvi & Gunjan sets everything right, they will join us.
Ishani: There are 2 ways. The one way is either Sheetal has to mend her ways or she should leave.
Ranveer: Right. I am confident that Ranvijay & Gunjan will set everything right. Only if Arnav & Khushi gets to know the reality of Akash & Sheetal, they will be able to bring them to track. Leaving that aside, I need to talk to you about our personal matters.
Ishani: Do you want to talk about starting our family?
Ranveer: There are so many things to talk about. I don't know what is in your mind but as of now, we need to spend more time and understand each other to have kids.
Ishani: Thank God, you said that. If you had talked about that, I would have said the same.
Ranveer: Shall we go to a movie today? I have brought movie tickets.
He takes out the diamond necklace and said, "This is for you."
Ishani: Wow, it is beautiful.
Ranveer: It is waiting for your neck.
Ishani wears it.
Ranveer takes her pictures & selfies with her. Ranveer, Ishani & Dimple go out for the movie.
At Goa
Arnav & Khushi spend time at the beach.
Arnav: Is it fine if we do a little bit of jogging?
Khushi: Yes, it is fine.
Arnav: If you get any problem, stop me.
Khushi: Sure.
Both do jogging at the beach. Khushi is quite comfortable.
Later on, both of them go to the seashore and splash water on each other. The background song is
Jo pehle hua naa.
Ab hone laga hai.
Dil humko Jaga kar
Kyun sone laga hai.

Ye ishq hai yaa kuch aur hai
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hai
Ye ishq hai yaa kuch aur hai
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hai
Ho isko main kya kahun
Tu hi bata.. Tu hi bata..

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..

Tujhko dekh kar,
Tujhko dekh kar
Aankhein muskurane lagti hain
Tujhko mill kar
Dhadkne gun-gunane lagti hain
Aisa hota hai kyun?
Mujhko khabar nahin
Pehle kabhi hua, aisa asar nahin!

Jo mere dil ke paas hai
Naye jaadu naye ehsaas hain
Jo mere dil ke paas hai
Naye jaadu naye ehsaas hain
Ho aise mein kya karun
Kya karun tu hi bata

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..

Both go to the hotel room.

Arnav: I hope you are not tired after jogging.
Khushi: Not at all.
Arnav: I think it is a good sign and your system has completely accepted La's heart. We will go for the check-up as soon as we go back.
Khushi: When your love is there, I don't have to worry about anything else. I want to live every moment with you as long as I live. I don't know how long I will live.
Arnav: Don't ever say that again. Neither will you die before me nor will you die after me. We will live and die together.
Khushi: I'm saying this because there is nothing like the original heart.
Arnav: There is a point in what you say. I will definitely talk to Preity about it.
The next day, Ranveer calls up Ranvi and asked, "What is the plan for today?"
Ranvi: I am thinking of going to Arnav's office with Gunjan to tickle Sheetal's a**e. Gunjan had heard the conversation between Akash & Sheetal but is skeptical about Akash changing overnight. There is a point in what Sheetal says. She told him that it is cos of Payal, he changed his mind.
Ranveer: Yes, that is very important.
Akash & Sheetal go to the office.
Ranvijay & Gunjan follow them discreetly and reach the office before them.
Payal comes by rickshaw. She does not have the change for Rs. 500/-. She goes to Akash's cabin & said, "I don't have change for 500 INR. Can I get the change for the auto rickshaw?"
Akash: How much do you want?
Payal: I want Rs.50/-
Akash gives her Rs. 50 and said, go and give him that money. See that you carry change next time. (He sees Sheetal peeping to hear their conversation.)
Payal gives the money to AD & sends him off.
Sheetal gets irked. Ranvi & Gunjan are amused at that scene.
Payal starts her work. Gunjan sits next to Payal. She asked, "So, you are Payal right?"
Payal: Yes
Gunjan: Your designs are very attractive. From where did you learn?
Payal: From your company in London.
Gunjan: That is really great. I want to learn from you. Can you teach me when you have time?
Sheetal storms in. She said, "I am an expert in graphic designing. You won't get a better trainer than me."
She opens her laptop & shows the designs. Gunjan & Payal are amazed. Sheetal then sits next to Akash at the cabin.
Akash: So, Sheetal, did you get rid of Arnav sickness? If yes, then we can start everything on a new leaf.
Sheetal: You can forget your Khushi but I am Sheetal. I've always got what I want.
Akash: Fine, I think I shouldn't be giving a second chance to this relationship.
Sheetal: First of all our marriage is incomplete. We have not married as per the rituals. No pheras, nothing.
Akash: Oh yes, thanks for reminding.
Sheetal leaves.
Gunjan: Yes, that is what I've sensed.
Ranvi: If there is a CCTV, we can get the proof.
Gunjan: Yes, we have the camera.
Ranvi & Gunjan go to the security room & take the backup of Akash & Sheetal's conversation. Arnav & Khushi return from Goa. Everyone welcomes them. Both go to Dr. Priety for the checkup. Arnav is apprehensive. Dr. Preity comes out & said, "Khushi is fine. Her system has completely accepted the heart."
Arnav: What about her lifespan?
Dr. Priety: She will live long but she should not be stressed too much. It is like that with every human.


At RM
Ranvi & Gunjan meet Akash & said, "Even now nothing is lost. You can still separate."
Akash: Yes, I did give an offer to Sheetal but she didn't accept it. I have recorded her confessions in my camcorder
Ranjan: That is great.
Akash plays the camcorder. Sheetal had confessed that she had caused the gas leakage & had almost killed Khushi. He said, "We should hand her to the police."
Gunjan: Let Arnav bro & Khushi bhabhi come from the honeymoon. We need to show it to them.
Arnav & Khushi come home after the check-up.
Ranvi, Gunjan & Akash call everyone down. Ranveer, Ishani, & Dimple also come to RM hall.
Ranvi & Gunjan play the video & Sheetal's confession in the camcorder. Arnav had secretly called the police. They came to RM and arrested Sheetal.
Akash to Arshi: I apologize to you for my wrongdoings. Please forgive me.
Arshi: It is fine.
Akash to all: After I saw Payal, I decided to step back in Arshi's married life.
Dadi: I had purposely asked for a kid from you and Sheetal cos I knew her intentions. We all know Payal. She is Manorama's daughter.
Dadi calls Manorama.
Manorama: How did you remember me?
Dadi: I want to tell you that Akash's wedding with Sheetal was a contract marriage & that too without any rituals. He is single. Can you find a match for him?
Manorama: Akash & Payal liked each other since childhood. I have Payal in my mind for Akash.
The next day, everyone goes to the office. Payal was about to leave at the end of the day.
Akash holds her hand & asked, "Do you remember the time that we spent in our childhood?"
Payal: Yes, I do remember. But it was fate that separated us & by the time I came back you had married Sheetal.
Akash: I know a lot of things has happened. I had loved Khushi but Sheetal had misled me because of which I left Khushi at the mandap. She told me that Khushi can't conceive & bro won't give us money. But when he held Khushi's hand, I realized my mistake & wanted to have her at any cost. But when I saw you, I decided to move on with you. My love for you had evoked. I love you a lot. Will you marry me?
Payal: You talk to my mom. If she is ready, I will marry you.
Akash: My dadi already talked to your mom. We need to go to RM. Aksh & Payal go to RM.
Dadi: Payal is the right girl for you.
Manorama to Payal: Are you willing to marry Akash?
Payal blushes.
Both the family conduct Akash & Payal's engagement, mehendi.

The next day, Akash & Payal get married.
A year later,
Arnav & Khushi get one boy & a girl as twins.
They are named as Aarav & Arshi.
Ranvi & Gunjan get a girl. They name her as Dhara.
Ranveer & Ishani are blessed with a boy. They name him as Ishveer.
Akash & Payal get a girl child. They name her as Akyal.

All of them live happily ever after


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Beautiful update...i like this version more...
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payash ending was also nice.sheetal doesnt want to change n wants arnav.she can never change.good that akash n ranjan exposed her n called the police too.akash apologizing to arshi was nice.good to see dadi asking manorama's help to find a girl 4 akash n manorama suggesting payal.Payash conversation was nice.Payal is a sweet traditional girl who will say yes only if her family agrees.thats nice.when manorama asked payal abt akash payal blushing was sweet.wish urmila was also there in the scene.happy that payash got married n all of them had kids
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thanks 4 da pm! nice update - great end
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wow amazing update and ending loved it thank you.
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The confidence not b4 me nor after me was the dialogue which touched most nice updy

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