Ishra ss-bawri piya ki, pt 9 on pg 133 updt on Jan 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi everyone, finally I am here to updt the first part of this story. This part is dedicated to lovelydivan, who requested me to start this story. So here I am, enjoy the first part, but before that have a look at the prologue.


Now, enjoy the part.

PART 1

It was a normal day in bhalla mansion, all the helps were running here and there to make everything perfect before the mighty rkb come down for breakfast. Coz if he found even a little mistake, he won't spare anyone. His little sister, simmi was instructing them to arrange everything when the clock finally stuck eight.

Simmi-jaldi karo, bhai aate hi honge. She said and everyone fasten their work. Within a minute, everyone was standing around his chair setting everything. Simmi and her husband param was standing in a corner waiting for raman to come and take his seat ,so that they can also sit and have breakfast.

Param was looking at his room's door and said -ur brother is late today, mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai.

Simmi-chup chap khade rahiye, u know that he don't like any kind of imperfection in his life. And someone eating before him is an imperfection fod him. Kyun subah subah apni beizzati karana chahte hai. Let him come, then we will eat.she was telling when they saw raman coming down, he was wearing crisp white shirt with black formals talking on his phone.

Raman -haan Mr malhotra, I will there at sharp nine. I want to seal this deal today only. OK then see u in an hour. Bye, saying so he hung the call. He looked around and saw everyone lined up like he like. He smiled and walked towards the dining table. He settled down and param-simmi too sit down on their chairs.

Helps start serving raman breakfast when he glared them. They look at his plate and saw the bread was more golden then usual. He removed it immediately and served him another one. He start eating, seeing him eating simmi-param too start eating.

They had their breakfast in complete silence as raman don't like talking much. Simmi and param were looking at each other elbowing each other to start the convo making a fork fall on the floor breaking the silence.

Raman look at them and simmi said -sorry bhai.

Raman -tell me, what u two want to ask. He said sternly.

Simmi-actually we were thinking to go to Paris for our anniversary, agar aap ticket book karwa de toh.

Raman look at them and said -jitni salary tumhara pati paata hai, usme joh ho sake woh karo. Jyada unche sapne mat dekho. Iss ghar mein rakha hai yeh kam nahi hai, usse jyada umeed mat rakho mujhse. He said straightly and continued eating his breakfast making simmi and param angry. Param was about to say something but simmi nodded in no and said -ok bhai, waise I was thinking ki aapki umar ho rahi hai, u should get married. Waise bhi aaj aapke horoscope mein likha hai, ki aaj aapki mulaqaat kisi aise se hogi jisse aapko dekhte hi pyaar ho jayega, aur woh aapki zindagi badal degi. Toh main soch rahi thi param ji ki cousin hai naa woh pinky, usse bula, she was saying when raman said-tumhe sochne ke liye kisne kaha, aur mere baare mein sochne ka liye toh kisi ne bhi nahi kaha. So stop doing it, sirf apne param ji ke baare mein socho. Aur rahi baat pyaar ki toh raman bhalla, sirf khud se pyaar karta hai. Toh mere liye kisi ladki khojne ki mat socho. Agar khojne ka shauq hai toh apne liye ghar khojo aur mera ghar khaali Karo. Coz I don't like any extra people in my mansion. He said and got up to go when a help banged into him spilling coffee on Raman's shirt.

Help-sorry sir, Aap achanak se uth gaye, he was saying when raman slapped him hard and said -ek toh galti karte ho Upar se mujh par ungli utha rahe ho. Raman bhalla par ungli utha rahe ho, how dare u. Raman bhalla par koi ungli nahi utha sakta. He said and look at his shirt.

Raman -saari shirt kharab kar di.

Help-aap change kar lijiye sir, main dho kar ekdum sahi kar dunga.

Raman -raman bhalla kabhi imperfect cheez use nahi karta. I want everything perfect in my life. He said and take out the shirt. He take out the lighter and burned that shirt. In the meantime, one of the help brought another white shirt for him. He wore it and was going out but stopped and turned. He looked at the simmi and said -inn dono ki aaj ki salary kaat dena, iski meri shirt kharab karne ke liye, aud dusre ki mujhe jala hua toast de kar mera mood kharab karne ke liye. He said and walked out but not before checking himself in the big mirror. He smirked looking at his reflection and said -perfect. And walked out.

Simmi and param look at each other and param said-glad he went, warna iske saamne toh saans lena bhi mushkil hai. Yeh tera bhai pagal hai kya. He said and both went to their room talking.

Simmi-bhai nahi sautela bhai, aur pagal nahi ghamandi. He is proudy. He want everything perfect in his life. I really wish ki uski zindagi mein kuch bahut ho imperfect ho, jisse woh thik nahi kar sake.

Param-par yeh aisa hai kyun.

Simmi-coz our father left her mother just because she lost her legs in an accident. Meri maa bahut sundar thi toh papa ne raman ki maa ko chod kar unse shaadi kar li. Papa use to love us alot and we lived with all whims and fancies but raman and his mother suffered alot because of her one disability. Bahut buri zindagi jee woh aur mar bhi gayi. Tab se hi raman ko sanak chad gayi toh make everything perfect in his life. Usne itna bada empire khud khada kiya, aur maa-papa ko death ke baad mera bhi khayal rakha. Yes he could never left me alone but he never loved me also. I was his responsibility but woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta. Tabhi toh main uske ghar mein hoon par uske dil mein mere liye koi jagah nahi. Issliye toh main chahti hoon ki pinky ki shaadi ho jaaye Raman se, taaki uski saari property hamare kabze mein aa jaaye.

Param-i am also waiting for that day, do saal ho gaye, uska kutta ban kar rehte rehte. Now I want to be his master. Bas kisi tarah usse chalane ki chaabhi hamare paas aa jaaye.

Simmi-aayegi, woh bhi aayegi aur phir hum raman ko Kahin ka nahi chodenge.she said and both laughed together.

On the other hand, Raman reached his office at 8.50 and at nine he was in meeting. The meeting went for about three hours and ended on getting the contract signed.

Everyone congratulated raman while he just smiled and went to his cabin.

He stand infront of the big portrait of his mother and said -dekh maa, aaj tera raman phir jeet gaya. Kaash tum hoti toh dekhti main kitna kamyaab hoon. But aisa nahi hai, tu mujhe akela chod kar chali gayi. But no problem, mujhe kisi ki zarurat nahi. I can live with my success. He said and wore his glares wiping his tears so that noone can see his tears. He called his secretary and asked for his next meeting only to know it's in faridabad.

Raman -ok, I am going faridabad, tum saari details collect karke pahuncho.

Sec-sir, everything is ready, if u allow, toh main bhi chalun aapke saath.

Raman glared her hearing this and said-noone is allowed to sit in my BMW. Understood, cab karke aao. He said and walked out of the office in attitude while his secretary made a face and said -kitna rude hai, thodi si life de deta toh kya chala jaata. Bloody hell. She said and booked a cab for herself.

Raman was driving his car when it start raining.

Raman -november mein baarish, how much I hate it. Mere kapde gande ho jaate hai, meri car gandi ho jaati hai. Wish I can stop this bloody rain. He was saying when his eyes fell on a group of kids jumping and enjoying in the rain.

Raman -sab pagal hai, koi baarish mein aise kaise bheeg sakta hai. It's not mineral water even, he was saying when his eyes fell on a girl who was jumping and playing with the kids. He look at her and couldn't take his eyes off her. She was a very beautiful girl in her early twenties. She was wearing half saree but without the dupatta. Her clothes have stuck to her making her curves look more visible. She was dancing opening her arms feeling the rain while the distance between her blouse and skirt was clearly showing her milky skin. Raman couldn't help but smile seeing this epitome of beauty while she was busy in enjoying the rain oblivious of his gaze.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Ps-165+ likes with long comments for next updt.
Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Fabulous update di
Raman seemed to be really arrogant
But his mother's misery made him so
Simmi and param want his property 😡
This girl must be ishita...guesswork 😉
Lets see what happens
Ty 4 d pm di😛😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
started another story
raman want all perfect
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Nice update.
Raman epitome of perfection.
And simmi param again villains.
Cool.waise bhi unko dekh dekh kr gussa AA rha Hai.
But their plans are wicked.
And the girl ishu he hogi.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome chappy Di
Update soon Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di

Update soon Di


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Sorry for the late reply Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Nice starting..dii
So raman wants everything perfect..
And he saw his miss perfect as simmi told
Simmi n param r negative in this story..updt next part soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Awesome update di
Raman is rude n arrogant
He wants everything perfect
All were scared of him
Simmi is his step sister
Raman n his mother went through a lot which make raman like this
Simmi n param are behind his property
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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