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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

wah itne saare gift

ek do mujhe bhi courier krde


thanks pd ji😳

when ur special ocassion , i send u gift through courier 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update...maaneet grand marriage over following so much gifts from geet's side... maaneet & dadi were ready to go to attend media & Media people were admiring GMSK's elegance & Simplicity ... but NT as a media person was tried to demean geet as khuranas rejected her proposal to be DIL but geet very well handled the situation & with power asked her to get out which all media were awestruck to witness it...after conference when biding adieu geet, loved the cute banters between masti gangs & also their emotional moments... awe geet became bold to think about their SR when maaneet entered in their room but maan asked her to visit to another place so geet called him unromantic which he smirked it... oh no the old lady had sense upcoming storm in their life which geet prayed god to bless maan & her family & same as maan... geet was surprised & happy to see her dream tree house gifted by her husband... wow maaneet enjoyed their SR & became DO Dil Ek Jaan... hope to see their some comfort life before any storm...excited for next... thanks for pm..!!


thank u so much dear..😃
so lovely comment dear😳
gift for maan also 😳
let see , storm destroy their life or giving anything to them 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: VSai2008

Part 50

Very nice update
Finally they got married
Thank God that Sam is out of picture now
She totally deserved it
Now pammi is left, take good care of her later
Waiting for maaneet to start their married life
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late reply


thank u so much dear 😳
yes sam out of picture but few parts only 😉
no worries😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

When can I expect an update ?

Waiting


updating 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Note : don't worry about NT ..till now I did not decide yet , she will be tragedy of maaneet life or passing cloud ..after I response only I will decide that character ..even I am thinking about epilogue also.. this last track of maaneet may be I will be taken 10 more parts finish my MFS story .. let decide after finish this new track , I continue to next track or conclude to last part ..that ur hand only not mine 😉

Last part scene, i know hot scene , i shifted to blog on last scene only .. sorry for inconviene and i had written because i test myself, if i can write or not.. god and myself only know that when writing time how much i blushed ...☺️

next time , i cannot write dont worry .. even i need time to write like that 😆..

pudhu vellai malai song..by roja film , hold for upcoming part ..😉

ok my note over let continue part 52 wait😳

D'on't judge a book by its cover ..remind this phrase .😛 now continues

Part 52

Thanks for liking and comments , if any grammatical and mistakes in this part , I am sorry and sorry for late update

Khurana construction

KC always hot place right mainly for employess of KC ,everyday they were feeling as they were hanging like branch of tree in mid of mountain, full credits goes to MD of KC , staff was sincerely doing their work even they have no any work also as they acting that they doing their work sincerely , they wont lose their job and angry face of their boss.

Conference room..

A middle age man shouting in conference room but he is not employee of KC, he wore three piece of coat , his attitude resemble as he is owner of any company in delhi.

Man: Mr. Adithya why ur silent , I am asking u , why u cancelled my project contract with angry face

Adi: Mr.singhana, this is our boss decision, cancel ur every project contract with calm face .

Singhana: no I am not accept ur boss decision.i will meet u in court with warning tone.

Adi smirked face : court ...

Singhana seeing his smirked face and he knew very well , no one can touch KC reputation, if anyone try to spoil KC reputation that people only get bankrupt ..that was power of KC or say Khurana power.

Outside Building

Three BMW car enter in huge building , bodyguards step down from first and last of car and one of the guards quickly open middle of car door and KC boss step down ..boss enter in KC building as everyone alert their boss enter in KC empire ..staff wishing with full respect , but boss not care anyone wish ,straightly enter in conference room..

Singhana and adi head turn look at person and adi smirked look at singhana face while singhana face clearly shown his fuming seeing that person.

Singhana : Ms Khurana..with fuming voice.

Yes boss was lady , she wore simple black and slant color printed saree and hooked ears ring in her ears , some bangles in her hand and open hairs look like sea waves ,her sharp eyes applied kajal .. she has beautiful in her simple dress attire and eyes clearly visualize her attitude to everyone .

Lady ignored his harsh voice, her legs step up to mid chair of conference room , yeah boss chair . lady sit in chair like she was queen of place , her leg crossed in front of them . her sharp eyes gestured as now say what u want ask from me

Singhana : Ms. Khurana.. lady showing her hand while stop him to futher word out from his mouth.

Lady: Ms Khurana nahi Mrs Khurana.. address me to Mrs. Khurana with attitude tone.

Singhana signed : Mrs. Khurana , why u cancelled my every project contract with fuming face.

Mrs.khurana: u know very well , why u wasting my time,I have more appointment to caugh up while checking mail from her mobile .

Singhana: Mrs.Khurana, plz don't cancel my project..if u cancel my deal, I will be lose my every property and I become bankrupt with begging voice.

Mrs.Khurana: that not my problem, Mr.singhana..

Singhana: plz atleast think about my staffs and their family , after I will close my company, they only suffer more than me... plz u also lady and show any mercy for my staffs welfare

Mrs.khurana smirked hearing his begging and sympathy voice and get up from chair :, iam not running any trust , Mr.singhana. I am running Huge empire , in ur mistake , ur staff suffer that's ur staff fate .yes iam lady that not means, I will show pity for u and ur staff.. clear my place now with bossy tone and left the conference room without single glances to him a while adi was following behind her.

Singhana head bow down and left the KC, employess pity for his state .

Staff 1 : I don't know our boss was arrogant , ruthless person , how much showing attitude and angry to that old man. She is lady but she have no emotion in her life. U know ,Yesterday what happened in our boss cabin with unbelievable face.

Staff 2: what happen with curious voice.

Staff 1: yesterday, I went to boss cabin, one of our staff knell down infront of her as begging don't dismissed him from job but her face has blank..she did not show any pity for him, finally our boss guards throw out from office. Poor guy left the office with crying face.

Staff 2: shhh...u shut ur mouth, if anyone hear our conversation, we also get what he got ..both left the place as leaving one person heart have pain hearing about owner of KC.

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Khurana Mansion

Two months before

Today , my dream was going to fulfil ..today onwards , iam MD of KC . I am owner of Khurana empire

Pammi , u want enjoying ur dream in ur room itself or going KC to reach our dream goal with evily smile.

Pammi: bhai ,ofcourse this is our dream , we want reach that place only we spoiled many of their lifes in this years.. finally we got it bhai..with smiling face..lets go bhai..

Pammi and bhai both left to KC .

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Conference room

Every share holders accept, Pammi become MD of khurana empire .

Pammi bhai: Pammi, go sit ur chair..

Pammi smile to everyone and going to sit , Md chair.

Back to present

MD Cabin.

Mrs.khurana shout : pinky ...

Pinky enter to cabin :yes mam with stammering tone

Mrs.khurana: I already said , no one touch any things from my cabin and u only prepare coffee for me and take care my food items, how many times i told u .why u understand, why peon brought coffee for me rather than u with angry voice

Pinky heared her angry voice as tears flowing in her eyes & (take coffee mug from cabin table) : sorry ,two minutes , I bring my hand made coffee for u.

Mrs.Khurana: hmm

Pinky left the place with teary face

Outside cabin

Pinky cried loudly and one hand touch her shoulder ..pinky raised her face and look at person.

Pinky hugged person: Adi ..with crying voice.

Adi rubbing herback : shhh..dont cry..what happened , why u crying..

Pinky: why maan jiju did it . because of him, we have facing more problem today with choking voice

Adi cupped her cheeks: u know very well, he did everything for his geet.

Pinky nods her head and wiped her tears : I give her coffee and I come back.

Adi : go

Cabin

Pinky enter cabin with coffee mug and placed her cabin with sad face while her legs move out from cabin

Mrs.khurana: Pinky ...

Pinky turn look at boss : yes mam..

Mrs.Khurana sipping her coffee: nice coffee , thanks with emotionless face.

Pinky : no need thanks mam, I made coffee for my sister not for my boss with little smile face.

Pinky left the cabin.


(maan photos hanging in wall )

Mrs.Khurana stand up from her king size chair and touching huge photo frame from cabin wall..

Mrs.Khurana: I hate u , maan.. ur geet hate u...with angry face..

Two months back


(conference room - imagine everyone here)

Before Pammi sitting to MD seat ..and surprise entry in conference room..

Ladies and gentleman ,without KC owner, everyone decided MD of KC..its too bad .

Pammi: geet, what r u doing here.. with angry face.

Geet: I am in correct place, maaji..this is my office and owner of Khurana empire with calm face.

Pammi laughed hystorically : don't say any jokes, I am not mood hear ur silly jokes with taunting tone..

Geet: iam saying right maaji, I am owner and 60 % share holder of KC .

Pammi: what .

Geet : Mr.david , showing duplicate power of attorney and share holder paper copy to everyone .

David s advocate of KC

David : yes mam, Mrs.khurana saying right, she is new owner of KC and she have full right to take any decision .

Pammi bhai: but geet have no share in KC.

Geet smirked : u r wrong , I have 60 % share in my hand .

Pammi: how its possible..savitri maaji only right transfer share to anyone but her health not good to transfer share to geet name with angry face.

David: yes,not only savitriji madam have right transfer share even maan sir also can do it

Paami angry voice: yes maan not here even...

David: pammi mam before their marriage , maan sir transfer his share to Mrs.khurana and Vicky sir, swara mam also transferred their share to Mrs.khurana name.

Pammi shocked face: what ..

Paami bhai: then, what about my sister share ..

David: yes , pammi mam have 5 % share for futhur life but she cannot sell her share to anyone .

Pammi: my foot, 5 % share for me ..this is my company..geet not open her mouth even she did not react anything

Vicky enter conference room : this is not ur company and geet bhabhi is Md of KC.. go to mansion , don't do any drama here.

Pammi grabbed Vicky shirt: u r my son, u must support ur mother rather than u support her (pointed to geet)

Vicky : I am supporting my mother while remove her hand from his shirt

Pammi : this is ur support ..u transferred ur share to her name

Vicky: yes ,I am supporting my mother , she is my mother not u..she was giving mother love not u..

Pammi: u r stupid ... pammi bhai dragged pammi to outside of room.

Vicky: Ladies and gentle man, welcome to new MD , geet maan singh Khurana.everyone wish her , geet just nod her head ..eeryone left the cabin alone geet

Geet caring maan huge photo frame in wall..

Phone ring sound geet come back from past.

Geet switch on the phone: hello, today I am not meet anyone , don't disturb me and don't transfer any call to my cabin..geet switch off the phone.

Geet standing infront of maan photos : today , our third month wedding anniversary after official wedding ..geet look at her cabin no her maan cabin..

Her mind thinking past happy moments with maan.

Before marriage ..

Geet enter maan room with notepad and her eyes searching there and here even though her eyes not caugh his manly body but her heart sensed , he is in room..

Geet: maan, where r u..

Maan hugged her back silently and placed his chin to her shoulder : mishty ,how u found out , iam in cabin.

Geet turned look at maan face while maan held her waist tightly while her pull more to him.

Geet placed his hand to to her heart side : my heart sense , u r near with me.

Maan: really ..then show me..his hand remove kurti from her shoulder and geet snapped his hand from shoulder.

Geet : Nowdays , u behave like teenage love not owner of KC.

Maan: obviously I am not owner of KC , u r queen of my heart so u r owner of KC not me.


(maan cabin)

Geet : really then don't change ur mind.. I love ur cabin, its so modern and huge than my cabin

Maan making sit her in his chair as he stand next with her like he is employee for her : not at all, mam

Geet smirked face: then without ur job , how to manage ur family expenses

Maan: mam, my wife will take care my family needs and my needs also with last word with double meaning.

Geet angry glare for last word : u already married, oh no , so many girls heart broken into several pieces.

Maan: yes mam,but after marriage also I am living like bramachari with pout face.

Geet giggled seeing pout face: so sad, why u living like bramachari life with naughty tone.

Maan sad face: because of my crazy family, they want our official marriage infront of world insake only I am stay away from my wife with long breathe taken .

Geet sad face : really I felt bad for u..hmm , then how many days , u want leave for ur marriage .

Maan: but mam, I have no job ..

Geet: not anymore,today onwards , u r my secretary ..now say, how many days u want leave for ur marriage .

Maan: mam, I need 2 months leave .

Geet mouth open widely : why 2 months ..i think 1 weeks leave enough for ur marriage.

Maan: no mam, one month for my crazy family ritual and other month for ...with dragging tone ..

Geet : for ...with raised eye brow

Maan: my honeymoon but one month not enough for us , no problem we will go second hm after some other day with naughty face.

Geet: Mr.khurana, sorry company not give permission, two months leave for ur marriage with strict face.

Maan: then, I don't need ur job , mam with cute angry face.

Geet suppress her smile and continues : u behave like ur wife only beautiful woman in world, without her, u cannot live .

Maan: yes mam, u r correct, she only beautiful woman in the world, I cannot live without her .she is my angel, my jaan, everything..

Geet : Mr khurana, u making me curious seeing ur finance..

Maan: why not , I show her photo.. and maan take his phone and open selfie app ..

Maan showing phone to geet while maan and geet imagine resemble front camera in phone .

Maan: iam right na, mam, she is my angel.

Geet: u r perfect for her but she seems not like that with chuckling face.

Maan: mam, I think , u jealous with my wife.. she is more beautiful than u ..with grinning smile

Sasha banged to maan cabin and her eyes look at maaneet pohsition as geet sitting in maan chair while maan head bend down to geet face level , seems look like maan showing something to geet .sasha hit herhead said , I know , today also I am halliculating about them..i need check my eyes to doctor while forgot what purpose she come to maan cabin without say anything left the cabin ..

Maaneet laughed loudly and thinking about sasha behavior

Geet getup from chair and making maan sit in his chairs : I don't need ur money pointed his heart , I need little place in ur heart ..that enough for me till my breathe .

Maan pulled her waist and she fallen his lap and maan making her sit in his lap properly : not for little place , my heart , my soul everything for u .

Geet placed her head to his chest and maan cocoon her body in his strong arms : never change ur love with me, never hate me, never leave me .. I need ur unconditional love till my last breathe.

Maan cupped her cheeks with one hand while other hand held her waist : shhh..dont talk about last breathe, my love never change with u , how ur shadow leave u , mishty

Geet smiled weekly : u said that I never leave u , mishty..u broked ur promise , maan .. I hate u ..

*******************

Vicky enter in geet cabin : bhabhi ..lets go mansion, everyone waiting for u

Geet turn look at Vicky :hmmm

Both left to mansion.

Mansion

8 clock

Last two months , geet ka routine life , she was going office early and come to mansion in late night.

Janumaa: geet , come have ur dinner..

Geet: I am not hungry , I eat later ..she went inside without bother about janumaa reply.

Janumaa heavy heart look at geet going to dadi room : why god , why u had written horrible fate in her head , why u snatched her happiness with crying face

Vicky side hug to janumaa: maa , plz don't cry

Janumaa: what wrong she did in her life time , why god gave cruel punishment for her..she forgot her smile , she not mingled with anyone even she did not talk with me properly .

Vicky: yes, maa, bhabhi changed so much ..she not my bhabhi ..he said what he heared staff conversation about his bhabhi.. I want shout them, my bhabhi not ruthless , stubborn, she was sweet bhabhi and child heart person but I cannot shout them..they don't know reality ..we know why geet bhabhi changed

Janumaa: hmm..maan beta, why u left us ,everyone need u , ur geet need u most , last two months she was living like robotic life .

Vicky: I miss u bhai..plz come back .. plz with crying voice.

Janumaa: our maan died ..he not come back us anymore..my son died with heavy crying voice.

( Geet ki babaji mujhe bachao 😭😭😭)

Part end


Next part - click me

Precap

Girl shout man : dont show ur face infront of me..plz get lost ..dont come back my life anymore..i hate u too core..with tears flowing in her angry eyes..

man head bow down insake of guilty and left the place..


if u likes this part plz do likes and comment ..hmm I know guys u were not likes this part .. plz hit like and comment ..then only I know how many dearies angry with me .. yeah u can use angry smiley face also .. I am waiting guys .

Tomorrow , i send pm to everyone

writing ---> Mera massoom patidev and Hey kaise pyaar hai.. almost finished ..

may be tonight or tomorrow morning i will update 😳

Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
😡 I hate U..hate U Hate U Hate u.. what was that ha.. ?? How could U do that?? U Killed maan I m crying..😒 why u do that & how that happen what happen in this 3 months? How maan died ha?? Seriously I m angry on u .. u just married them & now u Kill my maan not even thinking that how maan ki geet live without him.. Eagerly waiting to know what story go further.. do pm me for next part.. really very emotional update.. I m sorry but it's really hurt me...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Maan is dead
Its shocking
Geet had changed herself
Hope Maan will be alive & fine
Will be waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Saddy update so maan is gone but now geet is me of kc pammi did try to take over but masn had already gave his share to geet while Vicky gave his so now geet is the boss but maan is gone he had promised to love her and never leave her side but he left her heart broken and shattered but geet has no choice but fulfill the responsibility what maan left on her Geet had become stonehearted and rude exactly like maan but her emotions also died

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