Originally posted by: Viswasruti
Love's deceit is the theme of this poem ... you expressed it in a dulcet way with the intertwined emotions and in-depth feelings. The hurt that kills the tenderness of the heart in such tempestuous moment which allows the pain and hurt to gush out like a river, to lay down the love to die! It lets you forget what really happened and offers you a distortion of the truth! In last two lines, you chronicled the acceptance of deceit with grace! Wonderful poetic expression Ramya . I saw in this poem the rhythmic outbursts of emotion are spontaneous, unintentional and irresistible too!π
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