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sree07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
This is so good . Wonder what will we get onscreen 😕 You are an amazing writer . At last Neil completed his "adoora kam" 😆 Loved to read such possessive and protective side of Neil . Poore badas nikal diya by kissing her in navel and kam pe lag gaya *ahem ahem*
Off late I can trust only Swetha to blast Juhi when truth comes out . I hope she does the honor .

Thanks dear.

Swetha has been an eye candy these days i guess. 😆

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sree07

@sree07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
Superb
Loved it
Do write more

Sure :) Thanks

Edited by sree07 - 7 years ago

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sree07

@sree07

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: nlisa
THIs was beautiful! I know you said you're uncomfortable with the sex scenes it this did it justice anyway!

Keep writing!

There are some amazing writers in the forum who can pull of romantic scenes really well. Sometimes, mine turns out to be a little too forced so I didn't add much. With time hope I improve. thanks much