RiKara: Drabble ~ Kara Series #11- Romantic-Kara [#12 UPDATED]

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Dedicated to ahista as she suggested this title ❤️

ROMANTIC-KARA

Rudra and Sowmya were giving me goofy grins, even as I chided them, I couldn't help but blush at the idea of going on a date with my Kara.

"Very sanskari, huh, you two. Going on first proper date only after engagement.

"Shut up, Rudra. I said trying my best Omkara impression

"Deka, sowmya. Now, she is starting to sound like O bhaiyya. No sooner she will start talking to us in poetry.

I ignored Rudra and Sowmya as I began try my luck at looking perfect for our date.

"Omkara, this doesn't look like place that is meant for first date. I said sceptically walking beside him into an old, damaged building.

"Shh... Gauri, patience he admonished as he took me inside a dangerously deserted room, best suit for horror movies.

"What is ... I couldn't even complete my sentence as I saw centre of the room occupy beautifully decorated table with candle light and rest of the room holding candles.

"Did you like it? Om asked unsure. I turned to look at Om and passed a smile, "Beautiful, Om. How did you do all this?

"Shivay and Rudra scolded me for making the proposal absurd. So, I thought... he trailed off.

He bit the side of the lips anticipating my reaction. I couldn't help but smile at his cute expression. Sometimes he doesn't seem like the hot tempered and callous Oberoi that he portrays to be. He looks like a small kid untainted by the darks of world. Times like these, when he looks at me like that I couldn't help but fall for this long haired man. I placed my hand on his cheeks and kissed in air. "Omkara, I love you. I said

He gasped, looked unsure as if he was not expecting me to confess first. I am sure Rudra would have fed him with steps of proposal from books and movies. But, conventional traditions don't matter to me, to us. All that matters is that he cares for my happiness and I love him.

"I... hesitated Omkara. I didn't want to force him I just stood there smiling. "Gauri, I love you. He said with a smile.

Later, hours later, on our way back home.

"But, I don't understand why that deserted building and not a restaurant. I asked curiously

"Rudra said it should be somewhere private. He said shrugging

"Means you can book the whole restaurant, not you taking me to a place from a horror movie. I said shaking my head.

"That is not private, Gauri. There will be waiters in the restaurant. Lots of light and eyes. Defenitely not private.

I burst out laughing at his cute explanation. "You are impossible. I mumbled.

@tasnimrodela - Dear how much ever I try I am not able to make this Omkara propose in a extravagant way. It is out of his character. So, as I promised some other story.

#10 FIANCE-KARA

#12 EMOTIONAL-KARA



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Haha..that's true...the kind of characterization you have penned down for this Kara is quite matured..he's not that expressive with rhetorical words..at least not in the matter of proposing someone..so it's more than okay to me to accept him and his way of proposing...cuz I'm already in love with him...and Today's RomanticKara made me go "Aaawww"...sudden proposals are best and you proved it here...loved both of their confession..
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haha...this kara is so cute. made dating arrangement in a deserted place! lovely update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome wow I loved this romantic Kara.
Amazing this series is my personal favourite.
Continue soon.
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Awesome wow I loved this romantic Kara.
Amazing this series is my personal favourite.
Continue soon.


Thank you 😃
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Thanks 😃
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Originally posted by: 123mitul

haha...this kara is so cute. made dating arrangement in a deserted place! lovely update.


Kara's hatke date
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Haha..that's true...the kind of characterization you have penned down for this Kara is quite matured..he's not that expressive with rhetorical words..at least not in the matter of proposing someone..so it's more than okay to me to accept him and his way of proposing...cuz I'm already in love with him...and Today's RomanticKara made me go "Aaawww"...sudden proposals are best and you proved it here...loved both of their confession..


Thank you

Kara is romantic in his own way... I believe conventional things doesn't suit him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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And again Omkara gets cuter day by day
Loved his suprise
Their confession
Wonderful and so real

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