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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow that was different it was passion it was raw hot desire
it had everything the story needed
very nicely done and Happy Birthday dearest🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So having awoken from the RiKaralicious coma this put me into😳, hey Pooru, what's up?😆
Happy belated Birthday! - I wrote you a little something as a gift.

Yaar, how do you create this much steaminess? - it's like a hot sauna. On the show RiKara have their rare moments of heat, but mostly their relation is shown as above all that, as if they aren't humans with basic needs but you always bring them down from such a pedestal in the best most artistic way. you show both their primal sides with such elegance that it renders me speechless. 👏 to your skill, girl!

I love the balance of Gauri's hesitance that fades in the light of Omkara's need and that they both recognise what the other needs and expects in the relationship - it shows a real attempt at making it work.

Do you think you can manage a body swap with Harneet? It would save me hours of heartache.

Love your work as always, thanks so much for this piece.




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishsr

So having awoken from the RiKaralicious coma this put me into😳, hey Pooru, what's up?😆

Happy belated Birthday! - I wrote you a little something as a gift.
Hi Kash 🤗
i am feeling awesome ... Thank you so much for such a wonderful birthday present ... You made so much of intricate effort and the detailing of your characterization was apt ... I loved it.
Yaar, how do you create this much steaminess? - it's like a hot sauna.
☺️ After all its RiKara
On the show RiKara have their rare moments of heat, but mostly their relation is shown as above all that, as if they aren't humans with basic needs but you always bring them down from such a pedestal in the best most artistic way. you show both their primal sides with such elegance that it renders me speechless. 👏 to your skill, girl!
My main point of doing this story was and is that are they not supposed to be husband wife and are husband and wife not supposed to expect a certain something's from each other! #BASICS

I love the balance of Gauri's hesitance that fades in the light of Omkara's need and that they both recognise what the other needs and expects in the relationship - it shows a real attempt at making it work.
Exactly ... Both of them want the marriage to work ... No absurd time leaps or crazy misunderstandings 😆 this rikara is mature and normal where she is anxious and hesitant because of how they married and he wants to consummate because that is when their relationship will mark a beginning ... Gauri has accepted that he is her husband ... And she wants him to claim her willingly ... I will say that time and again that they are husband and wife 😳

Do you think you can manage a body swap with Harneet? It would save me hours of heartache.
Unfortunately I cannot and now I don't even want to ... I am happy to write RiKara for this forum ... Harneet has clearly sent RiKara for a toss 🤪 MAD WOMAN!

Love your work as always, thanks so much for this piece.
Your most welcome ⭐️🤗



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Posted: 7 years ago
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that was insane hot!! Thanks for d PM dear! ☺️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..

It was hot as lava 😳..and the dialogues..soft as feather, so beautiful! <3

That was exactly the contrast I was working for ... A balance between what she is feeling and what he is needing ... Emotions in check.


And happy birthday! May god bless you! ❤️
Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aphrodite26

Wowww... hot... ❤️

Thank you swagata 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

It was so amazingly perfect...it took me few minutes to get over this...hot hot hot..!! That's all I can say..their emotions were so beautifully described...Gauri's insecurities was portrayed well..Omkara being a gentleman never tried to impose himself on her..but she had to give herself for the sake of the love he had for her...her fears were visible..but she overcame those and give a chance to them, to their marriage..loved it..title suited it perfectly...sanskaari Pooru was at her best..hope to see you going like this for 100 more years..happy birthday once again...stay blessed and keep showering us with your blessings (Sanskaari writings)...thanks for this delicious treat..I'm gonna have it once more..couldn't get enough of this...

Tasnim 🤗
A part of me wanted that Omkara gets to know Gauri as a person after declaring her a keep and I really wanted a baffled battled state of his mind ... With that I wanted to see Gauri's emotional struggle to accept life and change as it comes. What I wrote here was their decision to move on and be positive.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nathalie_rs_

This was awesome I swear! Your writing skills are just out of this world. I search on this forum everyday to check for an update from you and I'm not exaggerating... I really do. This was one of the best treats ever. Thank you and happy birthday. God bless you. ❤️❤️

Thank you so much for all the love and support Nathalie ... You know it feels too good to have readers appreciate my work and read it again ... 🤗

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