Oh my goodness! This OS defines perfection! I so loved this. You've beautifully penned it down that I could actually feel all the pain, angst, possessiveness, love, care, in short everything! From Gauri making her first move till the Saathiya moment, this got me hooked up. Loved the cutesy moments, like when she asked him out for a date and his planning for her, loved the way you portrayed Om's commitment issues, from the pool talk with his brothers to him voicing it out fully, loved how you beautifully explained Gauri's love for Om and her helplessness, specially how she stood up by his side. I loved the way you switched over between the past and the present, increasing the suspense and making me more anxious. Om made me cry. He was so helpless. He yearned for her yet couldn't commit because of his issues. I could literally feel his pain. I loved the scene where Gauri gets to know about his drugs and Tej coming there too. Pinky always gets on our nerves though! But anyway this OS was much needed. I always wanted to read something on these lines and having it come from you, is sure a treat! Thank you so much for writing this. You're an amazing writer. This one's in my favorite list already, gonna re-read this soon! And btw, special mention to that Saathiya moment in the end, it was so beautiful!
Much love ❤️
Edited by Naina280599 - 8 years ago
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
