RiKara OS : Only In Your Arms (Story on Drugs & Commitment Issues)

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Speechless !!!!

Wonderful story

Loved the way om's Character was formed

His phobia brilliantly described

Gauri epitome of true love and commitment

ShiOmRu bond was mind blowing

Very true and positive,

Better than the show

Loved how they helped om always

I m happy with epilogue

Always good to know that end is happy

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

WOw such an amazing and emotional story in Rikara loved it so much.

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mitul

@123mitul

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Oh man! This is too good. Excellent! I felt both for them. Great piece of writing.

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

This was so heart touching

Made me so emotional

Gauri n Omkara went through lot

But they overcame everything

Just to be together

Saathiya

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

A beautiful story!

Love how you ran the past and present parallely.

Omkara's character was amazingly brought out. It would have been so hard to write that transitional behavior !

The angst and the pain etched to touch the heart.

I loved Gauri's character throughout.

Of course the brothers who were always there not just for On but also for Gauri!

Brilliant as usual, Lazy.

Had a wonderful time reading.

Thank You!

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Aayushi15

@Aayushi15

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

OMG...

Can i say this is the most wonderful piece of work i have read in a while. So so beautiful.

You have explored the character of omkara so delicately yet beautifully. If gauri actually had entered in omkara's life in place of riddhima, this would be the most wonderful way of taking forward their story. I am glad you made omkara think and act out in impulse of his commitment issues, unlike the show where we saw omkara always hurting gauri with his words and sometimes silence but never the clear reflection of his phobia resulting in that twisted thinking. I so wished it had happened.

But you made me so happy with this story.

Thank You...Thank you... Thank you...

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Ran-Arshifan

@Ran-Arshifan

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

This is superb ya... Drug past and Commitment Phobia are the left out issues in Rikara story. This I want to see in the show. We are waiting for so long. You are the best..❤️ I love all your work. The way you understand Om and Rikara. I have no words... I will give best writing award to you.

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Ann17

@Ann17

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

it took me almost the whole night to complete it.. bt I can't let myself sleep before completing it.. so much emotion together.. pain.. intensity .. love ( unlimited) ..

u just made a master piece on rikara..

excellent writing.. just excellent.. dear..

u r the best of those who write abt rikara

keep writing

stay bless

👏