Sanam Re ...O my beloved...Rosid SS pt8-pg14

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Sanam Re ...O my beloved... Part1 This is originally written on another pair.But I am presenting the Rosid version.Please give detailed comments.

A beautiful village...

Raghuvir Arora entered his house.His wife Sarla brought him tea.
Raghu:I am so happy today.
Sarla:That's nice.But what's the reason?
Raghu:My best friend Santhosh Bharadwaj had called me from London.His son Dr.Siddhanth wants to see India.So he is coming here.He will be staying here for a few days.
Sarla:That's really nice.
Raghu:One more thing he said.He would like Sid to get hitched with our daughter Roli.

Sarla was surprised:Really?Did he say so?
Raghu:Yes.
Sarla:But he has'nt even seen Roli.
Raghu:Ya..but he is sure that our daughter will be cultured and well mannered like us.
Sarla:That's so sweet.So Siddhanth is coming here to see Roli mainly.

Raghu smiled:May be.
Roli heard it standing behind the wall.
Roli:Oh my God..This Siddhanth Bharadwaj will be my future husband?I feel so nervous.

Raghuvir:Roli beta...
Roli:Yes papa..
Roli came there.
Raghu:Papa's best friend Santhosh's son Siddhanth is coming here to stay with us for a few days.
Sarla:And Santhoshji has found you as the life partner for Siddhanth.
Roli became shy.
Sarla:But he should like you.Only then this relationship will get fixed.
Raghu:The way to the man's heart is through his stomach.So make nice food for him.
Roli was shy:Ok.

Roli cooked food.

Siddhanth reached there.
Raghuvir Sarla went to the veranda with a confused face.
Sid:Raghu uncle and Sarla aunty?
Raghu-Sarla:Yes.
Sid smiled:I am Siddhanth ...
Raghu:Santhosh's son?
Sid:Yes.
They became very happy.
Raghu hugged Sid:Welcome Siddhanth..welcome.

They brought Sid inside.Roli hid behind the wall and watched him with a blush.
Raghu:Siddhanth...
Sid:Please call me Sid.The people who are close to me call me Sid.
Raghu Sarla smiled:Sid...
Sid smiled.
They chatted with Sid for some time.
Sarla:Ok...let's have lunch.It's ready.
They all went to the dining room.
Sid started having food.
Sid:It's so tasty.Once in a while only I get to have Indian food.I love it.
Raghuvir Sarla smiled.
Sid:Auntyji...your cooking skill is great.
Sarla:It's not cooked by me.It's cooked by our daughter Roli.

Sid was surprised:Roli?
Sarla:Yes.
Sid thought:Dad sent me here to see Roli.Where is she?I did'nt see her yet.
Raghu:Roli beta...
Roli came looking down.She was shy to face Sid.
Sid saw her face.
He was surprised to see her appearance.
Dressed in Ghagra...simple chain and earrings...tinkling bangles ..bindi...dots near her eyes..long hair plat...her nose ring adorned her.
Sid:You are a nice cook.Food is very delicious.
Roli raised her eye lashes and looked at him slowly blushing.She felt very happy.

She thought:Though he lived outside India he likes traditional Indian food.

After lunch...

Sid:Uncle...I want to see this place.
Raghuvir:But it's not possible to see the whole village in a whole day.
Sid:That's fine.I will be here for a few days.So I will see the rest of the place later.
Raghu:Ok...Roli will show you the place.Enjoy visiting our beautiful Village.

Sid Roli looked at each other.

Roli took Sid out.She showed the area and described it.

chal paDe hain hum aisi raah pe
befikar hue ke ab jaana kahan
laapata hue saare raaste
DhoonDhega humein ye zamaana kahaan


Sid:So beautiful.
Roli:You are brought up outside India.Then how are you able to enjoy the beauty of Indian Village.
Sid:Though I am brought up in a foreign country I am Indian at heart.I love India and it's beauty.It's so natural and green.
She smiled.
She thought:I was nervous how I will adjust with a typical foreigner.But he is a complete Indian.

ye samaa hai kaisa
muskuraane jaisa
dheemi baarishein hain har jagah
ye nasha hai kaisa
Doob jaane jaisa
jaagi khwaahishein hain har jagah



Sid saw a mango tree.
Sid:Wow!I want to take fruits from the tree like you all do.
Roli:Ok.
Roli threw stone at the mangoes.Sid too threw stones and sticks at the fruits.
Some fruits fell down.Both took them from the ground.
Sid noticed Roli eating it licking and sucking it.
Seeing it with a smile Sid too ate mango like that.
Roli felt like laughing.


gazab ka hai ye din
gazab ka hai ye din

gazab ka hai yeh din dekho zara

Sid played with river water splashing water.
Roli smiled.

paani hoon paani main haan behne do mujhe
jaisa hoon waisa hi rehne do mujhe


Roli:You are playing like an innocent kid.

Sid:Ya...I missed all these fun in London.So I want to enjoy what I could'nt enjoy in childhood.
She smiled seeing him enjoy.



duniya ki bandishon se mera naata hai kahaan
rukna Theherna mujhko aata hai kahaan



She showed him the fields.
Sid:My God!I can't walk here.I am scared.
Roli:You are scared?Seriously?I can't believe it.

Why are you scared?It's so simple.
Sid:You are used to walking through this area.So for you its silly.But not for me.
Roli:Don't get afraid like a kid and follow me.

Sid:What?I need to follow you.
Roli:Yes.Follow me.
Sid:Oh no...

Roli walked fast while Sid walked after her slowly and carefully.


ye sama hai kaisa
muskurane jaisa
dheemi baarishein hain har jagah
yeh nasha hai kaisa



Sid:Though scary it's thrilling and interesting.


doob jaane jaisa
jaagi khwaishein hain har jagah



But Roli slipped and was fell down hurting herself.
Sid:OH God!
He lifted her up in his arms.

She felt secure in his arms.
They both looked at each other.


gazab ka hai ye din
gazab ka hai ye din
gazab ka hai ye din dekho zara(Sanam Re).


Sid:Are you ok?
Roli nodded showing pain on her face.
Sid carried her home.Raghuvir and Sarla got scared:What happened?
Sid:Roli fell down.

They became upset.
Sid:Don't worry.I will handle it.
Sid placed Roli on the bed.
Sarla caressed her:Good that Sid was there with you.Otherwise...

Sid cleaned her wound ..put ointment from the the first aid box and bandaged it.


Roli was feeling pain.
Sid:I know it's still hurts you.But it's a minor wound.It will go soon.

Roli felt drowsy.
Sid:But one thing Roli.Now onwards don't be over confident while walking through the field.Understand.Be careful.

Roli was embarrassed.
Raghu:Good that a doctor is here now.
Sarla:Right.Now Sid can look after us and give us the required treatment.
Sid:Sure.
They all smiled.
Raghu Sarla went out of the room.
Roli:Thank you Siddhanthji.
Sid:Don't say thank you.It was my duty to take care of you.

Roli smiled.
She thought:Now itself he considers me as his responsibility. That means he liked me?
Sid:Don't call me Siddhanthji.Call me Sid.
Roli smiled:Ok Siddhanthji...
Sid:What?
Roli:I am sorry Sid.
Sid:Yep ..you called me Sid.That's sweeter.


They both smiled at each other.




Sid:Save my number.I have taken a SIM here.Call me whenever you feel any discomfort.
Roli:Ok.
Sid gave her his number and Roli saved it.

Sid:Take rest.Bye.
Sid left the room.

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arisharosid20 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much for converting this on Rosid. ..accepting my request..
Wow Sid is rajendee friend son.. He comes to see roli.. Lovely...
Sid like roli food sweet...
Rosid went to visit village wow..
Sid enjoying like kid..
Mango scene was cute...
Roli fell down aww sid carry her in arms. .
Or care for her...
Really happy to see rosid story...
Update soon waiting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a cute and sweet update. Nice work dear. Rosid went to visit village . cute cute. I loved it waiting for nxt
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Nice update...Rosid went to visit village...mango scene was cute...loved it...waiting for next update... & thanks for the pm.
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After a long time u write on rosid. I'm so happy. ..oh toh sid is Coming to see roli. .nice.he like roli food. Rosid went to visit village...cute. sid enjoying like a kid...cute. roli fell down and sid carry her arms...b beautiful...sweet and amazing update. Eagerly waiting for Next and thx for pm.
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Very cute and sweet update. Sid taking care of Roli and her parents are amazing.
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awww cute start dear loved it sid came to see roli from London he has never seen India & enjoying everything like a little kid loved the scene sid carrying roli in his arms when she fell awesome waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Nice update it's really cute... Roli is feeling shy to face sid but later she started talking to him it was nice n Sid's caring towards roli is really beautiful... Eager to know how they both fall in luv with eachother...Waiting fr further updates... Update soon...
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Nice cute concept Dr...mango scene sid as doctor wow amazing
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love yaar waiting for the next plz update jaldhi plz i am dying like thing plz

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