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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sherlocked.

Well said! Vatsalya was a seeker. He did not want to be tied down to one place, though he was groomed to be the heir.


Thank you. 😊

Vatsalya was a beautiful soul. He may be gone, but his presence can be felt in every corner of LM. He was a thread who bonded everyone in LM. He knew how to spread love and had nothing to do with the materialistic assets which his family members are fighting for. He truly defined his name 'Vatsalya'.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariah25

Kyon todke bandhan saare yun hi tum chale gaye
Yaad karoge toh aaunga ye keh kar kyon chalegaye
Hum aag tum paani donon mile toofan tale
Sach mein kyon waqt ke saath tum paani Ki tarah beh gaye
Ab yeh aag bhadak gayi ke tum jo hume chod gaye
Raakh karegi sab kuch jab tak pyaas iski na bujhe
Tumhare door jaane ka afsos abhi nahi karenge
Tumhe door karne waale ki saans leke hi ab saans lenge
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Bichhad gaye hum iss janam mein toh kya, hai janam janam ka naata
Bhagya ke iss aboojh khel mein, jor kisi ka na chalta

Peeche mud ke na kabhi dekhna, aagey badhtey jaana
Iss aag ko jaltey rakhna kyonki, lakshya tumhe hai paana

Saath tumhaare har dum mein hoon, jaise dhoop sang kirney
Raat mein taarey chamkenge toh, muskaaunga mein unmein...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Arshi67


M, between Fariah and you, you'll are enhancing my pleasure in this serial. Thank you both 👏


Ruchi! 🤗

Thanks for being always so kind and generous. Your appreciation and encouragement is a big reason that gives me confidence to put my words here.

Love you lots...❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Ssanjinika

Fariah, Mimosa,
The beauty of your words were not lost on even a person like me who thinks in English first then in Tamil. Though I understand Hindi quite well, I rarely speak it. It's posts like yours that remind me of my love for the language and urge me to communicate more in the language.
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Thank yo so much for the appreciation Sanjinika!

I hope the meanings I put at the end are of some help.
I just love Hindi/Urdu poetry. They are so soulful. And some words carry so much depth in Hindi, that if translated, they lose their intensity.

No worries, we will try to communicate more in Hindi here.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mira

Wow what a beauty👏

He truely was a free spirit...I think if Anami wasn't given away, Valsalya would was given up all his rights over LM and let his sister rule... He would have been happy to not have that burden on him...



Thank you Mira! 😳

Vatsalya was azaad parinda, who only knew how to spread love and laughter everywhere he went. His happiness was in freedom not in the moh-maaya of LM.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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👏 😳 this is so beautifully written.

Vatsalya was born to be a free bird soaring high above the walls of the Lal mahal. His soul craved simplicity and simple pleasures of life.

The name the power that came with his family name, none of this gave him joy.
His Smile hid his wistful thoughts his true desire. Ironically what vatsalya wanted as a growing up boy, Anami enjoyed it as a child. She was a free butterfly, spreading her wings gently as the Ganges breeze carried her around Banares.

Vatsalya's last moments short as it was, he finally experienced freedom for a short while. This boy would have given it all up if he knew his twin was there. She would have gladly taken over too 😳 His happiness means the world to her!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamer-89

👏 😳 this is so beautifully written.

Vatsalya was born to be a free bird soaring high above the walls of the Lal mahal. His soul craved simplicity and simple pleasures of life.

The name the power that came with his family name, none of this gave him joy.
His Smile hid his wistful thoughts his true desire. Ironically what vatsalya wanted as a growing up boy, Anami enjoyed it as a child. She was a free butterfly, spreading her wings gently as the Ganges breeze carried her around Banares.

Vatsalya's last moments short as it was, he finally experienced freedom for a short while. This boy would have given it all up if he knew his twin was there. She would have gladly taken over too 😳 His happiness means the world to her!!


Thank you dear! 🤗

Benna, my dear, you have written about Vatsalya and Anami, so beautifully, that, now, I am finding my poem inadequate. You are so gifted with the words. Do write more please!

True. If they would have been together, they would be inseparable. Such is their bond, that even being in the 2 different worlds, they are strongly bonded.

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