Dadi's Bride T2 - Completed - Page 58

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymous.me

Earlier was a regular reader of this story but then was inactive..

had to read it again...
great going...loving d story...
btw congratulations !!!
n hope hope you continue this story soon n do pm me...



Thank you and I suppose welcome back
Glad your liking the story
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Hiya, I am aware there are a few new readers. So WELCOME and I am glad you're here and liking Dadi's Bride. Unfortunately, currently I'm not able to give you the welcome you deserve but never the less I hope you feel welcome😳 . So like the other story, no reply, no PMS, no regular updates (though I'll try my level best) since I'm crammed down with gazillions of stuff. Totally knackered, yet here I am 😆

Thank you for your patience 😃 and keep commenting and liking for faster updates😉
Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago
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Chapter 25: Waking and breaking

It all started with pouring rain: cats, dogs, bugs and monkeys and all. The sky was of dark blue in colour with numerous grey clouds hanging loose as if ready to break off any second. Obvious to all this was Maan, who slept like a baby, make that a deaf baby. Banging utensils, slamming doors, Adi's shrieks, Dadi's nagging and even Pinky's screams were ignored over the past hour or so. People dressed, fed and readied yet the royal ache was in bed dreaming of sweets things while everything sweet turned sour downstairs.

'See I told you, he's a liability Darji' Brij boasted as the elders sat around, some agreeing while others fretted. Darji looked out the window again, but other than the thundering sky everything very much remained the same.

'Ghadda idhar aaa' Raji's screams could be heard from upstairs followed by Tito's agonising yelps. Darji had deemed it wise for them to stay at home today with the rain throwing a havoc, but now it was everything but wise.

'Forget him tending to Geet, it'll be Geet looking after him. He's a 25 year old baby' Brij continued ranting over the screaming fight of Raji and Tito.

'He's a baby' Dadi mocked making funny faces to which Adi laughed only to earn him a smack from Pinky and a growl from Dadi, quietening him up in a second.

'Savi calm down' Dida whispered from beside, looking from her husband to her grandson; both equally happy. However Brij presented his happiness with an evil smile, while Darji hid it but his gleaming eyes told her of the tale quite clearly.

'Kaise Radi, your grandson is leaving no stone unturned to spread rubbish while mine has turned into an overnight sleeping princess' Dadi harshly bite back growing red by each second, Maan was having one of his hang-over days but this time out of work rather than alcohol.

'BAS KARO' they heard Geet roar in the background stopping every single conversion and it also managed to wake Maan up, who fell to the ground in horror hearing his soft spoken Geet sound anything but nice.

Geet for the last two hours heard Tito and Raji fight over anything and everything, with everyone being home, the house turned to some sort of zoo. Every few minutes, Geet would either run downstairs to do an errand or go running after her arguing siblings and tidy up the ruckus they created. Each time she manged to clean it up, they'd create another mess throwing things at one another or breaking into a silly fight with Geet physically pulling them apart leading to more clutter. Of course, she knew of the conversation downstairs, she even tried to wake Maan up herself a few times and all he said was Mishty, awaking an unknown asset of her being. She didn't want to doubt but the thoughts of this Mishty heightened her anger.

As soon as the scream was out, she saw her younger siblings look at her in horror before running off as if she's some unknown stranger and then her mum and Taiji came in looking stressed and pondered over her like she's fallen ill or hit her head.

'Kuch nahi, just got a headache' she lied while sitting on the bed with her head down as tears garnered trying to slip from the corners.

'Mishty' she heard Maan call, falling to his knees before her in his messy bed hair

'Mishty' he repeated and she broke out into a weeping sob, shoving her face into her palm

'Mishty kya hua' he asked placing a hand on her shoulder

'Who's this Mishty?' she slapped his hand as the crowd in her room gasped seeing a different side, one that was angry and upset. But Geet and Maan where in a parallel world with just him and her.

'You sweetheart, my Mishty my sweetie' he cooed grinning like a fool as she blushed like a cherry.

'Was my Mishty jealous?' he questioned in a baby tone sitting beside her as his arms folded around her shoulder, he was trying to pull her leg and she knew growing red by the second

'No I wasn't' she denied hiding her shining red face into his chest, an act that happened just naturally while her family watched in monochrome shocking out the colour from their vision.

Note: I don't think I've used Mishty' ever so thought to give it a try, plus Maan's so cute when he says that lol

Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago


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How are you ji 😳

Been to a crazy party, have you? 🤪 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated (15249)

So no PMs😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aweome one.. haha their family members were shocked ..
Thanku for the update
I really love reading this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
congrats on 25 updates! 👏 thanks 4 da outstanding update! superbly written! despite all the ruckus Maan still asleep! Brij gloating n taunts Maan! Dadi upset n Geet tensed! Brij carries on his rant and Geet screams 4 them to stop! this was unlike Gee! uff this Maan awakens! perhaps he was so tired! lovely Maaneet moments! loved when Maan calls her Mishty! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow awesome update yaar

Maan babu ko koi utha nahi paya aur geet ki ek cheek maan babu ki neend tut gayi

Geet ye mishty naam sunn ke jealous ho rahi thi aur kab pata chala ki uska naam hai Haayeee geet was blushing and her family was shocking and choking
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DaftGirk



How are you ji 😳

Been to a crazy party, have you? 🤪 😆


Hello ji I'm fine ji 😆😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Update Darling 👏😃
Aww geet was jealous of his unseen mishty 😉
Loved the whole update.. Maan slept like a kumbhkaran 😆
All were shocked to see geet and Maan so casual towards each other.. aww love their scene

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