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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Sad one sure

But very good one

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priya_86

@priya_86

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: NESRIA
wow epic priya
it is a heart breaking story but it is A GRAET ONE full of emotions and events

plz do part two

Thanks dear for commenting...

This is an OS...so it would have an open ending...there wouldnt be a part 2...but the readers always have the liberty to imagine happiness in future...😊

Originally posted by: _era_
Omkara is an ACP WoW...
She Murdered Kali Thakur...
The Ending got me Teary eyed...
Its so Painful & Beautiful at the same time.
Extremely Well Written..

PS. I Think there is a mistake coz The time lapse From 2000 to 2017 is not 7 years Plz correct it

Thanks for reading and commenting.

And thanks again...for pointing out the error...it was a typing error...corrected 😊

Originally posted by: anu.pr
Lovely one...awesome...so emotional 😭
Open ending...I love that 😊

Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: Rishrabh
Plz write more, it was too good.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting 😊

Edited by priya_86 - 8 years ago

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priya_86

@priya_86

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Priya 😭 this one is heart wrenchingly beautiful ... I would have had a slightly different take on such a situation but this one is agonizingly beautiful. The way he deciphered her smile and then her eyes ... Time certainly does not change strong emotions ... The way she is happy that she saw the man she loved for one last time ... And Kali Thakur, the favorite classic villain ... This is one rikaralicious story ... It speaks a lot for itself ...

Pooru...thank you so much for commenting 😊

I always wanted to write something keeping Kali Thakur as an antagonist. The true essence of Rikara is always brought out by Kali Thakur. He is the perfect villain for Rikara

Pooru...i would love to know your take on this...and i am sure it would be awesome one.😊

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priya_86

@priya_86

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Priya 🤗 .. yaar so much love .. so subtle yet all encompassing.. over whelming .. I love the way you weave characters.. amazing depth .. stay with you forever .. I actually wanna know what happens since Fate making them meet again is not just a prayer from Gauris side .. much much more .. super loved it
Such an expansive story.. in love with the possibilities..

N the dedication.. blew me away .. thank you so much for this .. when you told me you have a super plot in mind I was expecting something brilliant n this totally is .. n when it comes for me m just super elated .. though the story is steeped in sadness but all that love n the fact they meet somehow doesn't make me hopeless .. thanks Yaa .. thanks so much:))

I was very much inspired by the Drabble you PMed me but which you never posted. The plot is different but the idea was from your drabble...so it had to be dedicated to you anyway.

There is sadness...but hope does exist...I have purposely kept an open ending. I am a believer of Destiny...everything is predestined... so they were bound to meet. Where they from this juncture and how is left to the reader's discretion.

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priya_86

@priya_86

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer
Brilliant plot di.

Absolutely brilliant. I loved it.

Amazing depth and characterizations.

The love story was so subtle, poignant and deep. Feeling melancholic over it.
And the best part was they shared only one moment and an eyelock. But that left me speechless. Especially the eyelock. So impactful, much powerful.

I asked you for an happy ending but i know I won't get. And i kinda agree with you. This story with this end will stay with me forever.

Once again, this was heartbreaking and beautiful.

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Piyu

Piyu...i am so glad you liked it

This isnt a tragic ending...actually an open ending...hence I have mentioned

Kahe ko roye...Safal hogi teri Aradhana...

its not a must that true love shall always have a happy ending...but who knows...in this case...it may have

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Brilliant shot di

Its so emotional and painfull😭

She murdered kT,, reason behind this murder 😒

and omkara became acp now

Both are in love with each other but fate played own game

After reading this this song running in my mind

Do pal ruka khwabon ka karwan

Aur phir chal diye tum hum kahan

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy
Priya Di🤗
Its so good to see you here😃
Kitna acha lagta hai jab nayi jagah pe purani family milti hai😎
Coming to the update,
It was amazing as usual!!
I loved it!
Keep writing😊

Hey Shirisha...long time...how are you?

Thanks for the comments dear 😊

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