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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Part 1
Nice update
Raman saw Isita after 1 year
They are separated because of some misunderstanding
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Note

I am writing this note getting very sad with your response..just tell me you are interested to read my stories further or not.,because i am hell disapointed with the response i am getting for my stories ...i know now days i am taking long distance to update..its only because my health is not fine... allover that study preasure is also in my mind..when i checked my previous updates to update new one i see very pathetic response..it has been long i updated..phir bhi mujhe likes nahi mil rehi hai...so just tell me once..if you readers dont want to read my stories then whats the need to write...so please respond to my this note .because i really want to know that what you people want...now really i am feeling like to quit writing...thats it..

with a heavy heart...Anju 😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tumhara Hun Mein Aur Tum Meri



part 2


The Evening was ready to welcome the darkness..the driver turns the stearing to take the car inside to a huge mantion..

" stop here.."..ishita stops the driver from going inside..as he got her instruction he stopped the car outside the gate...she look at the mantion from far away and remembered mihikas words...

""mihika: ishuuu...whats this..patha hai aunty tujhe kithna miss karthi hai,tu unhe kyun sazza de rehi hai""

ishita: miss tho meine bhi kiya hai amma...i know you love me but for that love.. you asked my most presious thing from me..if it was my life i would give you happyly amma but you asked my life's life..which i cant give you...i too want to meet you once but if i met you now you will again try to snatch my lifr from me...so its better if i leave without meeting you...saying she told the driver to drive towards the hotel...

meanwhile raman reached his home with a smile on his face..he was going to his room making hurry which amazed thoshiji who was waiting for him in the living area..but he didnt noticed anyone just went to his room straightly...

after getting inside the room he quickly went near his wardrobe and opened it in a jiffy..inside the wardrobe he opened a small draw and took a small box from it...he opened it smiling fully and took a photo out..he kissed on it tightly closing his eyes like he is trying to feel someone..and it was none other than..his love..his jan..his ishita...he looks at her photo without chimming his eyes for once...

" aaj ek saal baath tum mere ankhon ke saamne ayi hai jan..,you are still like before..bhale hi tum khud badalne ki dawa karo lekin i see in your eyes that you are the same who was my love..my everything...aaj bhi tum wahi ho ishita..,tum wahi ho,,..i missed you a lottt jan..i was searching for you like a mad..i know i did wrong by not trusting you..but please come back to me for once jan..humare beech ki saari duriya..saari galath famiya door kar dunga mein...shikayath ka ek ek bhi mauka nahi dunga tujhe,..bas ek baar mere paas ajao...now i cant live a second without you..aaj maine khud ko rokliya lekin ab zyada di nahi rok paunga...Aisa nahi hai ki main tere bina jee nahi paunga...par aisa hai ki main tumhare bina jeena nahi chahtha...please come to me jaan...,saying he kissed her agan and took out the letters carrassing one by one which was writern by her.."

same time ishita checkin to a near by hotel and went to get a cool bath..she stood under the shower allowing the shower to pour the water on her head...her mind was feeling restless remembering her past life..from past one yers she tried her best to not remember him anymore but the god was not allowing her for that..from past one year there is no day which didnt made her remember him because it was her destiney where she was destined to remember him..she loved him like anything...more than anyone she trusted him blindly..but she faild to earn that same trust from him for her...

" kyunn...kyunnn ayi main wapas..mereliye kuch nahi bacha hai yehan...sab kuch ek yaad ban geya hai mere liye..bas sirf ek hi cheez ab meri jeene ki sahara hai...mujhe jald se jald wapas meri jan ke paas jana haga...i cant stay here anymore..Unki yaadein mujhe kha reha hai...main aur nahi ruk paungi yehan...crying she let the water fell down through her body...

"Raman puthar..." a concern filled voice asked to him holding the door nobe..

raman: Maa...aap?

thoshiji: ki hua puttar...ajanak aise kamre mein kyun chale aye?

raman: woh...kuch nahi maa.bas aise hi...he said looking down..but knowing his son's nature of hiding his pain from her she walks to him..and again find the photo in his hand which she knows as his only solance..

thoshiji: tu kab thak ishita ko yaad kartha rehega...apneliye na sahi mere liye aage bad ja puthar...her eyes turned moist while saying this..raman looks at his mother with week smile on his face..

raman: agar usse bhool jana mumkin hotha tho main kab ki aage bad chukka hotha maa..i want her maa..i want my ishita back..aur ab bhagvan mujhe ek aur mauka diya hai..iss baar main usse aise jane nahi de saktha..

thoshiji:tu yeh kya keha reha hai puthar...she asked not understanding his words...

raman: Aaj ek saal baath main usse mila maa..meri ishita se mila meine...

thoshiji: kya?..

raman: han maa..lekin bas door se ek nazar hi dekh paya hun main...

thoshiji: tune usse baath kyun nahi ki

raman: bohoth man tha maa..lekin jo galathi maine ki thi uski bharpayi keliye mujhe sahi time ka indzaar karna hoga...because i know usse manana azaan nahi hoga..

thoshiji:agar woh apni zindgi mein aage bad chukki hai tho?

raman: aisa nahi hoga maa..yeh mera vishwas hai

thoshiji: lekin puthar shagun?

raman: please maa maine hazaar baar kaha hai..she is just a friend of mine..she cant replace my ishita..so its better if you drop the idea of my marriage with her forever...

thoshiji: teek hai..i will not..lekin mujhe tuse ek vaada chahiye

raman: kya?...he looks at thoshiji

thoshiji: yehi ki theen mahine ke andar tu ishitha ko wapas jeethega..nahi tho tu bilkul waisa karega jaise main kahungi...shagun se shaadi karna hoga tujhe...bolo manzoor hai

raman: yeh aap kya keha rehi hai

thoshiji: ab aur nahi raman..tumhara yeh thakleef aur nahi dekha jayega mujhse..

raman: aapko legtha hai ki ishita ke bina main khush reha paunga?

thoshiji: nahi..mujhe patha hai teri jan ishita pe atki hai..isiliye keha rehi hun..jake le aa usse..lekin theen mahi ne ke andar...

raman: teek hai maa..theen maheena kaafi hai mere liye...main launga usse iss khar mein..aapki bahu banakar...

thoshiji: matharani kare aisa hi ho puthar...saying she went from there..

raman: aisa hi hoga maa...raman whispered to himself.,.

After finishing her cool yet tearfull bath ishita comes out from the washroom..here eyes were red due to the continuous cry..she sat on her bed to take some rest after changing her dress..through her body was here but her mind was somewhere else..missing someone badly..her heart was getting desperate to know about the special life in her life...she took out her phone to call her maid Ms.stella...but for her surprise she received stellas call at the moment,,

ishita: stella?...taking her name confusingly she attend the call only to hear a shocking news...

" what?..whe..when...her shivering voice asked praying for the good

" oo..ok.,you just relax..i am coming on next flight...just take care...koyi thakleef nahi honi chahiye...she was saying when she heard stella again

stella: Sorry Maam..come to hotel paradise we are in mumbai...

ishita: what rubbish you are talking?

stella: Maam i am sorry ..but i cant haldle alone...please come soon Maam..o am scared now..

ishita: i..i just come...saying she disconnect the call in jiffy thinking the wrost...

" Sab meri galthi hai..mujhe yehan ana hi chahiye thi,..mujhe patha tha meri zaroorath hai wahan..phir bhi main chali ayi..i hope everything is fine...please murugan dont let anything hapoen...she quickly left to hotel paridise after locking her room...

it takes 15 minutes for ishita to reach hotel paradise..she collect the rokm number from the reception and runs to the room..with her raising breath she pressed the calling bell..Ms.stelka opened the door and ishita quickly stepped inside...

ishita looked at stella questioning her...stella signalled her to the bed and she see her life sleeping peacefully covering inside a soft white cloth..her teary eyes twinkled seeing the angel of her life...

"Rooh"...a mere whispere comes out from her mouth...without wasting anymore seconds she runs to the little life...taking the softness in her hand she kissed her allover not getting enough of her presense.,.

" Mera baccha..i am so sorry...mumma is so sorry baby...i love u..love u..so much..." she kissed her again and again...

The little baby opens her eyes feeling her mummas warmth after whole 2 and half days..she sucked ishitas kurti end saying that she is hungry...ishita looks and her pink face with her moist eyes...mouthing a sorry again she took her peack to her mouth feeding her mummas love...

after teo days of seperation from her daughter made her desperate to feel the little jan..she closed her eyes feeling her daughter's movements on her..patting her small head softly she starts to sing lullaby for her...Ms.stella smiled seeing the little life getting peace seeking her mothers warmth...

Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori...

Chandaniya chhup jaana re
Chhan bhar ko luk jaana re (Luk: hide)
Nindiya aankhon mein aaye
Bitiya meri so jaaye
hmm mm...
Nindiya aankhon mein aaye
bitiyaa meri so jaaye
Leke god mein sulaao
Gaao raat bhar sunaao
Main lori lori
Ho main lori lori

Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori

Gardhaniyaan chhun chhun baje
Palkan mein sapna saje
Dheeme-dheeme haule-haule
Pawan basanti dole
hmm hmm...
Dheeme dheeme haule haule
Pawan basanti dole
Leke god mein sulaao
Gaaon raat bhar sunaao
Main lori lori
Oh oh ho main lori lori

Meri Muniya Rani bane
Mehlon ka Raja miley
Dekhe khushiyon ke mele
Dard kabhi na jhele
Oh ho..
Dekhe khushiyon ke mele
Dard kabhi na jhele
Leke god mein sulaao
Gaao raat bhar sunaao
Main lori lori
hmm hmm main lori lori

Lori lori lori... [x8]


So friends thats all for now...if anyone want me to continue this story then tell me through your comments...because i think i am the wrost writer on india forum...because you all are making me feel like that only...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AWESOME CHAPPY
SO ROOH IS THEIR CHILD
WHAT MADE THEM SEPARATED
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

AWESOME CHAPPY

SO ROOH IS THEIR CHILD
WHAT MADE THEM SEPARATED
UPDATE SOON


THANKS FOR PM
srithika thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Please continue all your stories dii
They are just awesome
I love them all
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls dont discontinue.
Uff yeh raman ne fir gadbad karti. Ussko pata hai he is a father?
Update soon.
Tq for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
You are an amazing writer dii

Awesome update dii
Raman is missing Ishita alot
He wants her back
Ishu was worried about Ruhi
Ruhi became happy getting her mumma's warmth after two days
Waiting eagerly to know what happened between ishra
Update soon dii
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Heyy..
No Anjuu..
Please Don't say like that ever yawr..

I really really really love your writings yawr..
Never ever say that..

U r actually the best writer..

Please please Please Never say that u will discontinue them..
Please..

So sorry for not being up to your expectations..
M extremely sorry dear..

GetWellSoon..
May u get proper health..
God bless U..

Love U N Your Writings A lot...

Update was Lovely N awesome..

Raman was all missing his Jan..
Ishu cries remembering him..
Omg..Rooh..
She has a daughter..
Toshiji gavw Raman 3 months time..
He is determined to get back her in her life..
Beautiful Part..

Will love to read further..
Update Soonish..

Thanks for PM..

GetWellSoon..
Do TakeCare of Yourself..

Will not be happy if our most loveliest writer willl be sick N call herself as worst who she isn't..
Please not to be disheartened..
Love U a Alot..

TakeCare..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
superb update
ishu is not in talking terms with amma sge returned to hotel from mansions gate seems smma has sujjested her to abort which didnt go well with ishu
so ishra have a child too
seems raman dont know about her
why they got separated
raman is determined to win ishita back and tishiji gave 3 months utlimatum to win ishu back
eagar to know ishras past
continue soon
dont get disheartned dear ur a awesome writer we love ur stories

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