Bhoot Aaya S#3/Note/pg64/12 jan

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Awesome n very emotional update.

Dadi was not ready to leave Geet n maan was getting irritated n asked his dadu for help.

Dadu apologised n told all about his affair to dadi..

N maan realised that he is really talking to his dadu.

Both dadu n dadi r telling maaneet about their past.

Really feeling so sad for them...there was no one with them in their last moments.

Maaneet can't believe that his parents can ever do such things with his grandparents..

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Awesome ending..

Loved it.

Maaneet talked to their parents n got to know full truth.

His parents r not completely wrong.

Dadi n dadu r too funny, they r still fighting...loved their cute nokjok..

They forgiven their son n finally vunko mukti milgayi..

Oh god, what a twist yaar..it's just a story which our maaneet shoot as it's their hobby along with doing family business..

Enjoyed reading this...

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
@1
This is sooo hilarious 🤣
I can't stop laughing...
Maan apni wife ko gumanekeliye haunted haveli leke gayahai...
N booth is talking to Geet...
Booth ko shaanti chahiye🤣
Omg, those booths r his dada n dadi..
His dadu is still having an affair with other n his dadi wants to know all..😆🤣
N insab mein bichare maan ko bi keech diya..his dadu is asking him about his affair n Geet got angry..
Oh god, dadi ne Geet ko kamareme lock kardhiya n maan is trying to get her.
This sooo funny...
Throughly enjoyed reading this..

😆

thank you

horror se jyada toh funny ho gya

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: priya_21

😆
thank you
horror se jyada toh funny ho gya

Sooo true...

His dadi n dadu r too funny😆

Edited by arshifansiri - 8 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

thanks 4 da pm! read and commented already! update soon

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piya27

@piya27

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Wow awesome updates yaar

Just loved the story and also liked had a smell while reading it just lovely

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Nice banner dear

Interesting and lovely Story!!

Well written with good humour.

Loved Maan's grandmother and grandfather 's comic banter. The communication gap between the Khurana s made each of them to assume things and prespective. Glad that Maan's grand parents shared things to clear things off. Loved the last twist !! Loved Manisha 's story for Maan and Maaneet could fulfil their hobby too.

Liked the story dear !

:))

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Beautiful banner

Lovely n interesting story

Loved it

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Sooo true...
His dadi n dadu r too funny😆

😆

next dekhti hu thoda horror ho usme

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Part 3@

Misunderstandings got cleared, Beautiful part. it was a bit unfortunate for both Maan's parents and Grand parents. Maan's dada dadi have lovely chemistry. Like their banters.

Unres at page 6 for part 1 and 2

Overall a good ss. Enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for posting. Excellent banner.

Thanks for the Pm dear! 😊