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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

mast mast update yaar..i love it so much neha dear😳😳😳..mainly annie oh my god🤣

everyone going to shimla trip..dont say hm for yash and mahi..whole family going to shimla🤣
Annie saying right she is unmarried so obviously she is baby for their parnets😛.
mahi so cute and innocent she did not understand geet and annie teasing also 😳
annie ka naughty plan and she bring ayush after seeing maan in hall but geet struggled in heavy luggage..oh poor girl ..maaneet mahi mahi ha..both starring each other..both praising their beauty and handsome look..annie pushed maan and maan smiled helped geet but madam not in her state of course how she in real state..she already lost her handsome hubby new stylish avavtor na..😛..annie so funny..she do bg music for maaneet romance..😆😆😆 and enjoying dance with ayush..yash joined her..both distract our maaneet becuase of their laughing..love birds embrassed ..omg god ..maan smiled seeing her antics..😛

waiting for maaneet shimla romance ..
dont bring prem to shimla.by the way where he is..🤔

Thanks for pm and continue soon
sorry for late..u know very well ..i am busy in my update..sorry😳

thank you dear😊
i am also waiting for their moments
oh prem is in foreign
so let him stay there 😆
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Originally posted by: hira2010

I'm waiting for next please update soon

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Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome story.

Loved it.
Read all d parts.
Very well written.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

thanks for liking it
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Originally posted by: nehaa9

thank you dear😊
i am also waiting for their moments
oh prem is in foreign
so let him stay there 😆


yeah its good he stay away from maaneet 😆

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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo


yeah its good he stay away from maaneet 😆

😆😆
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Part 28

Hey maan to tu ja raha hy??

Haan yaar jana to tha hi naa!

And saw towards geet who heard their talks

Geet thought

Ab yeh kahan ja rhy hain oh god kahin humarey sath to nhi

Aur wapis kab aye ga?

Pata nhi!!

Pr yaar tu jaa kyun raha hy matt jaa na humarey sath trip py chal

Nhi yash mera tumharey sath jana kisi ko acha nhi lagey ga

Acha yeh batao tum log stay kahan karo gey

Wo papa kay cousin hain na mittal uncle un kay haan

ohk

Geet thought

Chalo shukar hy humarey sath nhi ja rhy pr yeh jaa kahn rhy hain aur yash bhai ko itni fikar kyun ho rhi hy???

So maan tu wahan pr akela reh ly ga??

Haan yaar phele bhi to 2 saal raha tha haan pr ab baat dosri hy ab rehna thora mushkil ho ga

Pr wo kyun??

Kyun kay ab dil to yahin rahey ga naa bhai!

Haan yeh bhi hy

To matt jaa na yaar

Rukney ka koi reason bhi to nhi hy

And saw towards geet who already see them their eyes met and geet bow her head down

Bhai! Hum bhi to ap sey kitna pyaar krtey hain humarey lye hi ruk jayen

Nhi bacha jana to hoga na wahan kaam bhi to krna hy na

Kya apko humari yaad nhi aye gi?

Annie made a puppy face

Aye gi na bht aye gi aur khas tor pr marey champ ki

And take ayush in his arms from annie and kiss his both cheeks which make ayush laugh

Mera bacha! Daddy ko miss karey ga??

And tickle him from his chin ayush laugh and holds maan's hairs in his small fists

Oye daddy kay hairs!!!!

And again kiss him ayush is so happy in his arms and continuously laughing which makes geet smile she thought

Ayush kitna khush hy apney daddy kay sath maan usey kitna pyaar krtey hain pr yeh jaa kyun rahey hain wasey to bht bol rhy thy geet mjh ek chance dey do aur ab phr sey chorr kr ja rhy hain kya ma ne bht ziada bol diya inko to kya hoa agr ziada bol dia inhoney bhi to mjh itna dard dia hy mera zara sy ghussa nhi she sktey ma bhi to inkey bina 2 saal rhi hoon aur yeh hain itna bhi nhi kr paye itni bhi kya jldi hy inko janey ki thora sa aur manatey to ma maaf kr deti naa pr nhi yeh to jaa rhy hain acha hoa ma ne inko chance hi nhi dia warna phr mjh chorr kr chaley jatey araggghhh...mjh itna bura kyun lag raha hy kyun dil kr raha hy kay yeh nhi jayen humarey sath rhein simran's voice came her in reality she wiped her tears and looked towards them

Bhai ap kahan jaa rhy hain kya humarey sath chal rhy hain??

Arey nhi simran ma apney kaam sy jaa rha hoon.

Oh acha

Maan teri filght kab ki hy?

Bus tum logon kay niklaney ka wait kr raha hoon tum log niklo phr chala jaon ga...

Acha to phr hum nikaltey hain chalo bhyee sab car ma baitho

Ok maan apna kahyal rakhna jab kay ab to kisi aur ko tumhara khayal rakhna chahye...

Yash hug him and said last words slowly but enough to hear geet then annie hug him and said

Bhai I am gonna miss you please jldi wapis ajaye ga hum bhi ap sy bht pyaar krtey hain

Koshaish karon ga annie pr jis ka pyaar aur sath chahta hoon wo to ready hi nhi hy

And all bid bye to him and sat in car except geet she stand there and turned towards maan with tears in her eyes and said

Bus yehi pyaar tha apka...

to itna bhi kyun wait kia chaley jatey naa!

I hate you!!!

And ran towards car and bang the door loudly everyone shocked yash saw her expressions

Arey bhyee kya ho gaya kis baat py ghussa arha hy???

She glared him and he said

Ok ok baba chalo lets start

and start his car geet saw maan through windows and saw him smiling towards her yash sense her feelings and an idea struck him he msg something on annie's phone on which annie saw him through back view mirror he signaled her and she nodded then saw geet who sit next to her

yaar annie mjh bht bura laga

kya yash bhai?

Yeh hi kay maan wapis ja raha hy

Haan yash bhai pata nhi bhai ne ye descision suddenly kyun lia mjh smjh hi nhi aya

Ma usaey kal sy note kr raha hoon bht sad sat ha kal kuch hoa tha kya?

On that geet saw both of them one by one but they engrossed in their talks and not see her she remembered her meeting with maan

Pata nhi yash bhai kal subha tak to bht khush thy pr phr pata nhi achanak kya hoa apko ek secret bataon

Haan bolo

Maan bhai kal bht ghussey ma bhi thy ma ney unko kal gym ma bhi dekha bht aggressively exercise kr rhy thy kay jaisey koi baat unko pareshan kr rhi hy

To tum ne us sy pocha kyun nhi tumhein pata hy na wo aisa tab hi krta hy jab ya to ghussey ma hota hy ya koi baat usey pareshan kr rhi hoti hy

Nhi baba mjh to us waqt bht darr lag raha tha kay pata nhi wo kya karein

Arey atleast mjh hi bata detin ma hi us sy baat kr leta...

Wasey apko kab pata chala ka maan bhai jaa rhy hain??

Aj jogging py bataya us ney

Yash bhai! Maan bhai wapis to ajyen gy na??

Kuch keh nhi sktey annie wo mjh bht udas udas lag raha tha

Mjh maan bhai ki bht yaad aye gi

Haan wo to hy wasey koi hy jo usey wapis laa skta hy par choro...koi faida nhi hy

Arey geet tu kyun itni chup chup hy tu to bht excited thin na trip kay lye ab kya hoa?

Suddenly yash asked geet and geet got nervous what to say

Hey geet kya hoa??

Annie poked her

Hunh! Kuch nhi

To yash bhai tum sy kuch poch rhy hain?

Haan kya yash bhai?

Yaar tumhein hoa kya hy?

Kahan khoyi hyi ho?

Kahin to nhi aur mjh kya hoga kuch bhi to nhi...

To phr bhyee kuch baat waat karo

Wo... yash bhai mjh na thori neend arhi hy ma thori dair so jaon?

Ohk so jao...

Geet shut her eyes quickly and her thoughts gone towards maan

Kya maan sirf meri wajah sy chaley gye kya ab wo wapis nhi ayen gy, maan ap aisey bina mjh sy baat kye kyun chaley gye apko nhi jana chahye tha ek baar aur try to krtey oh god mjh smjh nhi arha ma kya karon...

Yash signaled annie and she checked geet and saw tears flowing from her eyes and she smiled and show her thumb to yash and he also smiled and thought

Geet tujhey ab yeh smjhna hoga ab bht ho gaya...

Ab tumhein maan ko apni zindagi ma wapis lana hi hoga...




sorry for spelling and mistakes

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Super part..i think maan enter his msk mode to get back his wife in his life..everyone ready and going to Shimla trip.Geet eavesdroping Yash and Maan conversation.maan ready to going somewhere..geet tensed if maan come to Shimla trip ..but she relief after he not come with us..Annie feel bad as maan going back to abroad..maan said missed Ayush ..baby so cute..he so attach with maan..uff Geet understand maan love with baby why her mind stricked he love her..yeah she only bear pain..she angry maan..why he going back..she thinking if she give chance to him once again he left..wow what positive geet 🤢 .maan indirectly said Geet not want him..everyone good bye maan and sit in car..geet shout while showing heart bother in angry way..yash understand Geet state..annie and Yash add ghee in fire more..annie said pointed yesterday itself maan sad ..geet guilty more insake of hurt words..Geet cried in silent ways..yeah Yash ..u right..maaneet become one soon..

I am first comment even I first read ur update Neha dear 😛
Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago

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