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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

hasseena maan jaayengi

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good part

hope so😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree


Continue soon please

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Loved it!!
Geet was happy that her plaster was removed and she could enjoy her time with her family.
Maan asked geet to give chance to their relationship
With maan's words Geet opened up her thoughts and sufferings which she buried deep within her hearts
Maan was hurt seeing her in pain but glad that she took out her frustration.
After realizing that he had hurt geet beyond repair in his ego made him guilt and his confidence was shaken but glad that Priya was there to boost him up
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

Awesome Part buddy

Geet opened her heart up to Maan
Maan can understand her pain and realizes his folly
Maan's mom again encourages her child to fight and win and he promises her the same
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Awesome pt

geet plaster was removed she's happy now she can go Shimla maan try to talk to hr about giving him is chance but listening hr suffering he f eel guilty but his mom encourage him

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Posted: 7 years ago
Sorry sorry for late update nehaa dear...sorry my dear friend.
Lovely update dear..doctor said Geet perfectly alright..she going Shimla also with teasing tone..so we going Shimla trip also Neha dear ...maan happy seeing her smiling face..maan tried manoify Geet but Geet got angry and shouting maan..but she is right..her husband stay with single day and leave alone after he come back and told I need u in my life..she accept easily..maan in guilty but he deserve it..geet asked each question.whenever she need him .he never with her right.not only Ayush also need father love and her pregnancy time that time maan no with her..geet walked away as leaving maan in guilty..everyone happy for geet walked in own legs..maan mom understand something happen b/w Maaneet..maan mom adviced him and asked promises win her love and said he not only maann and also msk..now Geet face msk hubby...it become more fun..when u start Maaneet romance .i am waiting.yes I support Geet side ..iam also woman as i support Geet right but when I become maan fan..as i support msk right..update soon yaar..
Thanks for pm and continue soon
Sorry for late
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

Sorry sorry for late update nehaa dear...sorry my dear friend.
Lovely update dear..doctor said Geet perfectly alright..she going Shimla also with teasing tone..so we going Shimla trip also Neha dear ...maan happy seeing her smiling face..maan tried manoify Geet but Geet got angry and shouting maan..but she is right..her husband stay with single day and leave alone after he come back and told I need u in my life..she accept easily..maan in guilty but he deserve it..geet asked each question.whenever she need him .he never with her right.not only Ayush also need father love and her pregnancy time that time maan no with her..geet walked away as leaving maan in guilty..everyone happy for geet walked in own legs..maan mom understand something happen b/w Maaneet..maan mom adviced him and asked promises win her love and said he not only maann and also msk..now Geet face msk hubby...it become more fun..when u start Maaneet romance .i am waiting.yes I support Geet side ..iam also woman as i support Geet right but when I become maan fan..as i support msk right..update soon yaar..
Thanks for pm and continue soon
Sorry for late

thanks dear
yeah you are too late this time
i m waiting for your comment dear
we also fan of him yaar😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 27

Saari packing ho gyi?

Yash asked mahi who put her clothes in bag

Ji almost saari packing ho gyi hy.

She said while smiling at that time geet and annie enters in their room

Hum log ready hain ap logon ko kitna time lagey ga?

Geet asked while saw mess on bed

Tumhein to sab sy ziada jaldi hy?

Yash put wrist watch in his hand and then put his wallet in jeans

Haan to meri wajah sy pheley hi sab late ho chukey hain, mahi bhabi ap ne packing nhi ki abhi tak?

Geet sit on bed and fold clothes of them

Haan bus thori si hi reh gyi thi

She said and closes the zip of her bag

Chalein ma apki help kr deti hoon

Arey bhyee sab ready ho gye hain to niklein raat honey sy phele wahan phonchna hy

Simran came holding ayush in her arms

Ma to ready hoon bhabi yeh women hi baton ma time laga rhi hain

Simran bhabi mera women ki list ma naam nhi ata filhal

Annie cleared her position

Haan tum to feeder peeti baby ho na jisey crib sy utha kr laye hain

Geet said irritatingly

Iss ma koi shak nhi hy ma abhi unmarried hoon is lye apney mom dad ki baby hi hoon.

She irritate geet more

Arey kahin hum is baby ko ly ja kr ghalti to nhi kr rhy kyun yash bhai?

Geet wants yash to takr her side

Mera to khayal hy ma aur mahi tum sab ko lay ja kr ghalti kr rhy hain

Yash did'nt takes her side instead he thinks about himself and then laugh when he saw geet's pout face

Yash bhai! You cheater!

And throw lotion bottle on him which he catch smartly

Ap to aisey hain hi nhi ka yap sy baat ki jaye

She said that and continues her work

Acha sorry!

He holds his ears and kneeled down in front of her geet chuckled that means "it's ok

Magr haan agey ki gurantee nhi dy skta kay tumhein tang nhi krn ga

Ap hain hi badtameez

She punched on his arms lightly

Geet! Ek meri taraf sy bhi

Kyun annie mjh mahi bhabi sy pitwao gi?

Geet said to annie and then looked mahi

Aisey kyun bol rhi ho tum?

Mahi said bluntly

Iss ka mtlb hy apko bura nhi lagey ga?

Mjh tumhari kisi baat ka bura to nhi laga

She didn't understand

Mtlb ka yahan ap kay hubby ki pittayi ho rhi hy aur apko bura nhi laga?

Yash saw her interestingly

Ji...!

She got nervous she didn't think about her answer but now she don't know what to say and they are in full mood to teased her

Oh my god...!

Annie and geet laughed

Yash bhai! Ap ki mrs bht masoom hain

Annie said while laughing

Yeh to hy madam masoom bht hain

He came near her and saw her lovingly

Ab bus bhi karo bechari confuse ho gyi hy

Simran came as her rescue

Koi baat nhi hum ma rhin gi to theek ho jyen gi

Geet said

God...! Bus apni tarah mat banana

Yash bhai...!

Geet shouted and then everyone laughed

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Yash said them to go downstairs while he and mahi came in few minutes annie and geet have to carry their luggage but then annie saw someone in hall and then an idea strike her she quickly get ayush in her arms and go towards hall and shouted

Geet ma neechey ja rhi hoon ayush ko lay kr tu apna aur ayush ka luggage lay aa

Pr ma akele kaisey itna saman annie help to kr detin

Geet saw annie who is on stairs now

Kr to rhi hoon ayush ko lay kr

She again shouts

Tu ajaa na!!!!

Geet first saw her luggage and then very hardly she come towards stairs and take steps very carefully annie saw her and chuckled maan's back is towards them but when he hear annie's giggled he turned and saw annie is holding ayush he instantly go and kiss ayush's cheek

Oye mera champ itna ready ho kr kahan ja raha hy??

Ayush smiled

Dad ko chorr kay ja raha hy ganda bacha!

Ap ayush ko chorein iss waqt uski maa ko dekhin bechari!!

Annie said and giggled in last

Maan turned and saw geet who is struggling with luggage on last steps of stairs he smiled and same time geet also saw towards them and froze maan is standing in front of her in different attire she never saw he is wearing a suit his first two buttons of shirt is open his hair is perfectly gelled a smile on his m shaped lips he is looking dangerously handsome in his office attire in MSK style and thought

Yeh maan kitney handsome lag rhy hain aur unki yeh smile to killer lag rhi hy ma ne unko phele to kabhi aisey nhi dekha oh god yeh mjh kya ho raha hy meri heart beat itni fast kyun ho rhi hy aur yeh mjh aisey kyun dekh rhy hain aur agr dekh bhi rhy hain to yeh nhi k akar help kr dein nhi wahin pr bs smile dye ja rhy hain

Arey dekh kya rhy hain jaein na bht acha moqa hy ap jayiye ma background music deti hoon

arey jayie naa...

Annie slightly pushed maan towards geet, maan goes and take luggage from one hand and keep them in hall geet just stood there froze she didn't get what happened and then maan returned and saw her like statue he smiled on her and turned his face and looked towards annie and hint her to look geet annie saw her and giggled and gesture him to go ahead maan wants to take another luggage from her but she didn't leave she is like in trance then maan tight grip on her hand and in swift move he pulled her towards him geet just collided with his chest her lips slightly brush with his well toned chest and current passed through both of their bodies she slightly upwards her face and looked in his eyes where she can see a purity and calm and they have a eye lock and in background annie holds ayush's one hand in her makes a move like dance and sang

Lag ja galey...

Lag ja galey...

Kay phir yeh haseen raat ho na ho

Ahhmmmhmmm

Shyd iss janam ma mulaqat ho na ho

Lag ja galey...

Geet's pov

Kya hy inki eyes ma ek lamhey ko to lagta hy jaisey kay sirf pyaar hi pyaar hy aur dil krta hy kay inki annkhon ma kho jaon sab kuch bhool jaon aur karon bhi kya inko dekhti hoon to lagta hy yeh sirf marey hain aur aj to lag bhi kitney handsome rahy hain inka yeh avatar to ma ne phele dekha hi nhi dekho zara kitni body shody bana li hy lagta hy yeh koi sapna hy haan geet sapna hi hy

Maan's pov

Oh god yeh geet kitni pyaari lag rhi hy dil to kr raha hy issey kahin janey hi na doon abhi yahan utha kr apney sath hi lay jaon iss kay pink pink lips yeh sweet si smile yeh innocent face upar sy uska mjh is tarah dekhna yaar ma apney upar ab control kaisey karon oh god help me!

maan slowly close thier gap, Yash who came downstairs looked weird scene maan & geet having a eye lock and annie is singing and dancing with ayush which makes them funny he slowly come towards annie make sure to not disturb love birds and whisper

Annieee!!

Annie!!

But she is in full mood not hear him he then came more near and said

Oye gadhi!!!

Hunh!!!

dekha apney real name py hi sunti hy

She stopped but it didn't effect on love birds they keep looking each other, yash motion towards maan and geet and asked

Yeh kya ho raha hy?

Kuch nhi bus pyar ishq mohabbat!!!

she said dramatically

Achaaa!!!

Aur tu kya kr rhi hy?

Ma kuch bhi nhi bus music dey rhi hoon

Pr tum ghalat song gaa rhi ho

Nhi song to shi hy

Stupid ma shi gaata hoon tu sunn

Lag ja galey

Lag ja galey

Kay phir yeh suhana din ho na ho

Shyd tum sy iss trip py mulaqat ho na ho

And then both laugh loudly which broke maan and geet's trance first she looked down and then here and there and instantly take back step and got nervous and in nervousness she goes towards annie and take ayush in her arms who is also laughing maan saw her nervousness and chuckled lovingly and then glare annie and yash who broke their lovely moment.




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Edited by nehaa9 - 7 years ago
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Awesome update..
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