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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
good that you changed the inspector's picture
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Awesome just love it update soon love ranvi support gunjan.. veera slap insepector to go to baldev... update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Well written update
lot emotions...
twist and turn
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 8
The police arrest Veera & put her in the same cell where Baldev is in. Baldev is happy. Both hug each other.
Baldev: How come you are here?
Veera: Remember we promised that wherever you are I will be there.
Inspector: So this is the story. You wanted to be here because your beloved is here.
Veera: You are right. I never had any other option. The outside world is so bad that they don't want us to be together. I think we can never get a better place than this.
Inspector: I thought that love has lost its meaning but seeing the beauty of your love I forgot my duty. I am the bodyguard for all the lovers in this world. Whoever opposes it, I will show them the stick.
Baldev and Veera giggle.
HP: For what you have arrested my son Baldev?
Inspector: So he is your son?
He sees Veera & said, "What is this shameless girl doing here?"
Inspector: She is hatching eggs.
Mehra sess Veera & shouts, "Veera."
He then asked, "On what basis have you arrested my daughter?"
Inspector:
HP fights with inspector. and said.
HP: Release my son.
Mehra + HP: Cut the crap & free our children.
Mehra: First free my daughter.
HP: No first you free my son.
Inspector: Nothing can be done till Monday. So you come on Monday with the bail papers & take them. I cannot leave any friend or lovers till Monday
Mehra: I will call the Commissioner.
Inspector: I cannot refrain from my duty. I cannot release them without the bail.
Veeba: Wow.
HP: This shameless & characterless girl is after my son.
Mehra: How dare he talks bad about my daughter? His son is a loafer & a cheat.
Inspector: Stop it. This is police station. Not your house. If you make noise I will put both of you in. Learn something from your children. How they are sticking to each other.
HP & Mehra's eyes pop up. They shout "Baldev" & "Veera" respectively. They said, "Stop them."
Inspector: I can't do anything about it.
The background song is
Hum pyaar karanewaale duniya se na daranewaale... (2)
Duniya se na daranewaale
Yaar jalanewaalon ko jalaayenge pyaar mein jiyenge mar jaayenge... (2)
Hum pyaar karanewaale duniya se na daranewaale
Duniya se na daranewaale
Yaar jalanewaalon ko jalaayenge pyaar mein jiyenge mar jaayenge... (2)

Rok sake jo dilwaalon ko aisi koi jail nahi... (2)
Dil ka lagana is duniya mein logon koi khel nahi... (2)
Baandha hain kisane paagal hawa ko
Roka hain kisane udati ghata ko
Todake pinjara ud jaayenge haath nahi hum aayenge
Yaar jalanewaalon ko jalaayenge pyaar mein jiyenge mar jaayenge... (2)

Laila nahi hum majanu nahi hum zulmo sitam jo hasake sahein... (2)
Roke kisike hum to ruke na apana milan to hoke rahe... (2)
Pyaar kiya hai pyaar karenge hum to jamaane se na darenge
Apani mohabbat ki takad se duniya ko jhukaayenge
Yaar jalanewaalon ko jalaayenge pyaar mein jiyenge mar jaayenge... (2)
Hum pyaar karanewaale duniya se na daranewaale
Duniya se na daranewaale
Yaar jalanewaalon ko jalaayenge pyaar mein jiyenge mar jaayenge... (2)

Mehra & HP fight. The inspector quietly removes the chain & releases them. Baldev & Veera are going far away by their bike. Suddenly, they see a person in disguise lying on the ground. Veera & Baldev come to see who is the person.
Baldev touches him. The person turns out to be a goon sent by Mehra. He shows his knife

Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Part 9
The goons surround Veera & Baldev. Mehra comes & slaps Baldev. He said, "You b****d, I thought you are a child that you will understand if I scold but you have crossed all the limits. You have to pay for what you are paying for rice & flour.
Baldev: Love cannot be measured in rice & flour. It is measured in terms of how much risk can be taken for it. Lovers are mentally prepared for all the obstacles. You have managed to separate us this time but as long as we are alive we will make every effort to meet each other.
Mehra: You will try only when your hands & legs are intact. I will make your condition so bad that you will never be able to meet my daughter.
He instructs the goons to break his bones & drags Veera. Baldev fights the goons but they overpower him.
Veera: Baldev
Rajveer & Mehra holds her. The goons continue to torture Baldev.
Veera pushes Rajveer & runs towards Baldev to save him. She slaps the goons. Rajveer drags Veera. Mehra slaps her. Both take her inside the car. One of the goons hit Baldev on his head, making him unconscious.
Mehra drags Veera home & said, "If you move out of this house, I will break your legs."
Veera: Break it. But that won't stop me from meeting Baldev. I will crawl towards him with the help of my hands. If you break my hands, I will roll towards Baldev with my head. My love will definitely find a way to reach him
Mehra: You took his name again. I have his got his bones broken. I will break him into pieces.
Veera: If you do any harm to him, you will regret all your life.
Mehra: You are challenging me? Daughter is challenging her father? Fine, what will you do?
Veera: You want to see what I will do?
She breaks the whisky glass
Ratan comes in & gets shocked. Veera stabs herself. Ratan comes and holds her hand.
Veera: Mom don't stop me. No Baldev, No Veera.
Mehra comes forward & snatches the broken bottle.
Veera: Have you seen what I can do? You could not bear to see the tears falling from my eyes now you see the blood flowing out of my body.
Veera faints.
Ratan: Veera.
Mehra goes to Rajveer: I have seen enough of this madness. I cannot tolerate anymore.
Rajveer: What are you going to do?
Mehra: I will take her to a far off place. Book the tickets.
Rajveer: But will she agree?
Mehra: If she does not agree I will take her forcibly. Does she think that I will budge to her madness? I will give up my life but will her give her to HP's son Baldev. Have you bought the tickets?
Rajveer: Yes.
He takes out the tickets & gives him
Mehra: What are the timings?
Rajveer: Exactly 3 hours.
Mehra: 3 hours. Here every minute is precious.
He asks the servant to pack Madhu's belongings.
Meanwhile Ranvi & Gunjan see Baldev & rake him to their place. Veera overhears the conversation and calls up Ranvi. Baldev regains his conscious. He asked, "Where is Veera?"
Ranvi & Gunjan are in a fix but Gunjan said, "Dad is taking Veera to a very far off place. Go & save her."
Baldev: No one can separate Veera from me.
He is about to leave.
Ranvi: Wait even we are coming with you.
Ranvi, Gunjan & Baldev go to Veera's place. Mehra starts quarrelling with Ranvi.
Baldev breaks the door. Veera hugs him emotionally & said, "I knew you will come. Please save me. Dad is coming. Please hide me somewhere.
Baldev: No need to fear. I've come. Everything will be fine.
Mehra takes the gun to shoot Baldev but Ratan, Ranvi & Gunjan stop him.

Baldev breaks the furniture & makes an agnikund. Baldev & Veera get married.



Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Lovely superb updates dear
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Amazing updates loved both parts thank you for pm.
Edited by ameena671 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Amazing update dear...Baldev & Veera get married...Eagerly waiting for next update... & thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful updates! thanks 4 da pm

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