Love story of poles apart.......

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello guys!! i am writing here for the first time.. i will writing short stories on our favourite bade acche lagte hain tv show which ended up in 2014 as u all know... ur reviews, joota, chappal, anda tamatar, everything is accepted😉...

This FF starts from the situation where our Ram and Priya realize that they are in love with each other but have not confessed as both are still a very little awkward with each other. so it starts as follows.
part 1:

one fine morning...

"Priya, Priya" where are you??Ram called a several times. He was getting ready for KI in his changing room. "yes coming", Priya entered their room"Kya hua Mr. Kapoor aap itni zor zor se chillaa kyu rahe hai"? she asked heading towards the dressing table.

"Arrey you know that i dont like u going anywhere when i am getting ready for office. tumhe pata hai na muje kitni cheezon ki zarurat hoti hai mujhe and only you know what is kept where. he said. haan haan pata hai mujhe, but i have to arrange your breakfast also right?" she asked.

"ya ya i know, waise kya banaa hai breakfast main" he asked. " sab aapki he pasandka hai fikar mat kijiye she said with a teasing smile. priya after tying her hair started heading towards the couch from the dressing table and just then Ram came out of the changing room heading towards the table near there dressing space to get a file and the two collided with each other very close that they feel each others cologne. for a second priya was lost in his manly fragrance and it was same with Ram. their eyes met both gazed at each other with a very different feeling in their heart which they had never experienced in their life.

see you soon.. with next update...
divya...


Part 2 :

Ram suddenly came to his senses and "sorry". "i am sorry too" she said both smiled at each other and parted to their ways. priya went to the changing room to get ready for her classes while Ram was checking his file. "are you ready priya? lets leave yaar. i have to drop you and then go to office. Main late ho jaunga. Kitna time logi aur?" he asked still looking at his file. ya ya Mr. Kapoor i am ready aap chaliye toh sahi" she came out of the changing room saying this while correcting her duppatta. she was wearing a yellow and green combination.

Ram turned to her the view of his pretty Mrs kapoor was a treat for his eyes. He couldnt take his eyes off her at the same time he could remember their engagement incident looking at at the combination she wore. "Chaliye na" she said and brought him to his senses. "Ek... ek minute ye aaj itni alag kaise matlab kyu lag rahi ho tum?" he asked with a cute smile. "Kyu acchi nai lag rahi hu main Mr. kapoor?"she asked with a confused look. rrey no.. no i didnt mean that mera matlab hai ki tum... tum..." he was literally stammering not able to describe her beauty. "tum tum kya mr. kapoor kahiye na." she asked with a curiosity. wanted to say that ki tum aaj bahot pretty lag rahi ho priya kya baat hai?" he said smilingly stealing glances at her. she was damn happy with his compliment and feeling shy at the same time it was his first true compliment to her. "Kuch bhi toh nai Mr. kapoor jaise roz tayar hoti hoon its the same today she knew wat she was telling was a lie she had a special touch today to look good only for him. "achaaa..." ram said. she smiling shyingly. "haan.. ab chale we are already late" she said moving forward towards the door. "haan chalo chalo" he followed her. He knew she was feeling to shy to handle his compliment.

they left the main door talking to each other. ram got the car from the parking area. priya too got in and they drove off heading towards her classes.

Ram couldnt help taking his eyes off his beautiful wife he was stealing glances and grinning. priya noticed it and she knew the reason for his smile. only the silence spoke till they reached her classes. "Thank you" priya said as he stopped the car in fornt of her classes. "arre wat thank you? dont be so formal yaar come on he said looking at her. "dont be so formal" these words from him filled her soul with happiness as he said it for the first time to her. she thought to herself and thanked him in her heart finally the awkwardness and formalities between them are slowly declining.

guyss i know updates are a little shorter but soon will come up with longer updates

till then, divya...



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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Nice starting...
Let's see what happen next how they will confess their love.
Please continue soon.
Try to PM me from next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start plss lil long update next time just wanna know pls pm me when u update plsss n this was prologue or part 1 as it very short but its ok plss update long update as i love RaYa alot bahut maan karta hai to read about them more plss next part big update plsss
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start but a very short one...
Please do write lengthy updates...
I always love to read about raya...
Next part please pm me...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start... Please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome dear
Love to read anything related to RaYa and BALH
And given to the story intro you posted seems to be very nice
Looking forward to the next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice strt...pls do write long na..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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anything related to RaShi/RaYa is always welcome. pl write more and long updates. and ha one more sincere request. it may sound little odd. but plz continue ur story here only. aur story end tak likho. bich me hi mat chodana. I m telling this coz yaha pe aisi bahot saari achhi stories Hai lekin wo poori nahi Hai. I mean unka kuch end hi nahi Hai.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome too good I really like the way you started off their journey at the point where everyone wanted to read more & new everything every time it's such a nice way to find RaYa around moving for next to read...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 2
Awww awesome It a small update but I m loving it it's nice to read something really good around... even awesome too ...

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