Where did this track go wrong...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Most of us are unhappy and frustrated after today's episode. I was too but I rewatched the ShivIka scenes and it wasn't so bad. The tea scene was cute and a parallel to that scene where Annika drank SairaBano. Shivaay's expression when Annika was pouring the tea in the saucer made me laugh. Him rolling his sleeves to drink the tea as if he was preparing for a war was hilarious. His 'meri biwi' dialogue and his anger was SSO but he had to control himself for the sake of the challenge. Shivaay and Annika trying to protect each other was cute. Shivaay's happiness at coming home with Annika was adorable. Overall I liked today's scenes.
Having said that, I will also say something is missing. The scenes lacked intensity. This track may have been for Annika to see that she is no less than a NKK girl as some ShivIkians are saying but that didn't come across. The execution was poor. I know Lalit Mohan wasn't there and I can see the difference in scenes. Several moments that could have been made to be tender moments between them fell flat because of the poor direction. LM understands ShivIka best and this new director killed the essence of this chawl sequence. This track had so much potential but the poor direction made a mess of it.

The other problem with the last 2 episodes has been editing. It has been, pardon my words, piss poor. The cutting and scattering scenes over the whole episode is killing the flow and reducing the impact of scenes. I know why they are doing it and I really hope that it fails. I liked the arrangement of last Friday's epi much better.

My main problem is that ShivIka are not looking and acting like a couple that have been through a painful 3 months separation. It was traumatic and they haven't talked about it. They both apologized in the gazebo scene and I am fine with that. They don't need to say sorry anymore but they do need to talk about what they went theough. Surely it can't be that easy to move past it? They are acting like a couple who have been together for a long time. It's like they skipped a phase and that's causing the disconnect.

People have been saying that they saw NaRbhi in ShivIka today and I agree. I saw some shades of them in between today. Shivaay was flipping betweenbeing Shivaay/billuji/NM. I saw SC in Annika as well to some extent. The problem could be the script and direction. A major event happened in ShivIka's lives last week and right after that a filler track started. This I think is giving some problems to NaRbhi with how to portray their characters. They have to be told in the script how their characters have to act right? I think they are not getting those directions in the script and that's why we are ending up seeing them in some parts of the episode. Once a proper track starts and NaRbhi have something with substance to act on I think we will get more of an idea as to how to portray their characters.

For whatever reason they have decided to drag the shaadi until the last 2 weeks of September and that means we will get more filler tracks. I also don't think that CVs have decided on where to go with ShivIka after their marriage and are dragging the marriage to give themselves time. We know that drama will start once shaadi starts and as soon as SC comes back from her well deserved vacation they might start the shaadi track. So let's brace ourselves for this week and next week guys. We have been through the crappy separation track so we'll be fine

On a positive note, how gorgeous did SC look in that green saree from the BTS pics today? She finally got good clothes from Shivani Shirali. They will probably show that function this Friday or next week Monday so we have something to look forward to...



That turned out into a very long post and I don't know if it makes sense but I wrote what came to my mind. Chamelis and Chandnis are welcome😆

The obligatory disclaimer😆
PLEASE DON'T START FIGHTS. I DO NOT WANT THIS POST TO BECOME A WARZONE.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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bang on post vyshu⭐️ very neatly written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all Vyshu🤗 Great Post!

I agree with you on a level here, Shivika are not in their zone right now and I am not going to get into the whole talk or touch debate because I think that it has been discussed enough. I personally feel that Shivaay and Annika's character's have become stagnant post re-union as if the CVs do not know or grappling with where to take their storyline as there are few angles they can explore like Pinky-Shivika Track, The Vanwas Track or the Annika's past/Chutki Track. They have made inroads to all three tracks in these past episodes but are no where near choosing one hence we are stuck with the filler episodes. And not just Shivika I feel like IB as a show is at crossroads as there has been no progress happening in characters as a whole. Rikara is stuck, Ruvya is going in ten different directions.The fans are frustrated and so is Channel it seems, hence the cut back on 30 mins discussions.

Hope the CVs, Writers and Producers figure things out before its too late.



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Edited by Eternized_Blues - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Today I felt like more NM-SC than shivika,particularly Anika 's "accha teek hai","teek hai" frequently in the scenes it is actually SC thing not Anika,today was a major missing yaar,i thought today they will show continuity from yesterday's scene but they wasted the potential,i think this filler scenes will continue for 2 weeks having nothing substance or progress in shivika just in timepass mode,yesterday was much better compared to today.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is exactly how I feel babe! I'm missing the intensity n passion that shivika have between all the time. N i also felt shivika were portrayed to be a little awkward in some scenes. Like in the chai scene, I felt a bit of awkwardness between shivika. N that might be because of not getting a proper script like you said n narbhi probably don't know how their characters are supposed to be feeling. Hence why so much SC n NM were seen in shivika today. Ugh well hope it gets fixed soon.
N honestly i have no words for the editing team. They just suck! But now that LM's back hopefully scenes get better as well with proper direction.

I really liked anika's saree too. Lol but it reminded me of our snake😆 But you know what I could do without the garlic looking flower jewelry🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well said Vyshu!! As I mentioned earlier, Shivaay is still SSO but the only difference now is that he is also Annika's Shivaay. We are used to the taadibaaz, dominant, take charge SSO. He has always dictated everything in the Shivika relationship, minus the separation! Annika has addressed this concern before that everything goes according to him, so what we are seeing now is a softness, a softer Shivaay! A Shivaay who is trying to bring in some equality between both members that make Shivika. He is giving Annika that autonomy and somewhere his entire world is revolving around her.

He becomes that protective SSO when need be while keeping the billu switch activated in other situations.

I guess this is just one of the new 'love' shades that Shivaay Singh Oberoi has adapted to go along with the 100 shades he already possesses!

Ps... they gotta do something about the damn editing team!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: smileyallora

bang on post vyshu⭐️ very neatly written


Thanks Smiley😆
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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

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First of all Vyshu🤗 Great Post!

I agree with you on a level here, Shivika are not in their zone right now and I am not going to get into the whole talk or touch debate because I think that it has been discussed enough. I personally feel that Shivaay and Annika's character's have become stagnant post re-union as if the CVs do not know or grappling with where to take their storyline as there are few angles they can explore like Pinky-Shivika Track, The Vanwas Track or the Annika's past/Chutki Track. They have made inroads to all three tracks in these past episodes but are no where near choosing one hence we are stuck with the filler episodes. And not just Shivika I feel like IB as a show is at crossroads as there has been no progress happening in characters as a whole. Rikara is stuck, Ruvya is going in ten different directions.The fans are frustrated and so is Channel it seems, hence the cut back on 30 mins discussions.

Hope the CVs, Writers and Producers figure things out before its too late.



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@bold is my opinion too. They have many loops opened so that they can go anyway but they haven't decided yet and are using the fillers to buy time. I hope they decide fast cuz these fillers are getting annoying...

That cut back is not confirmed yet I think and sometimes I think it will be a good thing if they cut it back because there wouldn't be as much drag that we have now just to fill a hour slot and we might get crisp and clean episodes. But if that cut back happens this forum will become more of a warzone than it already is
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very well written post vyshu..
Very much needed to calm down the fans at the moment.

As u told, the intensity is missing in the scenes

And also bad editing is added on to it..

I think this will continue till next Friday when the makers will have an idea abt the trps of different combinations of editing.

Hope everything comes to normal next to next week.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I agree with you.
Something missing in them is Intensity and Passion.
They take a simple scene to a whole new level which are lacking.

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