Maaneet ss-Main Tumhaare Bina Nahin Reh Sakata.part 3-pg31(17 Aug) - Page 10

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Character sketch is so interesting and now
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IAM SORRY FOR LATE JASO DI...sorry really sorry😭😭😭

After maaneet marriage in MFS story..i update this story regularly..

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Thanks for liking and comments dearies...if any grammatical mistakes in this part ..i am sorry.

This story full dedicate to my Jasmine di..love u jaso di❤️

Part 1


A girl kneel down infront mid age lady as lady sit in corner of bed with pout face..she wore white and black salwar kameez..her dress colour so suitable to her milky skin.her open hairs and kajal applied in her shinning eyes.


A mid age lady : Geet beta, i said na..u not going anywhere alone..with soft voice.

Geet standing in her own foot: mom, plz i am going to London only .it is very good opportunity for learning hotel business from amaranth grandpa..with pleading tone.

Rano: but beta, u going alone and saying u stay in hotel..i am worried about ur safety.

Geet: i am not kid , mom with irritate face


Rano: that only i fearing more...u r not kid..u reached ur marriage age beta..try to understand,our relative side, friend circle, business circle asking ur hand for their sons to marriage. U will choose whom u want to marry otherwise u would love with anyone..tell us..we never denied ur love also beta..with mother concern voice.

Geet hugged rano : Mom,u r very sweet mother but i want to achieve more in our hotel business..mom please understand , marriage not only every girl dream..this is 21 st century this generation girls wish touch to sky..in every sectors, girls achieve in their field and make their own identity..my wish also same , i create my own identity rather than Business man Mohinder Handa ka daughter or Mrs savitri handa ka Granddaughter...everyone say..she is geet handa..she create her own identity ..i want my parents and family see me in proud look...plz mom accept my London trip..without ur permission , i am not go.with pout face.

Rano , allow her to London trip hearing old lady voice standing in door entrance.

Rano standup in bed : Maaji, u also supporting her.with sad face.

Savitri:u trust ur daughter or not..

Rano: Maaji, why u asking this question ..i trust her more than myself..she is my lovely daughter

Savitri : then allow her trip..

Rano: this is not trust matters..it depend upon her safety, maaji with worried tone

Savirtri: trust myword, she become safe in London and she stay in Amarnath bhai villa not any hotel.dont worry about her safety..she become safe in bhai house.

Rano : ji maaji..with half heartly accept their wish

Geet hugged dadi :thank u dadi.. love u mom..

**********

Geet standing near bed as packing her things and one young boy pushed her and jumped her bed and lay her bed in comfortable position ..with smirked face.


Geet: hey duffer, why u pushed me and get up from my bed first with angry face.

Boy: after u went to London , i am only using ur room na.why not today..and bouncing above bed .

Geet: vicky stop ur monkey antics in my room..with angry face.

Vicky: oyie i am not vicky..I am vikas..with attitude face..just call me vikas not vicky with chuckling face.

Geet: hmm.but u r name vicky only na. Vicky ki bachi..with teasing tone..

Vicky pushed her and geet also pushed him..both started their pillow fight like everyday they doing..

Rano come to geet room: stop ur fight...both never stopped their fight..geet snatched pillow from vicky and throw out opps unfortunately that pillow hit to mid age man head to ground

Man placed his hand in his hiccup and angry glare to them and geet and vicky pointed their fingers opposite each other..

Geet N vicky unison:she /he only start fight dad..with innocent face. Vicky pushed her arms andgeet also start whacked him.

Geet: see dad, even infront of u, he start fight with me.


Mohinder : Arhhh..geet beta, two days only , he fight and teasing with u..after u went to London na,if he want tease with u also but he cannot ..dear..leave him.

Vicky left geet room without saying anything and geet sensed her litte bro sadness..he cannot fight with her in single day..how he can away from whole 6 months.

Geet enter in vicky room with two bowls of rasugulla..vicky sitting in window while playing his guitar ..

Geet come to near him : hey duffer, eat ur favourite rasugulla..showing bowl in front of his face.

Vicky: no need with sad face.

Geet smiled : chinnu, ...vicky stand up and placed guitar in above table. He showing his back to geet as starring sky..

Geet turned vicky and noticed his eyes moist.she felt bad for vicky..she knew that her little bro is naughty but senti and more love with his sis.

Geet chuckled face: i think, i have a sister not bro..while wipe his tears from eyes.

Vicky snapped her hand:chinni...with grinned teeth..

Geet yuck face: dont call me chinni..

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Vicky:chinni..chinni..chinni...shout near her ears..with teasing face and run out while escape from her beat..geet run behind him..

Geet running behind :duffer, stop..i am not leave u today..vicky running to garden area..and splashed water geet through water pipe and geet drenched by water and geet snatched pipe from vicky and splashed water to him.. once again vicky snatched waterpipe..geet did it same..after few minutes both got tied ..both sit under ground tree in garden place..its is favourite place of them..both sit back to each other and their back head touched while their both bodies swinging

Vicky: di, i will be miss u with sad face..

Whenever vicky in emotional that time only he called geet to di otherwise he addressing her to geet, teasing name is chinni..and gudiya..

Geet: but i am not missu , duffer..with calm tone.

Vicky turn and come infront of her : u do not miss me with angry face.

Geet nod her head positively : yes..

Vicky: geet ki bachi..i hate u..

Geet: but i love u lot..with smiling face.

Vicky placed head in her lap : di, after u go out our mansion, i use ur car..

Geet: yes, but be careful in driving time..

Vicky: i eat ur chocolate, unfortunately u already preserve one month ka chocolate in fridge with chucking face.

Geet : yes..with pout face.

Vicky laughed : i use ur room ..

Geet:yes, but dont change anything in my room..

Vicky : i open ur secret locker also with rapidly asked

Geet : yes..

Vicky: yes, i use ur secret room, u do not mind...with bangra in laying posture..

Geet: no..u cannot open my secret locker..that only for mine..noone poke my matter..i did not like it..with strict face and angry face

Vicky : one day, i open ur locker infront of u..its my challenge , geet handa..with attitude face

Geet : i am also challenging u..u never open my locker.. let see

what would decide our fate,vicky handa..

Vicky: vikas with grinned teeth.. vicky stand up and almost reading to running position..

Vicky smirked : geet handa, who will be eat icecream first ..while running..

Geet get up and run behind him: if u touch my pistachio icecream..i kill u...sure..hey duffer stop..

**************

Geet layed in bed :wait , London..tomorrow i am coming...Geet Handa coming ...with smiling face .

*****

Big University Campus, London ..

London ka one of the top university ..its excellent infrastructure and high qualification facilities. One side medical block and opposite engineering block present in same campus.

Mid 20's man with evilyface : this time, she obey my word..with smirked face

Same age other man: rahul what r u saying..u did it anything with curious face..

Rahul showing his phone: dev , see this video, i captured her dress changing video..i already sent toher phone..within few minutes , she come in front of me and begging me..if ileave her easily after she slapped me.

A girl wore very short dressand touched rahul shoulder: hey honey, today whom got for u..with smirkingface.


Dev: shilpa. Last weekshe slapped rahul in ragging time na..today he got her with cunning smile.


Sam see some one come to their side (mind)..he so handsome, hot,his bischep and his cute face and his sparkling eyes ..any girl attracted him.just single day..i want his GF..

Man come infront of rahul group with calm face and sam touched his cheeks in seduce way..

Man not see single glance to her and disgusting look at seeing her dressing sense..

Sam: hi baby..how ru..today, u have free time honey...

Man ignore her word:rahul, delete shilpa video from phone..with polite voice.

Rahul: hero come to save heroine dignity ha..with teasing smile.

Sam and dev smiled ..

Man: u r pursing doctor,but ur behave not like that . dont play with her life..its not good for ur lifeand carrier with raising his voice.

Rahul grabbed his shirt: if i do play with her life..what u will do with angry face.

Man calm face : removeur hand from my shirt..its not good for u..

Rahul angry raised andtried punch his man face before he got punch ..rahul hand relief from man shirt grip and rahul nose have bleeding..

Rahul glare to them :how dare .u punched me.., u knew my parents r billionaire even though u punched me..with angry face.


Man: i already saidthat remove ur hand from my shirt..see ur nose have bleeding with teasing voice.

Rahul tried to hit man before other man grabbed his hand and fold behind his back: how dare u try hit my brother in front of me..u think..i stand like statue..

Man: guru..delete video from his cellphone..


Guru : yes bhai..take cellphone from his pant pocket with winning smirk..and rahul tried relief fromguru brother grip..

Rahul shout : u did it wrong with me ..i am not leave u twins brother with angry voice.

Guru: let see.Mr.Rahul...bhai leave him..i deleted video..

Sam and dev standing like statue..yeah they dont want interfere fight..its not good for their carrier

************

Guru : hey man, nowdays, he got more angry in above nose tips.

Man side hug to guru:if any one hurt my brother..u think ..i stand in calm face like u did with him.with rolling his eyes..

A girl come infront of them..


Girl: hey Guys, iheared, u both did new adventures with that stupid rahul ..is it true..

Guru: i am not kumus, our Great Maan singh Khurana did it with head bow infront of maan with folded his hand.

Kumud: really,hey maan..we knew how much u r sweet person but in guru matters only .we cannot understand ur nature..why u over protective him.


Maan: he is not only my twin brother. He is my life..my GURMAAN..with smiling face.

Guru hugged maan: insake only i am not fear with anyone..whenever i am in danger .my saviour come to protective me na with cute face.


(imagine maan twisting guru ear😆)

Maan twisted his ear:dont think, every time i come to save u..next time,u going meet rahul gang na before inform me..dont go alone.

Guru : its paining with fake sad face.

Maan seeing his sadface and leave his ear as rub his ear lightly ..

Kumud starring their bonding ..

Maan wave his hand infront of Kumud and she come to real world..

Maan: why u starring us..if saras see , u starring us without blinking eyes na..poor guy heart breaking into two pieces with teasing tone.

Kumud hearing saras name and her cheek changed to little pink in sake of blushing ..

Guru: Maan, see..our gang ka sherni..blushing hearing her BF name..with joined maan teasing session.

Kumud: u both stop ur teasing, tomorrow ,u both come with me to airport .

Maan and gurmaan:why...with confused face.

Kumud: tomorrow , my cousin coming to London..i am excited to meet her..long back she come to my home..with happy face.

Maan and Guru:sorry..tomorrow..its weekend , kumus with sorry face.

Kumud hit her forehead: opps, yeah i forgot..u both enjoy with ur dad in every weekend right..noone reach ur guys in weekend days...ok no problem ..enjoy ur weekend..

Guru: hmm..u r cousin is beautiful girl or like u..with chuckling face..first kumud not understand guru word ..after sec recollecting his word..and guru run while saving his life from her..


Kumud mouth open widely and run behind him :u, what u said..i am not beautiful...while running..

Maan smiled seeing his brother naughtiness..

Part end.

Maan and gurmaan enjoy weekend day with their dad..

Geet land to London.

Rahul and dev brain washing someone against to Maan and Gurmaan..

If u likes this Part ,plz press like button and comment me..

I know guys..its short update..i did want disappoint one more time to Jaso di.. i already did it more..so i start this story..next time i will update long one..

I think..everyone guessed what film story i write in maaneet version..

Yeah one of my favourite film even my jaso di ka favourite movie "JEANS".she want that i write jeans story in maaneet version...she trust me..i do..i hope and try level my best not break her hope from me...concept same but i pin story in my style only so please bear it ..this story u enjoy two GC and Drashti guys..i gurantee for ur enjoyment..😳😳😳

Edited by maaneetfavo - 5 years ago
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This week i will update all my stories dearies
1) Maaneet SS- HOPE -Epilouge A -pg 98
2) Tera Mera Rishta Puraana hai- Updated part 2
3) Mera Maasoom Patidev - updated- part 5
4) Hey Kaise Pyaar hai - updated part 4

5)My mystery girl - updating --part 2

6) Main Tumhaare Bina Nahin Reh sakata -updated -part 1
7 ) next os Prolouge - Teri Meri ,Meri teri...nahii...updated 😆


this month ka last update of my every stories..so enjoy without my torturing through my update and pm ..hmm..my devil mind not accept this decision🤢..so i will update only MFS in this month.😉.so be more active in MFS thread😳..we do more shopping for maaneet marriage ..we have few days only for maaneet marriage..so lot of work pending ..be active..😳😳😳


Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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loved geet's introduction and dressing.loved geet telling ramp that she wants to stand on her feet. good decision.savitri supporting her was so nice.loved geet rano savitri scene.liked your choice of actors as mohindar rano.Vicky geet bonding was so sweet.their scene was funny cure and emotional. which actor is vicky? rahul is so cheap to do such things to girls. so here dev is shaleen.surprised about it.liked gurmaan maan against them to protect the girl.liked maan protecting gurmaan.maan gurmaan kumud scene was so sweet.really loved their friendship bonding.kumud blushing hearing saras' name was nice as I love samud.waiting for samud scenes too though it's a maaneet ff.kumud geet as cousins will be cool.because drashti Jennifer had good chemistry on dmg and they have good chemistry in real life too.nice pics.can't wait for the next part
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Hilarious update geet want to go to London to do more studies she wants to stand on her feet and become someone but rano worries for her daughter but savitri convince her to go as she will leaving there with her uncle loved geet and Vicky bonding back in London Rahul Sam and Dev are bunch of spoilt brat who tried to play with a girl dignity but maan and gurumaan who are twins saved her Rahul vows to revenge geet is kumud sister and maan and guru are kumud friends plzzz let there be geet twin somewhere as the one thing I hated in jeans was how the other twin never got his love I felt really bad so plzzz if u looking for a twist plzzz let there be twin of geet that she doesn't know about no love triangle plzzz
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Awesome update.
Loved it totally.
Very well written.
Enjoyed reading this.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)
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wow excellent update loved it thank you for pm.

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