Maaneet ss-Main Tumhaare Bina Nahin Reh Sakata.part 3-pg31(17 Aug)

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MY Dear Friend ,Jasmine Rahul this is for u..

nan enre priya suhrtte jasmine rahul I katha pratisha...

( i dedicated this story to my dear friend jasmine rahul..)

note: first iam sry..malayam line translated by google app.if anything wrong in that line..u only blame google not me😆😆

first time i try film story to my maaneet version.plz bear me yaar.i hope jaso i will not break ur trust..u want this story i start our favourite film in maaneet version..but i will try my level best ..this is for u...i hope u like it ..u want anything change tell me..i waiting for ur reply..



Prolouge

A garden full of roses,beautiful flowers, cool breeze ,amazing night ..shooting stars fallen in sky..anyone sit in their place..their heart become lightly and only happiness in their heart.but that girl eyes tears flowing in her chubby cheeks.she looking like cute doll but her tears showing she have heavy pain in her little heart.

Old lady: beta why u sitting in garden..come lets go inside

Girl: dadi,why I did with them with tears touch her chin

Lady:beta this is not ur fault.what i said u did it with worried tone.

Girl: but I cheated my soul mate,my love ,dadi..if he know about my truth,he never forgive me..he go away from me dadi..

Lady: don't think negative..he never go away from u.he love u so much.

Girl: it is killing me.i hate myself dadi..i cheated him..even I cheated his pure soul mate..

Lady: trust ur babaji..ur babaji make everything good.

Babaji (God) : hey old lady everything u did with my favourite kid now u want my help...hey bhagan plz save me from that old lady..

Girl mind voice:I love u so much..i did everything to save my love..main tumhaare bina nahin reh sakata...



my lovely buddies u want throw any stone, tomatoes,i will welcome everything from u..but dont throw hard things to me..iam innocent soul..and ur sweet buddy😳😳😳

my other new story- prolouge and cs..check it guys plz..story really different and mainly cs..😆😆😆

Mohra(pawn)-Victim of hatred - PROLOUGE & CS

( collaboration of mahika and me)

other new stories

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Mera Maasoom Patidev .. PROLOUGE & CS


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NEW Character sketch

Maan singh Khurana: he is 24 yrs old..he is polite,very kind heart person.he pursing final years mbbs in London college.he love his little brother so much .he is little brother but not more age difference only 10 minutes difference.he twin of maan..maan ka life his brother.it's true one both sharing everything..he scarificed anything for his brother.yeah both r same age..but he treat him like baby.his mom died after their birth.maan is kind person but if anyone cheated him.he never forgive that person even though that person is maan lovable person..he never forgive mainly that person hurt guru..omg person face angry MSK.


Gurmaan singh Khurana: he is 24 yrs old.he is innocent,polite dido like brother.he pursing final yrs mbbs in London college.he love maan so much..but he never angry with anyone.he have protective brother.he don't bother anything.his life around only maan.sirf maan.gurmaan means heart of guru. heart of guru is maan.

( dont shock guys both maan and guru look like dido..noone identify their identity whose guru whose maan..)

Gaurav singh Khurana: maan and guru dad.he running famous Indian restaurants in London.he love his children.after his wife, he did not marry once again.he sacrifice his life to lovable children.

Chandu ( not decided yet): he also family of khurana.he is servant in khurana restaurant.everyone treat him like his own family.

Handa family


Geet Handa: he is 23 yrs old..she is modern,bubbly,prankster girl.she love her family so much.little bit stubborn character but she is so sweet.she favourite god her babaji.every time she troubling her babaji so much( babaji: yeah iam poor).crime partner dadi and her little bro vikas @ Vicky and she interest in his father business. she want to learn hotel business in step by step. i mean starting her career with employee..


Drashini

she is traditional girl.she talkless ,lovely girl.everyone love with her seeing humble nature..she live in tamilnadu..she also main character in this stories..u will know upcoming part what about drashti...😉😉


Savitri devi handa: dadi maa of geet and Vicky.she open her mouth..lie only come out in her mouth.she love her grand children.she did it everything to her princess.such a dramabazz character..

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Vikas @ Vicky handa: he is younger brother of geet.he is little bit stupid character and funny guy.he not liked any one call him Vicky..he proudly said iam vikas not Vicky with angry face.crime partner of dadi and geet.he interested in music


Mohinder handa and rano handa: scape goat of savriti devi..they will do what dadi saying..rano so innocent . both never raise their voice infront ofhe is rich person in delhi.he owner of handa hotel company.but chairperson dadi only.she only take any decision..

Other characters


Saraswathichandra viyas @ Saras : he is 26 yrs old.he running his family hotel business in London .he is straight forward character and very sweet person to his friends.business partner of guptas.friend of maan and his lady love kumud gupta.


Kumud Gupta: she is 24 yrs old..she is pursing final year mbbs as same college of maan and gurmaan.she so lovely girl with everyone except riddhima..her step sister..she thought she snatched her mom from her and love with saras . best friends is maan, gurmaan, Armaan and meera and cousin of geet.


Armaan Mailk : He is 24 yrs old .he is pursing final yrs same of kumud.he is very possessive but lovely characters with his friend.he treat gurmaan for his good friend but rudely behave with maan.he have reason also. One side love with kumud. He share his every feeling to riddhima. Childhood friend of geet .


Riddhima gupta: she is 21 yrs old . she is pursing third yrs in mbbs of kumud college. Step sister of kumud..she is very reserved type..she did not easily open with everyone except armaan but she hide her love from him.. yeah one side love for armaan.she carving for love.


Amarnath gupta: grandpa of riddhima and Kumud.business partner of viyas and philosopher of Gaurav Khurana.


Yash malhorta: batch mate of maan ..he is good friend of everyone.. lovely character.


Meera : batchmate of riddhima..best friend of riddhima..


Rahul: he is spoil brat character. He hate both maan and gurmaan..because everyone love them even every professor ka favourite khurana twin brothers.


Samera: current gf of rahul and one eye with maan or gurmaan or both ..


Karan: he is sweet guy. He always control his gang from angry.


Dev: he is cunning mind person..he cannot do anything for his selfishness.

College gang : maan , gurmaan, riddhima , yash ,meera

Next gang: Armaan, rahul,samera, karan and dev.

STAFF OF KHURANA RESTURANT

Edited by maaneetfavo - 5 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CS Above INDEX

part 1

Part 2

PART 3 - page 31


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thankyou thankyou so much for starting the mg version of geet.geet is guilty about cheating maan.what did she do?she did it to save her love? Waiting to know what?cs was superb.I really hope that geet will have a twin sister in this ff unlike jeans.Because I don't want maan's twin brother to be in pain.in the movie prashanth's twin and his geek beloved touched my heart more than the lead pair.so hopefully even if geet pretend to be her twin sister I hope her lie becomes true.you have not put pics for other characters.but no problem. Because I know that you will surprise us with superb actors for your characters
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thankyou thankyou so much for starting the mg version of geet.geet is guilty about cheating maan.what did she do?she did it to save her love? Waiting to know what?cs was superb.I really hope that geet will have a twin sister in this ff unlike jeans.Because I don't want maan's twin brother to be in pain.in the movie prashanth's twin and his geek beloved touched my heart more than the lead pair.so hopefully even if geet pretend to be her twin sister I hope her lie becomes true.you have not put pics for other characters.but no problem. Because I know that you will surprise us with superb actors for your characters


thank u dear..time god u like it otherwise what will i do😃..let wait for some days i will come back character photo ,part 1 soon..dear..sure i will choose super character for ur story.hmm.geet sister..u will know upcoming parts only..😉

above i added my other new story link also check it dear...hey kaise pyaar hai...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice starting
And nice ch
Waiting for update
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Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice starting

And nice ch
Waiting for update


thank u di😃

i will update soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Gurmaan and drashini.unique names.have not heard these names anywhere.loved them
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Gurmaan and drashini.unique names.have not heard these names anywhere.loved them


thank u ji..
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congrats on the new story intresting proloogue and cs lioved it so geet did something that she is scared she woill lose her love but dadi is with her and will support her no matter what

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