New here -One Shot- Let Me Love You

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello people.
Have been a silent follower of the forum for long.
I know most of you here. A few writers and many analysts, shaayars, and the AT and EDT Fandom.

Finally decide to join.

Here's my first shot on Shivika my favorite people.

Not sure about the editing here though :p


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One Shot - Let Me Love You.


"Shivaay! What in the hell are you doing here! Its past midnight. If someone sees us together, we are so in for trouble". She yelled as he shut the door, his all attention now diverted at his wife dressed in angelic white. His eyes traveled down to little exposed cleavage and analysed her full bosom through the material. She stiffened at his gaze.


One. Two. and Three. She was pushed to the wall and he lazily let his desirous eyes devour her lips, her flushed cheeks, and down to those sinful curves.


She whispered his name trying to push him off. No point. The man was too strong for her.

"Anika" he nuzzled her hair placing a kiss on her neck. "The more you try to shove me off, the more I am turned on!"

She gasped.

His hand now cupped her hips pulling her to himself. His eyes not leaving her face.

She murmured something seeing his lips inch closer to her.
The midnight remained silent, while their hearts thudded to the new music of raw passion.Hot full male lips sucked on hers making her feel dizzy and confused all at the same time,as she did not know how to react.
The lips moved over hers hungrily,the his tongue seeking entry into her mouth forcefully and dueling with hers.
She gasped as he held her hands, pinned them to the wall, driving it all the way back up. Leaving them there his hands crushed a waist, pulling her closer to himself, to let her feel the riot she caused in him.

"Shivaay" she whimpered, and he let her breathe.
His eyes filled with intoxicated passion he looked at her, gently rubbing his thumb in mibute patterns on her cheek.
Her scarf now on the floor, her insides all mushy, she looked at him, panting.

He dipped down his head, placing soft wet kisses on the little cleavage his lips had access to.
She held on to his shoulder for support, and arched backwards in natural response.

"Shivaay!" She moaned.

"Don't " he commanded."It makes me want to, make you scream my name louder and do things I have saved for our first night!" He said nibbling her earlobe.

"Stop..we shouldn't be doing this!" she protested enjoying every bit of this sweet torture.

At once he parted, taking two long strides away. His eyes looking down at her. From the top to the bottom again.
He turned to leave.
"Don't go." she whispered.
Smiling he turned to her pulling her closer by the hand. "Then Let me love You!"

She blushed looking down.
"Damn, wrong thing!" he gently lifted her and let her recline on the sofa and came over her like a hungry predator. Her hands involuntarily held onto his arms for support,her nails digging into his skin through the shirt,as his lips went on exploring her tender chaste skin.
"Ahha" She moaned as he bit her hungrily pulling down the top part of the dress. He wanted more. he couldn't risk tearing it all, he wanted to give her the perfect wedding before.
"Sshh.." he whispered huskily, claiming her lips once more.
Reminding himself the wedding first and then the night!

*the end.
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My first try to write a fanfiction, Have written a lot before. but, a fanfic for the first time.
Do let me know your feedback. :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Too intense..
Loved it
Just a query is it oneshot or fanfic??
Plzz be it a fanfic
Plzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ah so sorry. I tried reading this but this is way too 'high level' shot for me 😆

But anyways, welcome to the forum. I am sure you will have a lot of fun here.

Cheers
- Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Girl, this is amazing.Why did you not write on Shivika before? Can't believe this is your very first fanfic and you've already written something so hot, making me fan myself!

Do write more, love.You've done a great job.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful nd romantic
Welcome to the forum officially
Continue it
Do pm if u continue it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That is one hot OS .simply amazing. Do write more please!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was cute and hot at the same time.. so much like Shivaay in all his element.. and Annika the one who as much as tries to hide herself but really can't .. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tht was cute... n adorable...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it...short but really hawt...
Write more on shivika... we all will luv to read
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very romantic and sexy
Loved it 👏

And welcome to the forum as an official member
KEEP writing
Much love!

Edited by S.love1 - 8 years ago

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