Rikara TS- || Dilon Ki Daastan || last part pg 6 Completed. 03-09-2017 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Oh bte ki, never thought of this twist.I thought about confession but not about being locked up.Laughing , imagining a tensed Om...& of course waiting for the next...

Originally posted by: rikara94

I wished in previous update they locked inside but lo go gya yeh bhi yeahhh

He confessed his for love for her in sheesh mehal awww so beautifull and romantic na

Haha i love the way when said mai hoon na but andar se he also scared even more than gauri he is acting like a strong man 🤣

Amazing update anni

Update next part soon

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Their khidkitod confession...
Hawww they locked in the palace..that means more romantic scenes are waiting for us...
Tnq so much for the pm...and sorry for late review..

"Kya!

Gauri starts screaming for help.

Omkara -"koi fayada nahii...koi nahi sunne wala...sabko lagta hain yahan bhoot bhatakte hain.
Gauri gives a worried expression. Omkara to lighten her mood, and also his own."Tum mat daron main hoon naa..! Inside he was as scared as her, in fact more scared than her.

She still tries looking around for people or help.

Gauri turning towards him.."aap jahan hote hai problem wahan hoti hai...Pehle nahii propose kar sakte thee kya..."

Omkara giving a confused expression "tum gussa issliye ho kii hum log yahan phaas gaye yaa kyunkii ...maine pehle propose nahi kiya...?" raising his eyebrows.

Gauri hits him on the chest lightly .."bada mazaak suj raha hain naa.."
"Ok I was kidding sorry..." he suppressed his giggles.

Gauri -"finally aapne agree kiya kii mistake aapki thii...ab bhar paayi bhi aapk karenge.."

"jo hokum jaan..." he winks.

Gauri opens her mouth in embarrassment and nods her head in disbelief. "mujhe bhook lagi hain"

"chalo ... he hold her hand.

Gauri follows.
Omkara had actually remembered the small canteen inside a small room of the palace.

When they reach there they find the shutter closed.

Gauri looks at Omkara with a sarcastic smile. Omkara frowns.yeh band kaise rakh sakte hain!

"Taaki chuhe kutar naa jaye band toh rakhin padegi naa... ab unhe kya pata Jahapana Omkara Singh Oberoi aane waaley hain! She mocks him squeezing her eyes.

"Ab kya! Om asked annoyed.

Gauri gives him a winning expression and pulls out her clip from her hair and unlocks the shutter. He looks on impressed. "Kampat nahi khaaogi...ekdum Gauri Kumari Sarma style? he teases her mimicking her.

She chuckles a fake laughter.."Hota toh ab tak khaa ni lete ...Chaliye kuch khathe hain.."

They had to climb over the table and get in that was the only way.

Gauri.."Kaise..?"

Omkara sees her in saree and understands. He lifts her up in his arms to place her on the table.
Gauri shocked.."Ee Kaa kar rahe hai..?"
Omkara-"Waisa kuch nahii jo tum soch rahi ho...Gauri blushes.

He places her on the table."Apni taange uss taraf karo..itna toh kar sakti ho"
She does that, while he jumps in.
She looks around. He was lost in her.

Gauri sees him and smiles sweetly. "Humein abhi bhook lagi hai..khaana abhi chaiye...",rubbing her shoulders due to cold.

Omkara understands her sarcasm "hmm..maggi..?...thand mein khaane ka mazaa hi kuch aur hain.

She nods. He starts preparing while Gauri watches him adoringly.

He lights the small stove using the matchstick.

"Yeh lo ..garam garam maggi haazir hai.."he forwards the bowl.

She smiles at him lost. He smiles, and clears his throat- "Gauri..maagi..!

She comes out of her stupor and sees the bowl of maggi.

"khao aur batao kaisi bani hai?

Gauri laughs.."Maggi toh maggi hogii naa..!"

He smiles. Both eat like kids and narrate to each other their maggi stories..!!

After they had finished eating.

Gauri looking worried..."Omkara jii hum yahan par poori raat kaise kaatenge...? Thand toh badti jaa rahi hai"
Omkara-"Wo sab mujhe pe chodo..chalo mahal ke garden mein walk karne chalete hain...iss full moon day par toh aur bhi jyaada khoobsurat hogaya hoga ...!!"
He helps her to climb out.
Gauri...rubbing her arms..."mujhe thand lag rahi hai.. aur aapko mahalon ke bhaag mein ghoomne ki!"
Omkara-"apni saaree ko aod lo."

He turns to close the shutter of the shop.
She struggles and removes the safety pin holding the saaree. At the very moment Omkara turns and a strong gush of cool breeze blow her pallo exposing her blouse. She stares at him embarrassed struggling with it trying hard to put it over. Omkara comes forward and puts it over her shoulder. During the entire process she looks at him with love and respect. He puts it around her and gently tucks one side of it on her waist. Then goes forward for a kiss, but just kisses her on the forehead.

"Ab better hain...?" Gauri nods in reply.
They both walk in the palace enjoying each, others company in this beautiful place which seemed exclusively reserved for them.
They go and sit on the banking wall of the fountain.
Both were lost in the beauty of the place. The full moon's light falling on the royal walls created a different atmosphere altogether.

Omkara breaking the silence-"Inn mahalon kii baat hi kuch aur hain naa...waise tum mujhe thanks bol sakti hoo...aakhir meri wajah se hii tumhe itna khoobsurat scene dehkne ko mil raha hai..!"

Gauri looks towards him with attitude..."Humaari wajah see..!

Omkara smirks-"exactly...ek sunsaan mahal mein, sardi ki raat mein...thand mein itni khoobsurati dikhane ke liye...than You mrs. Omkara Singh Oberoi."sarcastically smiles.

Gauri blushes slightly at the way he addresses her."Ab poori raat yahin bethe rahange kyaa..???"
Omkara "nahi chalo...chal ke soote hain..!"
Gauri- Haan ee poora mahal toh aapka hi hai, hain naa?? Baatein karte hain...iss thand mein humaari khulfi jam jaayegi...bataiye kahan soyenge!?"

Omkara smiling," ..Raja ke exclusive bedroom mein"

Gauri-"Aapki tabiyat theek hai, shaayad aapke dimaag ko thand lag gayi hai!."

Omkara.."Arey chalo toh..bahut bolti ho!"

Omkara takes her to one of the many courtyards of the palace where there was an open round room. A mattress with pillows, had been spread out. It was kept for demonstrating how the room used to look in those days.

(It was actually there when I had been to this place.)

Gauri-"Omkarajii aap satyaai gaye hain kya!? hum yahan kaise...?"

Omkara.."Humare paas iske alava option kya hain...! Now if you want you sleep, warna jaao explore karo bhooton ke saath bhajan bhi kar aana!"
Gauri was shivering though she din't show much which was worrying Omkara he tried his best to distract and keep her busy in arguments. He had read the previous days temp had been 10 and there was chance that it would fall even more today.
But he tried his best and kept the atmosphere light so that he would deviate her thoughts.
Omkara-"Who dehko...pointing towards a small mandir on the courtyard wall which had lord ganesha's statue ..."Ab toh baapa ne bhi haan bol diya chalo.."
Gauri sees him and nods having no other option.

After sometime:

Both were sitting on the mattress opposite to each other.
Gauri "Humko bahut thand lag rahii haii...aapko nahi lag rahi kya..?"
Omkara-"..haan thodi lag rahi hai..." he was actually feeling very cold.

He looks around and thinks for a while. Then getting up "tum yahin raho main yun gayaa aur aayaa".
He goes back and gets a small log of wood and lights it up and places it on the holder above the pillar of the room.
Omkara-"tumhe pata hain puraane dinno mein aise hi hua karta tha.."
She smiles, still feeling cold, listening to his vivid narration.

After few mins, she starts shivering more and Omkara goes and hugs her and sits. Gauri understands.
They were in each other embrace and still feeling cold, especially Gauri.
Omkara was worried and started rubbing her back.
He found himself slowly losing control, they were literally glued together.
Gauri was still cold but lost in his thoughts.

Few mins. Passed and yet Gauris shivering din't stop.
Both looked at each other. A thought crossed Omkara's mind but he rejected it, knowing that it might be uncomfortable for her.

But he was too worried for her.
Omkara.."Abhi thand lag rahi hai..?"
"hmm.She nods in a yes, curling herself close to him.
He unbuttons his shirt, Gauri looks at him shocked.
Omkara-"Mujhe pe bharosa hain naa..?" She just nods in affirmation.

He slowly removes her saare pullo and pulling her close to his bare chest wraps the saaree around the two of them.
Both felt the warmth. One hour had passed when they had started shivering more,she held his shoulders tightly gripping him more and more...due the cold.

Omkara just couldn't see her going pale. With much difficulty he hesitantly spoke..."Gauri tum ...mujhe ..I mean hum dono..pati patni hai toh...?"

Gauri was initially cofused at his words and then realisation dawned her, he was doing it for her.

Gauri-"Omkara jii Aap...humaare liye..!? She spoke out her inhibitions.
Omkara-"Mera sab kuch tum hoo...Gauri."
They shared an eye-lock. Their eyes spoke the depth-of-love of their hearts.
He slowly adjust her saaree makes her get up and quickly buttoning his shirt holds her close and walks towards the small temple in the courtyard.
He sees mud lamp with very little oil and a half burnt wig. He lights it and takes the kumkum on his fingers and fills her maang, only after ensuring that she was okay with it.

Omkara-"Main Bhagwaan aur Agni ko Saakshi maan kar tumhe apni patni maanta hoon aur vaada karta hoon tumhe humesha kush rakhoonga."

Gauri smiled and had tears of joy in her eyes.
She now felt that there was someone whom she could call her own. He had finally accepted her as his wife, something she had been waiting for since ever.
They hugged. He took her back and they consummated their marriage.

Gauri's happiness knew no bounds how could he care for her, for her principles even in such a situation.
It was the most beautiful night of her life.
They kept themselves warm with the physical intimacy throughout the night.

The morning dawned only to find the lovers entangled and peacefully sleeping.
A few rays reflecting from the mirror-work of the room fell on Omkara's face waking him up. He sat up and rubbed his eyes to see his wife sleeping peacefully like an angel. He smiled and woke up being careful not to disturb her and got dressed. He looked at his watch and again sat down beside her admiring her sleeping form.

After sometime she stirred in her sleep and opened her eyes to find his eyes admiring her. He smiled. She smiled back not realising the situation.

Omkara-"Tum kapde pehenlo main bahar intezaar kar raha hoon", he quickly left.

Only then did Gauri realise and saw the saree wrapped around her like a bedsheet. She turned red as memories from last night crossed her mind. She quickly got up and dressed herself.

After getting dressed, she noticed the stains on the bedsheet and turned beet red, she quickly removed it and walked outside.

Omkara-"Good morning."
Gauri just glances at him and looks the other way..."good morning."

Omkara unsure about what she was thinking..."Gauri woo...kal...I mean...raat ko jo..."
Gauri looked up at his confused face, understands.
Gauri shyly-"Kal humari zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat din tha...thank you, Omkara ji."
He smiles understanding what she was trying to imply. "Sirf omkara! he whispered leaning down to her frame.
He sees her and then looks at her shoulder indicating something to her.
She tries to read his expression and not able to understand looks at her shoulder only to realise that her strap was seen, she hesitatingly adjusted it.
He smiles,and both share an eyelock. He coming closer takes his hand up to her ear and was about to make her earing proper but stops midway and indicates her to do it herself. Gauri feels weird why did he stop midway, then realising, takes a step towards him and looking at him says softly "Haq hai aapka mujh par..."

He smiles all his doubts were cleared, she had accepted him and their relationship just like he had. He makes her earing proper and then kisses her forehead.." Love you Jaan .." he blinks, sweetly smiling.

She loves it , the way he calls her Jaan..!
She smiles and kisses him on his cheek and says "Love you too Patidev"
Both smile and hug, the time seemed to have stop.
Gauri breaks the hug realising that their focus should be on getting out of that place.
Gauri-"Bahar kaise nikle..?"
Omkara-"Yahan pe jo raj-mandir hain palace ke entry pe wahan roz savere 7:30 baje maata ki aarti hoti hai, jiske liye locals aur tourist aate hain. Hum wahan jaayenge au raise pretend karenge kii hum bhi aarti ke liya aaye hain phir aarti ke baad chale jaayenge.
Gauri nods.

Omkara looks at the bedsheet she had kept behind and Gauri blushes while Omkara tries to control his embarrassed smile.

Gauri-"Iska..kya kare..."

He takes it...ek baar main courtyard mein pahunch jaayen wahans se main neeche phek dunga...parking mein..bahar nikalke dispose kar denge..".

After throwing the bedsheet, they reach the entrance part of the mahal where the the mandir was there and casually enter as the others.

The pandit makes all the couple perform the rituals together. For the first time they do the Pooja together as a couple and each feels complete.

After the Pooja is completed the pandit announces that the special couple Pooja was because yesterday was the most auspicious day and couples who married on that day would stay together for not 7 but all their births and that this Pooja was a thanksgiving Pooja for it.

Both look at each other and were speechless and look forward to the Idol, thanking God.
Both just were overwhelmed and had no words to express their feelings.

The pandit gives him a black thread and asks him to tie it around her neck. Omkara then fills her maang with the kumkum blessed by the Goddess . They take blessing from the pandit and leave.

Omkara goes and disposes the bedsheet. Both sit in the car and leave for their hotel in Jaipur.
It was an hour's drive. Both were silent, listening to the romantic numbers on the radio as if it was just made for them.
Gauri slept during the 1^st half an hour of the drive.
When she woke up she saw Omkara smiling at her. She smiles, and the entire way she kept stealing glances at him. Which of course dint go unnoticed by Omkara.

They reach the hotel. They both decide to eat 1^st and then go to the rooms as both of them were starving.
They have their breakfast and then move towards the lift to go to their rooms and prepare for their flight.

In the lift they were alone and Omkara looks around, there were no cctv cameras so he moves close to her and traps her in between him and the lifts metallic wall.

Gauri:yeh kya kar rahey hain aap hum lift mein hain???? She says shocked.

Omkara:you know very well Mrs. Gauri Omkara Singh Oberoi that what I am trying to do ! he said in a husky tone. Placing his hands on her either side roaming it all over her bare waist, he stared at her with desire in eyes. Her heart beats raced.Om..! She gasped, feeling his fingers draw patterns on her waist.

Slowly his face came closer to her, and he gently took her lips for a kiss.

She closed her eyes preparing to resist, but his strong yet tender lips were impossible to resist. She gave in. The kiss became more passionate. She found herself against the wall of the elevator with her body pressed up against his. She tingled all over. The kiss ended, but he didn't let her go.

"You look beautiful when you blush." He said rubbing his fingers over her flushed cheeks.
As the back of his hand lightly grazed her cheeks, his husky voice sent tingling warmth up her spine. She blushed even harder at his comment.

They both looked at each other as if they were drugged. They were brought to reality by the lifts speaker.
They stepped out. Gauri hurriedly walked towards her room.
Entering her room the room he spoke up.
"Tum tayar ho jaaoo aur packing karlo aadhe ghante mein airport ke liye niklenge."
She just nodded.

Gauri took her clothes and disappeared into the washroom. She shut the door of the washroom and leaned on it smiling and then touched her slightly swollen lips.
She quickly took the much needed shower, and got dressed.

Half an hour later:

He knocked at her door. She had just finished drying her wet hair. Omkara had gone to the receptionist to clear a few things. She opened it.
"Ready...?" he was mesmerised by her look.
Gauri.."Haann...bas thodi packing karni hai aur Bhaujaai ko phone karna thaa..", she said going towards her phone.
Omkara seeing her dori blouse mentally cursed his thoughts. He had never been so madly attracted towards her. He purposely went to the opposite direction of the bed, such that he was facing her. He told himself to flush out the thoughts and focus on her face. But the minute he looked at her face his eyes went directly to her lips which now had a pink glow on, doing no good to his already insatiable thoughts.

He was brought out of his thoughts by her voice..(over the phone)
"Kyaa...
She kept it on speaker and indicated him to listen)
Shivaay:"Haan who actually kuch technical fault hai,issliye flight 7pm ko postpone ho gayi hai. Mujhe laga tum logon ko pata hoga..."
Gauri:_"uu bade bhaiya humne, apne messgaes abhi tak check nahii kiye.."

Shivaay:"Maine kal raat ko call bhi kiya thaa tumne uthaya nahii thaa..."
Gauri looking towards Omkara.

"Wo Shivaay, kal Gauri aur mein ek jagraate mein thee isliye!

She sighs and gets up and goes to the side table to drink water.
The moment she keeps the glass and turns she sees Omkara standing very close.

Before she could realise, his strong arms lift her. He puts her on the bed and he comes over her.
"Om..k.a...! she couldn't complete it.

"Sirf Om! He said nuzzling close to her.

"ee..aap kya..?

Omkara-"Apni biwi se pyaar"

Gauri-"..Kal raat hi toh...", blushes.

Omkara teasin her-"Kal Raat ko kya..?"

Gauri- "Om...!! Humne kal raat hii..."

Omkara pretending that he was not understanding.."Kal raat humne kyaa.."

Gauri turns beet red, and hits him on the shoulder. He smiles.
She blushed but her heart filled with more love for her husband. She could see the sweet desire and longing in her husband's eyes.
Their lips met passionately. His hands worked on her creating sweet havoc for her.

After an hour they both woke up from their nap.

Omkara still looked at her with desire in his eyes and came closer for a kiss.
Gauri quickly moved away.."Soch na bhi mat..."
Omkara made a puppy face.
Gauri quickly went to the washroom and dressed in the saaree...while he changed back into his sky blue T-shirt and denims.

She was combing her hair, he came from behind and held her.
Gauri looked at him through the mirror..
"Aisa kyaa hua hai ...aap pehle toh aise nahii thee.."

He softly kissed her hair.

Omkara comes closer and huskily whispers-"Tab ki baat aur thii..!

Then winks at her through the mirror."Aadat daal lo..Mrs Omkara Singh Oberoi"

They both have lunch and then go to explore the market. They were like a couple on honeymoon.
While Gauri was admiring the art work at a shop Omkara went to the next shop and returned with a set of red bangles perfectly matching her saaree.
He took her hand and made her wear the bangles. She smiled as he put the entire set into her hands.

They had boarded the flight. As the flight was preparing to take off, Omkara was busy looking here and there while Gauri's eyes were fixed on him. She slowly moved her hand towards his to entangle them but stopped midway with confusion. What if he dint like it? She took back her hand and looked outside the window.
Omkara came little close and said "Haq hai Tumhara mujh pe...".
Gauri looked at him smiling and extended her hand towards his.
He now knew how to read her thoughts.
Their hands entangled, played while their eyes were fixed on each other's.

P.S

This was written almost one year back. just posting it now the Rikara version.

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Hope you liked it😳

Do let me know your feedback, requests, comments, etc.

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Wow Anni

Thanks for rikara ts

So sorry for being this late in reading & commenting on this

U dedicated it to me

M so happy.wow rikara fallen for each other but dint.confess

Rikara in Jaipur

Nice ride of palace...

Trully speaking sometimes sight seeing of repeated palaces gets boring so naughtiness & breaking rules r needed...

Wow rikara confess in sheesh Mahal

Super it was

Abhi dono phas Gaye...

Continue soon

Thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: rikara94

Very long to read😆

But i reallly enjoyed it...it was lovely...amazing and suoerb..

Beautifully done anni..

You know rikara in bhoot scene on screen..when they showed i was thinking about you and this ts..haha same to same..show mein bhi omkara dar gya or yaha bhi🤣

It was too romantic and hot update dear...too sanskari..it was lovely to read that haq wala dialogue

Brilliant anni..your magical writings win our heart

i obeserve you are a big fan of anushka right?

Originally posted by: annikaa

that actually reminded me that i 4got to update this one 🤪😆

😆🤣

haan kuch aisa hi samjlo...actually i have loved the characters she has played so far,...n then my frnds here also got used to anushka on my dp as well so yeah...it will be anushka forever😆

1st ever time someone said long read.🤪

Thank you Jo..!😉😆