Rikara TS- || Dilon Ki Daastan || last part pg 6 Completed. 03-09-2017 - Page 2

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hey ani🤗

Its awesome dear...their trip...they choose womderfull destination btw...its my favourite too..they also go to that restricted area.. i thought they spend whole night their or they lost in that area...😆but nai mila

Anyways plz next part plz

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Oh, I thought they'd get caught. 😆

Lovely OS, Anni. :)

PS- Oh there's another part? Eagerly waiting. :)

Originally posted by: appynehra

Ofcourse, it was awesome!! I miss you so much. Would pm you soon!

Omkara and Jaipur- what more could I have asked for!

I would try to keep up with this one so please do continue!!

Shot 2:

As they were about step out of the restricted area Omkara's sharp eyes see a guard and he quickly slightly pushes Gauri to a corner wall and then hides as well, such that Gauri was pinned between him and the stone wall. He covered her mouth and indicating her to see towards the guard. She sees him and nods and indicates him to remove the hand, he obeys.

They were standing so close that their breaths were fanning the other. Omkara found himself losing his control again while Gauri had butterflies in her stomach due their closeness. They stayed like that staring at each other even after the guard had left.

"Aaj aisa kya hain pata nahi...
aaj dil kar raha hain tumhe dil mein chupi har baat batadoon...
Bhoothon ka pata nahi lekin
kuch toh hai iss jagah mein jo mujhe tumhare aur kareeb le jaa raha hain." Omkara spoke to himself in his head.

Finally realising, that the guard had left he moved away.

Little did they know that the guard had come for the closing check to ensure no one was trapped in this huge palace.
As they move out they din't realise the fact that the palace was almost closed down, both were lost in thoughts of their own.

Gauri's thoughts

"Omkara ji Hum jaante hain, ab humaare liye aapke Dil mein pyaar hai. Jis din aap hummse apni dil ki baat kahenge naa, uu din humaare liye Zindagi ka best din hoga.

Omkara's was lost in a whirlpool of thoughts of his own. He wanted to open out his heart to her. He had been trying to from past three days. But something or the other always stopped him. He knew that the feelings were mutual, but still an unknown fear stayed in his heart. He no longer feared commitment and when it was about her, NEVER. In fact he wanted to be the best husband, she deserved every bit of his LOVE. She had stood by him through the thick and thin. She had been a true "Humsafar. It was his chance to let her know that he loved her too.

As they were moving, they see the sheesh mahal,both just love it.
Omkara smiles and holds Gauri's hand and takes her beyond the rope inside the sheesh mahal.
Gauri-"Eee kaa kar rahe hain aap?" He was breaking the rules!

Omkara-"Bas do min.."

He takes her to the centre of the Sheesh mahal and makes her stand there. Gathering courage he speaks.
"Yahan ke har mirror mein sirf hum hain dehko." He says pointing around to the ceiling, pillars and walls of the room.

She sees in awe. He goes down on his knees
"Gauri I love You...I know ek dum se yahan iss tarah...magar...I Love You...

Pata nahi kab, kaise , kis tarah, Lekin Pyaar Hogaya Tumse!

Main jaanta hoon, kuch shikwe, shikaaytein shaayad abhi hogi tumhe,

Honi bhi chaaiye.
lekin...Main..." He falls short of words overwhelmed by emotions.

Gauri had tears of happiness in her eyes. She makes him stand.

"I love you too.."

Omkara smiles. The moment was absolutely breathtakingly beautiful for him.

She turns slightly pink and both hug. Each mirror reflecting the love they had for each other.

There couldn't have been a better proposal than this for her. The man she loved, loved her back the same.

She looks up her head against his chest and smiles at him. He wipes the tear at the edge of her eyes, and smiles back, holding her in his protective hold. And again they get lost in each other.

After what seemed eternity, they broke the hug. He bent down cupping her face, she looked up at him smiling shyly. His lips touched hers and he pulled her closer to himself, her heart slammed against her ribs. Before she could think he deepened the kiss. She surrendered and went on her toes, her hands taking the support of his shoulder.
Finally they came apart she was too shy to meet his eyes and looked everywhere except him.
He brushed her hair, tucking them neatly behind her ears.

Thankfully the palace din't have cctv cameras he thought smiling.
Gauri after composing herself with lot of effort..."Chalee ..".
He simpered, "hmmm.."

Neither of them spoke. As they moved out their hands entangled. As they moved towards the exit both of them were shocked to see the exit closed. They looked at each other, shocked. He went to the wooden door and peeked through the slit only to find the metallic gate outside it also shut. He was shocked but masked his expression. She looked terrified, as though she had been left locked in a den to be eaten away by lions.

She looked at him.."Ab kyaa...?"

Omkara-"Arey, yeh sab tumhaare wajah se ho raha hai, tum baatao"

Gauri "yeh sab aapki wajah se hua hain Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi...aapko hii sight-seeing karni thi...aur aap Dil ki baat Bumbai mein bhi keh sakte thee...!!"

Omkara-"Yah acha hai tumne sab mein mera saath diya...aur sab enjoy kia...aur ab ilzam mujh par daal rahi ho.."he faked annoyance grinning in the head at her cute scolding.

Gauri glares furrowing her brows,"Phone dijiye ..apna.." she extends her hand.

Omkara frowning his Google-Wife was back,but he had forgotten his phone. He ctually never did feel the necessity of caring it around and due to his habit he had forgotten it...Apna use karo.." points to her slim clutch in hand.
Gauri worried..."Humaare paas phone nahi hai.." pointing towards the clutch " iss mein phone fit bhi hoga kyaa...uu fit nahi ho raha thaa toh humnahi le aaye. She completes panicking.Ab aap dijiye!

Omkara looking in disbelief...".I don't carry my phone usually,..actually main bhi bhool gaya honestly.Lekin tum Toh kahin aur rakh leti, par rakh ti toh."

Gauri.."Kahan rak thii apne sar pe..?" looking irritated.

To, irritate her more."Wahin jahan ladies rakthi hai.." and lighten the tensed up situation they were in.

"Chii Aap pagal hai kya...mobile kaisee...chee...ab aage kya?" She looks around, anxiously and fidgeting with her saaree.

Omkara.."mazaak kar raha thaa...ab kya itna khoobsurat palace hain yahin par raat guzar te hain.."

"Kya!Gauri starts screaming for help.

Omkara -"koi phayada nahii...koi nahi sunne wala...sabko lagta hain yahan bhoot bhatakte hain.
Gauri gives a worried expression. Omkara to lighten her mood.."Tum mat daron main hoon naa..! Inside he was as scared as her, in fact more scared than her.

She still tries looking around for people or help.

P.S

Hope you all liked it.

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