Rikara TS- || Dilon Ki Daastan || last part pg 6 Completed. 03-09-2017

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Srivalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Awesome update.

Loved it.

Very well written.

Enjoyed reading this.

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perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Aaa i was right! my tangent was the right one *does victory dance*

Independence day is teasingkara day ! All the stories i read today had teasingkara and he is oh-so-adorable!! The proposal was so beautiful..in sheesh mahal😳☺️

and the dialogues were just tooo good man. "wahan jahan ladies rakhti hain" lol lol lol🤣

And omkara scared of ghosts but acting all strong and mighty😆 my tangent says gauri will be taking care of scaredkara😉

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Oh bte ki, never thought of this twist.I thought about confession but not about being locked up.Laughing , imagining a tensed Om...& of course waiting for the next...

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

I wished in previous update they locked inside but lo go gya yeh bhi yeahhh

He confessed his for love for her in sheesh mehal awww so beautifull and romantic na

Haha i love the way when said mai hoon na but andar se he also scared even more than gauri he is acting like a strong man 🤣

Amazing update anni

Update next part soon

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Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Their khidkitod confession...
Hawww they locked in the palace..that means more romantic scenes are waiting for us...
Tnq so much for the pm...and sorry for late review..

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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Thank You So Much All Of You For The Appreciation..!

I m glad you all liked this light hearted romantic take on Rikara😳

The Beautiful Banner😳

Banner credit - sameera_12

Thanks dear for the lovely banner. Fits the story perfectly😃

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Wow Anni

Thanks for rikara ts

So sorry for being this late in reading & commenting on this

U dedicated it to me

M so happy.wow rikara fallen for each other but dint.confess

Rikara in Jaipur

Nice ride of palace...

Trully speaking sometimes sight seeing of repeated palaces gets boring so naughtiness & breaking rules r needed...

Wow rikara confess in sheesh Mahal

Super it was

Abhi dono phas Gaye...

Continue soon

Thanks 4 pm

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shrenalian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Hey this was terrible...I m very curious to know about what happened next... plzzz update soon dear...

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Mehnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Wow! Read both the parts in a go... Loved the plot and the feeling of the historical place.. It felt like Bhoot Bhulaiyya.. Shuruwat se expect kar rahi thi koi real spirit aayega aur in dono ko bhaga dega! 🤣 Seriously it was wonderful! Maybe you can write another part where such situation arises? 😉😆

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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: perfictionist
Aaa i was right! my tangent was the right one *does victory dance*
Independence day is teasingkara day ! All the stories i read today had teasingkara and he is oh-so-adorable!! The proposal was so beautiful..in sheesh mahal😳☺️
and the dialogues were just tooo good man. "wahan jahan ladies rakhti hain" lol lol lol🤣
And omkara scared of ghosts but acting all strong and mighty😆 my tangent says gauri will be taking care of scaredkara😉

yes😆

updating right away😆

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