avneil ff it was always you chapter 4 updated on page 3

Avni was packing her luggage sadly.
Tears were just flowing from her eyes.
Juhi was back to Neil's life she should be happy right Why Was she sad? Why is this hurts so much? She was always supposed to leave Neil's house one day or other but today when she is finally leaving it feels like she would not survive anywhere. Known or unknown she had considered this house as hers this room has hers and it hurts to leave this things.
Neil entered the room to find avni packing her luggage. A fear came into his mind.
Was she leaving him ? But why?
" avni where are you going? " asked neil.
" juhi is back Neil. I don't have any right upon you and this room. It always belongs to juhi. I was in illusion right" said avni in broken voice.
" avni please don't go . Give me some time I will make everything correct " said Neil.
He could not survive without her. Maybe juhi is back but his life revolves around avni now.
" no Neil please for making things right for me. Don't do injustice to you andyou and juhi. U both deserve this happy ending. Please let me go " said avni.
Before Neil could reply. Shweta and juhi rushed to his room.
Shweta saw avni packing and her swollen face and understood she is leaving.
" thank you so much avni for bringing my Tillu's happiness back. I feel sorry for you beta but some things are not meant to be " replied shweta harshly.
Juhi hugged avni and thanked her.
" I think I should leave now" said avni sadly and went away.
Neil was going to stop her but juhi was holding his wrist hardly he could not. Neil looked at juhi she was smiling but will this smile remain the same after he tells the truth. He will tell the truth after sometime but before that he should make juhi realize that he is not the neil she left behind he is avni's neil Now. He does not want to break juhi but can't let avni go away also.
Neil went out of the house informing everyone that he had some work outside. He noticed juhi's sad face but he can't fake love in front of her and shweta request went in deaf ears.

Avni entered neela's house and broke down. She started crying. Ali and neela entered her room to find her so broken.
Neela hugged her and consoled her but avni's sobs never ended.
" look maa. U said I will get the love which ayesha maa and you did not get but see even I did not get it " said avni between the sobs.
" avni I will talk to Neil beta. " said neela she could see avni in pain.
"no please leave me alone please " avni said.
Ali and neela left the room sadly.

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Chapter 1
Neil had come to his flat. The place where he had lived his worst and best days this was the place where he had started afresh after juhi's assumed death. This flat was only his he had brought it with his money which he earned not his father's. He entered the flat and sat in the bed only to be remembered about avni. How can he forget this flat has his and avni's one of the best moments it was their home. Neil started remembering their moments in the flat how he used to trouble her with her questions and their intimacy, avni used to act like fool she never used to understand Why Was he staring at her? He was in love with her and he had given her ten days to tell her heart's decision before he expresses his love and avni was speechless Neil's face lit up thinking about it and he smiled but the ringing tune of his mobile and the name display in that brought him to the cruel reality that crushed his smile. Neil did not pick the call and switched off the phone. Neil did not want to come to reality for sometime he wants sometime to hold himself before he takes the decision. One heart has to break otherwise three hearts will get broken and will never mend.
Avni stopped crying as tears failed to stream from her eyes. She saw the calendar in front of her and smiled sadly and said "five days more ". She remembers about Neil's challenge and a smile lit up her face.
" Neil why are you starting at me all the time " said avni innocently that made neil smile.
" u tell me avni why I am starting at you . Why don't I feel like seeing anything when ur in my front .why I feel like seeing you only every time " asked neil looking intensely at her.
Avni did not know what to reply. She did not expect him to say this things. She continued putting the medicine and avoided seeing his face. Neil smiles seeing her reaction.
" OK fine I will give you ten days tell me the reason I will stop staring at you. I promise " said Neil.
Avni looked at him and went away.
Five days more and she still did not know the reason but before completion of his challenge,Avni knew one thing she had fallen in love, the feeling which she never wanted to have in her life seeing her mother's condition but unfortunately she had fallen in love she could not stop herself from falling in love with her husband Neil khanna who was no where like her father , he was supportive and stood beside her unlike her father. Avni thought about her fate every girl wants a person like her father as her husband but she wants someone who is not like him.
" I love you Neil. I wish I could tell you this " whispered avni in a broken voice looking at the stars in the sky.

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Fantastic update
Neil has to take right decision now
There Avni is also in pain and loves Neil too
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Chapter 2
Avni and Neil remembered about everything which happened. First time avni wished she did not meet juhi.
Avni meet juhi and found something wrong with her and wanted to help her she did not want to stress Neil because of his liver transplant thing so she took DD and Ali's help and found out juhi's address she did not know her name also that time.
Her plan was to go here with DD and Ali help juhi out before ganesh chaturi. Everything was perfect in her life she had realized her feelings for her husband and waiting to confess in it on the tenth day of their challenge till that she wanted to enjoy this small moments acting like a tube light in front of him.
The plan day had arrived but there was no Ali and DD seen. Avni waited for them but no one arrived so finally avni decided to go by herself for juhi's search. She left for the place and found juhi finally and was escaping with her but found herself trapped there. Avni realized the place was brothel. She begged the people let her go but nothing worked. She was locked in the room.
Neil was worried for avni. DD and Ali revealed that today they were planning to go with avni for helping a girl but she was nowhere found and also said that the plan was actually postponed for evening from afternoon by avni by message and they arrived late in the destination and did not find her anything. Neil saw the message timing and understood everything. He asked DD to track mobile phone of avni and when the location was traced everything fell into place.
Neil rushed to avni's room with DD and Ali angrily.
" where is avni amol mehta" asked neil angrily.
" I don't know Jiju "amol said acting to be sad. Once he feared did neil knew the truth.
Neil holds amol by collar and says dangerously " I know that you were acting this much days. I know you are the one who tried to kill me. I know avni is in some trouble because of you. Tell me the full truth now it self otherwise I know how to bring out the truth out. "
Amol gulped in fear and said everything including the location where avni is kept captive. Neil asked to DD send amol to jail no amount of plea from amol could convince Neil. Amol was taken to jail for trying to kill Neil and helping dayavanti mehta in kidnapping avni.
Avni's was crying in her room when a woman entered with clothes and said
" no use of crying. Wear this clothes you are going to dance "
"I will not " protested avni.
" look lady. Either you dance or you will be send to sleep with someone . Believe me no one is human being. U will be raped by animals " said the lady.
" my husband will come and take me away " said avni with confidence knowing that Neil will come to rescue like always.
The lady smiled strastically and said " fine till your husband comes you dance otherwise you will know. Here are the clothes ".
Avni wore the clothes and she was feeling uncomfortable with it. She was dragged and made to stand in centre of people who was looking at her with lustful eyes. Avni looked up to see juhi standing with tears in her eyes guilt was seen in her eyes .
The music played and avni started dancing. Avni felt disgusted towards herself when someone came near her and tries to touch her but was stopped by goons there. The lust full eyes did not help her either. She was almost going to cry when she saw Neil coming towards her she could not believe her neil was here, she knew he would be here. She ran towards him and hugs him tightly shocking everyone. Neil hugs her back and tears were wetting his shirt . The goons were coming to push Neil but before that the police surrounded them.
" Neil I don't like this place. Take me away from this place " said avni.
" I will avni. Don't cry " said Neil.
He cupped her face and kissed her on the forehead and holds her wrist not letting her go.
" who the hell kidnapped my wife? And made her dance forcefully answer me " asked neil angrily.
Neil looked at avni and found her uncomfortable in the place.
" I will see you people afterwards. DD take them to the police station. I will come after dropping avni to her place " said Neil.
He and avni were going when juhi came in front of Neil and hugged him and said " neil I knew you would come for ur juhi ". Neil did not know how to react? Shock was written in his face. Avni's world crumbled knowing Neil's first love was back. Avni left Neil's hand and went towards the car knowing that it's time she should pack her luggage from Neil's house hardening her heart.
Only if she had turned back she could have noticed that Neil did not hug juhi back. He was just trying to come out of the hug to go towards avni.
Precap : the decision is made. Avni and juhi meet.

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