Originally posted by: melovesja
Nice story rashmi.😊 like the clearing of air between two bro in simple way.
Pls. Try to write about update on main page in title so we got to know.Thanks.
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Originally posted by: melovesja
Nice story rashmi.😊 like the clearing of air between two bro in simple way.
Pls. Try to write about update on main page in title so we got to know.Thanks.
(Jodha was driving the car Towards Hospital which Salima didn't notice but when they reach there Salim ask With Surprised Look on her face to Jodha with Curiously).
Salima said : little one were going home Didn't we so why are we here in Hospital are you not feeling well .
(Listening this Jodha Look at Salimka And spoke while Unbuckling the Seat belt from her).
Jodha said : I am fine Di it's just that You we come after every three months to donate blood .
Salima said : oh I am forget little one now Let's go to donate blood .
(after that both of them goes inside the hospital and donate there blood after that they goes to one old age home and spend some time there with them and share there college incident then Jodha take Salima one orphanage and seeing the orphanage board Salima get surprise).
Salima said : this orphanage in my name how and when.
(Listening her Queries Jodha smiled naughtily to her Sister and spoke Calmly) .
Jodha said : this is small surprise from me to you remember once two month before I participated in singing concert and there I won the first prize and you said two save them and you submit that in bank not is it and after two weeks didn't I made one painting and that was selected for painting gallery and one four days before I got email from there that I got the third runner up prize to so next day I come here and buy this for you with my winning prize Di didn't you like it I thought you will get happy but you are crying .
Salima said : it is the best gift in my life you know this place has lot of memories of my childhood this is the place from where your parents adopted me and the tear are for happiness little one you did this much for me I can't believe that you mom dad when they don't have child when they take me from here next day they got news that they are going to become parents but they didn't let me go you know mom some time said that I come to them like angel who filled happiness in there world and you are there sunshine who make them shine like star and today you give me this love you little one I love you so much.
Jodha said : okay now stop shedding tears I don't like them whether they are for sad or happiness I just want to see smile in your face okay.
(then they entered the orphanage and again Salima got surprised to see her college friends there with birthday cake and they all wish her birthday and had lot of fun after two hours the goes to mall for some buy some dress then they goes to there home) .
Jodha said : Di you go and take rest we did so much things today and you are looking really tired now go to your room.
Salima said : okay I am going to my room and please wake me on dinner time okay and you don't dare to make anything okay.
(And saying this Salima goes to her room for some rest and here Jodha clean the whole house and then goes to freshen up and after few minutes she made dinner in one hour and started watching TV suddenly Salima come there and).
Salima said : you didn't wake me up look now eight pm and I will make dinner now then it will take lot of time why didn't you wake me up little one.
Jodha said : because I have one more surprise for you and for seeing that you have to get ready .
(and on the other side Jalal after listening goes to mall for buying some gift for his ladylove and her sister and he was looking no less then any teenage boy everyone get shock to see the officer smiling for no reason and when he goes to see some dress he get confused that what to buy dress or jewellery book or show piece music instruments or gadgets and sweets or cake and not getting any idea he called his devil brother).
Jalal said : Mirza come to Mall its an emergency come fast. I need your help
(Mirza get shocked listening his Bro words but before he could say anything Jalal cut the call he So Mirza hurriedly rush out of house get inside his car and started driving in full speed breaking all the traffic rules. which make Many Traffic officer Rush behind him. But he Ignore that. and as soon he reach mall and entered he rush to his Bro. and ask In Desperate Concern Way).
Mirza said : what happen Bro are you okay why did you call me tell me fast .
Jalal said : I can't decide what gift I should buy for Jodha and her sister so called you here but why these traffic police following you here what you did .
(listening his brother words Mirza fell on floor on unconscious seeing this Jalal get panic and sprinkle some water on his face then he wake up and angry voice).
Mirza said : are you mad bro you called me here saying it's emergency and I drive the on helicopter speed breaking all the traffic rules and you are saying why those traffic police are following me and you are saying what's wrong.
(listening all this Jalal get embarrassed and give them his sheepish smile and seeing this traffic Officer Just Smiled Understanding what had happen left from there without Any words. and then Jalal turn to Mirza. and with guilty look ).
Jalal said : I am sorry I please forgive me for my stupid act and I promise this will not happen again .
Mirza said : fine leave that let's Select gift for them...
( they both buy gifts and then goes to there house and again started having fight what to wear because Jalal always look perfect in every Dress but today he want look best for his ladylove and Mirza is to less than him he is making him wear all the saying it will look good and when Jalal come to wearing dress he than rejected it saying no it is not good it takes them lot of time to select it then they com blue shirt back blazer and black pant and black shoes and Mirza Select white tee-shirt jeans pant with leather brown shoes with half black jacket and then both wear there Rolex watch apply some Gel on there hair use some perfume and they both were ready and both were looking like Prince from royal family and giving each other mischievous smirk they made there way to there destination).
(on the other side Jodha wear light blue color gown made her hair curl style let them open put some blue color hair band on her hair and made her way to her Di room and make her wear light white color gown and make her hair open to and make her wear black color hair band on her hair and they both made there way to downstairs when suddenly they hear doorbell ring than).
Jodha said : I will open the door .
Jodha said : welcome all of you and I am glad you all come here just by my onecall . let's come inside now...
(Listening this all of them entered inside with smile. and seeing Abdul thereSalima get shocked and seeing her surprise Abdul give her wink and then huggedher).
Abdul said : happy birthday beautiful you didn't expect me here right but whatto do love we can hide by the world but can't hide by your James Bond sistershe is really very smart she caught me meeting with you in coffee shop and shegot it that we are in some relation and invite me today on dinner here buttoday I want to say something to you .
(His words were no less than shocked to Salima and when she saw him bending onhis knees she shook her head desperately in no. but he ignore her look. andtake out the ring his pocket. and spoke with smile and love in his eyes).
Abdul said : I see my family in you I want to live my life with you... I wantto share my happiness with you i want to share my success with you... iwant to give you everything you desire to... I want to see your happinesswould you like to be my family ...would you like to live your life with...would you like to share your fear sorrow and pain with me... wouldyou be like to be my world would you like to marry me... you don't have toworry for anything my love ...but please say what your heart say please...
(Listening this Salima Heart gethappy she was about to say yes. but than something clicked in her mind and shespoke in stern angry tone)..
Salima said : no I don't I told you my reason for not excepting your decisionstill you.
(listening this everyone get shocked but didn't said anything but how can Jodhawill keep quiet when her loving sister breaking her heart for her sister onlyso she goes to Salima and grab her hand. and spoke stern yet calm face staringdirectly at her sister eye).
Jodha said : just for me you are destroying your life why because you don'twant share my right of love with anyone ...why you know Di I always want my parentswith me but I never miss them ...you know why because you are alwaysthere whenever I feel like I am alone ...I always share my pain myhappiness my doubt with you but you never... why answer me ... today yousaid after I born then to mom dad never ignore your happiness... rightbut today you are ignoring your happiness because of me then woulsn'tthere should be restless today... seeing her one daughter sacrificing herlove for there another daughter... will they feel happy with this Di...tell me do you think I will be happy after knowing ... that yousacrifice your love for me no I will always feel guilty Di ...tell medo you think I am selfish that just to fulfill my dream... I will let yousacrifice your happiness Di now think and answers me right now ...
(with all the Way speaking to her sister Jodha get tears in her eyes as well.and after seeing her crying Salima feel guilty, and thought what will Jodhafeel about this all. so she turned to Abdul but before she could say something.Abdul Hugged her again and spoke in calm loving assuring tone).
Abdul said : you don't need to apologize I understand your emotions... nowtell me is that still your answer is same as before... .
Salima said : no I love you Abdul i really love you... I to want spend restof my life with you please... forgive me for hurting you i never want tohurt you it's just that... I never want to leave Jodha and that's why Ireject your ...proposal but I do love you Abdul .
( That's what Abdul wanted to hearSo he Just smiled and spoke in Loving voice again).
Abdul said : I love you to beautiful.
(and then both turn towards Jodha and hugged her everyone get smiled at themand after few minutes ).
Mirza said : we are here to Bro .
(and with that everyone hugged each other. but after few Minutes Salmia spokein surprised Curious way).
Salima said : when did you plan all this and how did get to know about this alland when you invite them all.
(Listening this Jodha smiled AndSmirk at her sister than spoke in Naughty tone).
Jodha said : what do you thoughtDi... I will not caught you that you fall for someone... and today Iinvite him here to give you... the last surprise of your birthday but...when I call him he said he will not come because he don't go on anyparty... without his best friend but I didn't had any clue who is my wouldbe jiju 's friend ...so I called Shivani and she told me about Mirza brotherand coincidentally I met Mirza ...today in mall and with that I invited themto ...and he to come here so everyone got your answer.
(Listening this Salima goes toJodha and grab her ear and spoke in Stern tone).
Salima said : so you are not mylittle one anymore... you now become my little devil you plan this muchtoday... and you didn't even let me get any clue about it... andwhat is this why are you calling him your would be jiju ...again and again...
(Jodha act like innocent Kid andstruggle to free her ear from Salima Grip. but not getting Success She spoke inCry Naught Voice).
Jodha said : I will tell but firstleave my ear Di... and whatever I did it was your birthday surprise and ifyou got the clue about all this then ...there will be no fun and aboutcalling him would be jiju... then what's wrong in that he loves you and youto loves him don't you ...
(listening this Salima started blushing heavily and Abdul get embarrassed andstarted looking here and there and everyone enjoying seeing there faceexpression and then Jalal hugged Abdul ).
Jalal said : congrats buddy at last you propose her I am happy for you.
(then Mirza goes to Jalal and in very slow voice).
Mirza said : Bro you have chance here do dance Bro she is really happy and Ithink it will best day to propose her you know what I mean.
(Listening this Jalal look at Mirzathan at Jodha and spoke in Low Voice).
Jalal said : I want her to give mekiss not slap ...okay and don't interfere in this I will handle her later...
(Soon All heard Shivani Words andcome to The direct point).
Shivani said : you called us forDinner or let us starve for food .
Jodha said : I apologize come everyone dinner is ready .
(then all goes to had there dinner talking with each other).
Mirza said : food is awesome from which Hotel it is ordered I want tokiss those hands . Who made these Delicious Food...And I will Always Order myfood from that Hotel only...
(Listening his Words Jodha give ashy look while other Nodded there head in agreement. Abdul Spoke as well topraise).
Abdul said : really Mirza is rightthe food is really tasty.
(Listening Abdul Words Salima Giveproud look to Him and stare at Jodha than spoke with warm smile).
Salima said : wholedinner is made by my little one and she is really a great cook .
Shivani said : why not she will great cook after all she is my friend so she isbest .
Jalal said : yes the food is really good .
(after having there dinner they goes to sit on sofa actually no one want to leaveand they have same reason Abdul because of Salima Jalal because of Jodha andthere is another love bird to and that was Shivani she was looking at Mirzacontinuosly and that is Making him uncomfortable).
Jodha said : what is this all of you are best friends and there is no game andno fun what's wrong with you all guys... okay leave it Di tell me about yourlove story how did you met him how both of you relise your love tell meeverything.
(listening her sister questions Salima hide her face in Abdul chest and hehugged her).
Jodha said : okay leave that Di if you are being so shy than you tell meabout all this my would be jiju .
Salima said : enough little one stop teasing us okay or else there is no onebad then me okay .
Shivani said : leave all that lets play truth & dare okay .
Jodha said : good idea let me bring something
(she goes to bring one bottle and then in few minutes she comes and they startspinning the bottle first it stop at Mirza and he choose truth).
Shivani said : do you have girlfriend .
Mirza said : no I don't have any and when I goes to make one I rewarded by slap.
(everyone started laughing then again they spin the bottle and it's stop atShivani and she choose dare).
Jodha said : confess your love to the one whom you love very much from such along time .
(listening this Shivani goes to Mirza).
Shivani said : I am not doing this for only this game... actually I am doingthis because I want to confess it to you... that I really love you from thetime I saw you... when you help me on my first day in college... whensome senior commenting on me in a bad way... and you come and stopthem I started liking you... i thought it's just attraction but then afterthinking about this...I realise it's not just attraction it's beautifulemotion called love... I love you Mirza and you don't have to say anythingwhen you felt something... then tell me about that till then don't saybecause it's life decisions... and they can't be taken in hurry andwhatever your answer will be... yes or no I will except it okay .
(and with that she goes to sit again on her place leaving everyone in shockmore than everyone Mirza get shocked then Jodha again spin the bottle and it'sstop at Jodha and she choose truth).
Salima said : do you have any feeling for any boy and if yes then what is hisname.
Jodha said : yes I feel something for one Boy...but I don't know what isthat feeling called... attraction love or something else i don'tknow...but when I first saw him I want to meet him again ...and Godfulfill my wish without asking... I again met him four time he is smart goodlooking hell handsome... and he had good job to that's all...
(listening all this Jalal felt hurt he get broken he thought that she likesomeone else but he compose himself to not let other know about his feelingyet. so he didn't react in anyway neither he said anything. MirzaHold his hand tightly Understanding what's he going through. But than theyheard Salima Question again.).
Salima said : you didn't told us his name
(listening this Jalal is about to get up when he heard her again and getshocked).
Jodha said : his name is officer Jalal Mohammed ...yes you all heard meright I don't know what I felt is right or not... but I do feel somethingand in that case I wouldn't lie...
(listening this all get happy Mirza give silent thanks to God and what to sayabout Jalal he felt like in he is flying in clouds . than after few minutesJodha again spin the bottle and it stops at Jalal and he choose Dare ).
Mirza said : everyone know that you are good cop... but today we would liketo hear song by you ...
(Listening this Jalal take Guitarwhich was Near jodha and playing some tune with Dreamy Lost look startedSinging).
hue bechain pehli baar
humne raaz ye jaana
mohabbat mein koi aashiq
kyon ban jata hai deewana
I became restless and learnt
this secret for the first time,
why a lover goes crazy in love.
agariqraar ho jaaye
kisi se pyaar ho jaaye
baRa mushkil hota hai
dil ko samjhaana
if you are positive,
if you fall in love with someone,
it becomes tough to explain to your heart.
(Singing this he Looked at Jodha Who was lostin his voice and smirking slightly he Play the tune again. and continuesinging).
hue bechain pehli baar
humne raaz ye jaana
mohabbat mein koi aashiq
kyon ban jata hai deewaana
tasavvur ke haseen lamhe
tera ehsaas karte hain
tera jab zikr aata hai
to milne ko taRapte hain
hamaara haal na poochho
ki duniya bhool baiThe hain
chale aao tumhare bin
na marte hain na jeete hain
the beautiful moments of
imagination feel you,
when there is a talk about you
I crave to meet you.
don't ask my condition,
I have forgotten the world,
come, without you,
I can neither die nor live.
sunoachchhaa nahi hota kisi
ko aise taRpana
mohabbat mein koi aashiq
kyun ban jaata hai deewana
listen, it's not good
to torture someone like that.
why does a lover go crazy in love.
agarye pyaar ho jaaye
kisi pe dil jo aa jaye
baRa mushkil hota hai
dil ko samjhana
hue bechain pehli baar
humne raaz ye jaana
If you fall in love,
if the heart loves someone,
it's very difficult
to explain things to the heart.
I became restless and learnt
this secret for the first time...
tu hi hai tu hai
tu hi hai
it's just you, just you.
falakse poochh lo chaahe
gawaah ye chhand taare hain
na samjho ajnabee sadiyon se
hum to bas tumhaare hain.
mohabbat se nahi waaqif
bahot anjaan lagti ho.
hume milna jaroori hai
haqeeqat na samajhti ho.
you can ask the sky,
these moon and stars are witnesses
don't think of me as a stranger,
I'm just yours for centuries.
you don't know about love,
you seem very unaware.
you don't understand the fact
that we need to be together.
koikaise samajh paaye
kisi ke dil ka afsaana
mohabbat mein koi aashiq
kyon ban jaata hai deewana
how can someone understand
what's going on in someone else's heart,
why does a lover go crazy in love..
agariqraar ho jaaye
kisi se pyaar ho jaaye
baRa mushkil hota hai dil ko samjhaana
hue bechain pehli baar
humne raaz ye jaana
mohabbat mein koi aashiq
kyon ban jaata hai deewana.
(While time tioo time glancing at Jodha lovingly Jalal end his song And Look ateveryone and found everyone were lost in his song . Which make him smirkslightly he spoke With Calm teasing Voice).
Jalal said : guys come out from your dreamland song is finished let's continuethe game .
(again Jodha spin the bottle and it's stop at Abdul and he choose truth).
Welcome in JA land dear...🤗
Nice story , simple yet lovely...😳
I liked the characterization , two brothers totally opposite to each other but really love each other...
Other side two lovely sisters who are greatest support to each other...😃
Nice prologue.
Mirza is truly a child...😆
I liked the way jalal dealt with him , he explained him well made him realize his mistakes , & things got in control .
a girl should be respected & her wishes , u hv penned it down beautifully , good job...👏
Part 1...
Sweet sisters...😳
salima understood fear of her little one but handled it very well , also positively assured her .
Ja-Jo meet...😃
Good lesson to MLA , good to see kids saved .
Ja-Jo meet again , jalals secret wish fulfilled...😉
done with apology & all ok now...😊
Part 2...
Jalal caught with loveria...😆
Mirza is right about his brother about the setting thing...😉😛😆
brothers talk was nicely humorous , liked it...😳
Whereas coming to sisters they too happy & satisfied with the way things happened .
Part 3...
Love in first sight for jalal...😃
Jalal is sure about his love .
Nice to know that she is safe from that MLA .
Wow his day starts with her glimpse .
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