OS: Nand Ghar Anand Bhayo - Page 5

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Radhike ( you know I like your id more than your real name!),

This is pure joy! I could not have imagined a more delightful, riotously funny little skit being written about such a minor instance of Krishna's mischief. And I would never, ever, have though of the beehive either, brought and hidden under his bed because the bees "wanted to come"!😆

I loved the pace and the frenetic action throughout, and even more so the very clever choice of enemy, the conveniently invisible Adrishyasur, who can thus be disposed of equally invisibly. Very, very clever of you, my dear!

All in all, you kept me laughing from start to finish, and the concluding para is tops. My felicitations!👏

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

This was just awww ! So cute . ❤️ I thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of the os . Loved the way you showed Kanha and Balram's relation . You know , I always enjoy reading these two in your writings . Just amazing how you manage to make someone reading the your writings believe in it ! I sure do 😆

Keep writing such more pieces . 😳

Ps I couldn't stop laughing at the last part 😆 And I feel for Balram 😆 don't even know why 😳

Love

Sam

Ps the banner ! 😳 Freaking beautiful 😳

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

awesome

beautiful

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Too good Protiti. You have an endearing way of writing. Enjoyed it so much.

Lakshmi