OS: Nand Ghar Anand Bhayo - Page 3

Originally posted by: Arijit007

the best part, krishna scaning the lokas of asuras for the fictional asur. 😆

Originally posted by: goli030291

Enchanting Piece of Work...👏

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Lovely piece of writing dear..

Keep it up!

Nandini

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Beautiful OS Proteeti

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Beautiful Radhika 😊

Originally posted by: ThePirateKing

Krishna scanning for the "invisible asur" was too much 🤣.

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Radhika , just read few lines and kept it carefully nearer to my heart ,yet to peep in , have to read this OS ! I know it will be excellent ! 😊 Will be back .

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Radhika ... thoroughly enjoyed this os .😊

Krishna scanning the three realms for that invisible Asur 😆,great imagery to create interest in your readers' minds !!

Involving my Radha into the mischief is the loveliest part ! Hmn ... good... good , she is the main architect of all this collective effort ! A wonderfully written OS Radhika .🤗

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-

This was a cutee os😳

loved ttt😊

Originally posted by: -DZ-

Such a cute story

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Beautiful Piece Of Writing, Choti. ⭐️

Your words come alive as if they're weaving a world of their own.

Loved Krishna and Balram's mischief.

The way he was going check. check. check was so hilariously cute. 😆😆

Thanx For PM.

Keep Writing.