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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: duhasaad

awesome dear
Loved it



Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: eshalli

Awesome os dear
Loved it thxc 4r pm



Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome os...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Kanha gets punishment of not going to play outside from his maa for bringing bees at home...😛😆...Balaram with his army decides to help him...😎...Radha shares the plan with everyone...😉...finally they becomes successful in saving Kanha...👏👏👏...both brothers fooled their mothers...🤣...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...



Glad to know you liked the OS Jayeetadi!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: AASUS

Enjoyed a lot Pro 😛
Balram rocks in this story. Brave boy.
Cutiepie Radha lob her (I'm always on girl's side 😃 )🤗
So cute and beautifully written with beautiful choice of words.
You're a yummy writer tnkooo 😳



Thank you so much Athidi! I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1

So beautifully written Pro ... ❤️

I loved it... [:**] ❤️

Dau - Kanhaiyaa ... ☺️ They are cho chweeet...😳



Thank you so much Sumi! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

Thanks for the PM dear, after so many days I read such a cute OS, we generally have Kauravas and Pandavas or Krishna and Arjun/Draupadi, even if it is for Krishna's family it is between Krishna and Rukmini or Krishna and Subhadra, something between Krishna and Balram is so refreshing 👏 👏 👏

Coming to the OS, Balram ji wants Krishna to be punished, but still doesn't want him to get the punishment, such a cute sibling rivalry and love, and what an intelligent plan the kids made Adrishyasur like really but yes they were all the friends of Krishna ji so dosti to influence to hona hi tha, and then Krishna getting into Vishnu mode and applying filters into the database and various spreadsheets on whether someone with this name appears 😆 😆 , I think He should have telepathically connected with Brahma ji to check if He had created someone like that, or else connected Shivji to check if He had given a boon to some such Asur or not (afterall He is the one who gives boon to all the Asurs and Rakshas)

But mothers got into their trap, that was sad, in so many years they must have been immune to all the excuses

Awesome OS, please keep me updated whenever you write anything



Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked my work!
BTW, who knows maybe the Maiyas always knew, but pretended not to so that they could spoil their kids into oblivion? 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: DeepVeerPhoenix

Beautiful OS, Pro. Amazingly written👍🏼

Thanks for the PM



Thank you so much Manali! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

It was magical😳 u create always something which is so beautiful!



I'm glad you liked it! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
My dear Radhike ( you know I like your id more than your real name!),

This is pure joy! I could not have imagined a more delightful, riotously funny little skit being written about such a minor instance of Krishna's mischief. And I would never, ever, have though of the beehive either, brought and hidden under his bed because the bees "wanted to come"!😆

I loved the pace and the frenetic action throughout, and even more so the very clever choice of enemy, the conveniently invisible Adrishyasur, who can thus be disposed of equally invisibly. Very, very clever of you, my dear!

All in all, you kept me laughing from start to finish, and the concluding para is tops. My felicitations!👏

Shyamala Aunty

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Edited by sashashyam - 8 years ago

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