SS: Orenda (Completed + Epilogue) - Page 23

well,I already told you about my feelings about Orenda,beforehand,just am needed to express my feelings about each part.😳

so here goes my essay...🤓

I was super excited for this,coz teacher-student is something never read by me,and it seemed an interesting concept here,and also the sp made me to expect,and I must say madam,that you did'nt disappointed me..👍🏼

first of all,I really dont get as how can anyone,study or teach maths,as its the one subject that I have dreaded the most,[not as a kid,but when I grew up]...so here imagining my Suraj as a maths teacher,miffed me.😡

but if someone like him will teach maths,than maths will also feel like biology[my fav subject].

I will never mind to be taught maths through him.😉

Poor Chakor,I could really connect to her,coz I had that same lone experience in my high school,as my school was changed.

then,its started,it started between the duo.❤️
I must say,that the feeling of love is so special,that when your someone,comes in front of you,a simple glance at him/her,or just a mere touch is enough,to assure you that,this is it,and rest everything happens spontaneously...❤️

the embarrassing moment between Sukor was funny,but how sweet of him to ask and apology through chits...😃😃

would like to share a kind of similar moment...[no need to grow your horns]😛

I was in class 9,there was an english teacher[my fav,and even i was his fav in class,he was middle-aged,and i really respected him,even he adored me like a kid]...I was in the middle row,in the first bench,and alone[my bestie was absent],and he was sitting beside me,as there was a discussion of a topic going on,where students were supposed to go and write on board..after my turn,when I was returning to my place,I tripped on my shoelace,but Sir held me,and avoided me from falling,but while saving me,he himself tripped due to my schoolbag[kept in a really unusual manner by me],and poor guy fell down,as I was busy keeping my notes safe...my poor teacher,fell down in front of everyone,while saving me😳

Then came my exciting part,😉the famous CPR,our real Suraj still struggles to have one from his DP,and here our very much well-behaved and sauve Maths teacher did it,👏,,,at the first go.

But I really liked the way Suraj dropped Chakor at her house,and how he cared for her,and the best,how he ordered her.😳

Then I really laughed at the moment,when Suraj cleared about the kiss to Chakor,as if he wanted to show it to her,that he is not someone who will treat the situation as an opurtunity.😳

Actually after Chakor's eighteenth birthday,we all got to see a new her,someone who is very clear of what she wants and bold as well...but I must say that Suraj had his part in making Chakor bold as it was the one who offered her a dance in the party...his offering what was that fueled Chakor,I guess...that she was about to kiss him

and also the way Suraj explained of how he went to pub,it meant that he wanted to clear his image for her.😊

then the sudden confidence within her,that made her to send a different kind of sms to Suraj,,,,,I think Suraj himself was the catalyst for it.

And also there are some eureka moments that really say us something,and urge us from inside,I guess the dance with Suraj was that for Chakor⭐️

The very first face-off between Sukor after the sms in the school...was what touched me.😳

It really was an emotional confrontation,and kudos to you Mitthu,👍🏼,,,for making me feel so

At that moment I felt that Chakor was not bold,in fact that girl was very vulnerable,fragile,and sensitive...and her tears conveyed me so.❤️

the hug was really desperate,it was like after years of extreme dryness,one has finally felt a little moisture,and when that cloud of rain is near you,all you want is to soak in the rain and get drenched in it,keeping all logics at bay.❤️

Then the shocking kiss...I was really imagining and laughing hard at the condition of Suraj...poor guy.He was freezed.😆

but the fact that Suraj did'nt pushed her away,I guess,more than shock,it was the same feeling about what I mentioned in the previous para...he himself wanted to feel her,coz of his inhibitions,he could'nt reciprocate or show it,but at least he could feel it.

so he just felt it,but did nothing.

If he would have been angry...then he would have scolded her hard or slapped her...

If he would have been hurt,then simply push her

If he would have been enjoying,then definitely reciprocated it...

But he was just feeling❤️

Then comes the part when Sukor have an another bold confrontation,at Vivaan's room,when once again[and this time more intensely]😳,Chakor opens herself to Suraj...but this time,finally Suraj gives in,and they are finally[almost] united...here also,I credit you Mitthu,coz you gave me another scene that really touched me,it was emotional,,,,,it was about the heart's helplessness and desperation,when something that it craved was in the very front of your eyes,and all you want is to snatch it,snatch it somehow from the world...and make it your own After then its Suraj[as usual],who completely owned me...as I could very much connect to him.❤️

He also like,in fact loved Chakor,but he cannot say it,express it,or even make an effort even to make her,his own.😒

Fate had been harsh on him,since his childhood...but after years,somewhere he must have also wished for something ,after Chakor came into his life,but he was confused at the turn of events,as to how could all of a sudden,life could show mercy at him,maybe it was an illusion,so he was keeping himself restrained.😳

How much Chakor meant to him,or how much he was himself into her,it was evident when Chakor cried on the phone...and with just because of a small tear of hers...he felt so sorry,and he just wanted to cheer her up,[by inviting her to his house].💔

And also the way Chakor cried on the phone,it showed how much genuine and intense were her feelings for Suraj...it was not ,as it happens at that age,,,,it was true,it was forever,a feeling that was ignited in a matter of seconds...but it would remain for a lifetime❤️

.And special mention for Vivaan👏...god he was crazy,he was unbelievable,,,,,and such a loving bro an friend.😆

Actually,the real cupid for Sukor.😳

And the "My types parts were oh so...☺️...[you know what]😉

The cvs never fulfill my wish,but my Mitthu made him to get rid of that good for nothing shirt.😉

The title was absolutely perfect dear...⭐️

"jeene bhi de,duniya hame,ilzaam na lagaa

Ek baar toh,karte hain sab,koi hasi khataa,

Dil kya kare,dil ko agar achha koi lage...???

Jhootha sahi,dil ko magar sachha who lage❤️

To sum up,it was a really beautiful experience reading this one Mitthu...😳

I suggest as well,request you to write another version of the same story,something in college,and with many problems...I am sure,you will rock it.😃

Keep it up dear,👏,,,,blessed be your writing skills.⭐️

keep going👍🏼

Was it a comment or another story?😆