~WRONG NUMBER~ SS On MehRya. Epilogue last part updated PG117-5th Sep - Page 8

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Shamz15 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Lali and saroo thank you guys ... I will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wrote a very small part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1 :


Location - Delhi Noida

It was 12 .45 AM and Sonal was cursing her fate sitting inside a training session which was preponed for today , and the worst part she wasn't aware when the session will end and they were asked to keep their phones outside...Sonal tried to call Mahek before the meeting but her phone was out of reach .She was just praying for her safety. She tried to talk to her manager but he wasn't ready to let her go as it was their Induction session and the trainer has taken out some special time and taking the session online from US .

Mahek waited for almost 15 Minutes her eyes were searching for Sonal...she felt uncomfortable when she found a group of jerks who were playing cards were staring at her and passed some comments at her ...she tried to avoid them and moved away and tried Sonal's number ..it was showing switched off than she took out her diary and dialed the other number which she gave , she saw a person from the group standing up and coming towards her , she dialed the number in hurry and moved away from there , phone was ringing and was answered after 3 rings ... without listening who was on the line ...Mahek started scolding her...just to scare the person who was following her. ..Sonal where are you...do you have any idea mein yahan NZM station par kab se wait wait kar rahi hoon ?? aur bhook ke maary mujhy Kabhi bhi chakkar aajygi ...If you aren't coming here in 10 minutes mein waps Ajmer ki ticket katwaa rahi hoon ...what's wrong with you...Delhi aakar tu bhi yahan ke logon ki tarah ajeeb hogayi hai...Mahek sees the person was coming near her again...she moves in corner and puts a hand on her mouth and talks slowly...Sonal meri jaan please say something..mujhy bahut darr lag raha ..iam new to this place and Upar se kuch roadside loofar yahn mujhy pareshan kar rahy hai...she said with a choking voice and looked like she can cry anytime...


Shaurya couldn't control himself and said " Hello" I think you have dialed a wrong number this isn't Sonal...Iam Shaurya ...he said ...Mahek was shocked what wrong number how is that possible...she checked the number in her diary and repeated the number... Shaurya said the number which you have noted down is mine may be you haven't saved number properly... you can wait for sometime may be she will come and pick you up...

Mahek holds her head and tells Maata Rani itni badi gadbad kaisy hogayi...I don't have her address also she was talking without disconnecting the phone, drunkard person came near her and asked ..Kya hua baby why are you worried...hum sab hai na yahan ...come along with us...Mahek warns him not to come near her and push him away and run outside...goons follow her... Shaurya hears the voice and runs to save her ...station was 5 Minutes away from the place if he goes by car ...he immediately sits in his car and adds her number to contact list and track the number...her name displayed as Mahek and location of the Sim was Ajmer...He refresh his what's App contact list and finds her number in the list and click on her profile pic and status ..



This was her profile pic and the status was...Bye Bye Ajmer & Delhi Iam Coming ...

PS : I know it's a very small part ...I will come up with the next part soon 😳
Have to rush to watch the episode😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes! I am back people!!! 😛

I am first again!!! 😆

Such a short chapter!I feel like you wrote this just to make me the first one to comment!! that's really sweet of you my Madrina.. 😎

Mehak's pictures are good..but why did U select this pictures of Shaurya,his facial expression looks like he is talking to Ajay not Mehak 😆

waiting for the next part..that better be longer 😛

Edited by dewcute - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Phew res...Lol...shagun our bad 😆...!
Na tum first ...na main
Okay I was trying to cheer shagun up ...


Hmmm tho first update up...are u sure only two shorts ? 😲
Sonal dint inform her abt the delay ...bechari mehak in musibat...
Okay so the much awaited phone convo between ...MehRya ...😳...he tried to tell her that he was not sonal...
But after hearing her fear thru phone he rushed to help her !
This shaurya is such an gentle man 😳..
Very well planned and written ...my love ❤️
Edited by -Thabassum- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome di such a lovely update
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was awesome. And the best part was the quote added, perfect for the situation. Temme ki quote pehle dekha aapne ya situation pehle socha? 😛. I'm waiting for the next part. This is going really amazing. I had a similar idea weeks back then dropped it out of my laziness 🤣. I'm waiting for the next part. Update soon. 😳
Edited by TheLifeDiaries - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
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It was soo short but as usual nice 👏

Waiting for the next update ...
Edited by Mehryan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shamrouz


Rumi you know I will try my best to keep negative characters away from my story😆
It's not completely inspired from real life story. ..it's just a wrong number which is common and situation and place is totally different. ..and mere Bhai ne uss ladki ko bahut pareshan kiya. ..😆😆

I thought they will get married but destiny had some other plans

Yess Destiny had better plans for them, it's good to come up with realistic story that connects reader more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one shams. Hope hero comes on time to save our damsel

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