AvNeil OS - Finding You Chap 7 updated Pg 7

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Chapter 1: Finding you


Coorg was such a pleasant place to be, all greenery, rainy clouds hovering over you and a romantic weather enough for even foe to became friends. But here Neil was working on his human trafficking case further annoying Avni who was down with cough and cold after the pool incident.

Avni in her thoughts "Its all work , work for him forget about romance. How could even I think also that he can be romantic ?We are on honeymoon does it even seem so ?" And another sneeze breaking her thoughts.

Behind came Neil with a bowl of soup, Avni was taken aback " Soup for me ", thinking bahar se jitna khadus dikhta hai utna hai nahi. Now it was her turn to get pampered, when Neil tried to sit near her, she distanced herself to sit on the sofa. Soon, Neil followed her and after lot of insistence, she had her soup.

Neil was in no mood to leave her alone in this condition, but he had also to work on his case. There was a knock on the door, when Rhea came and Neil asked her to take care of his wifey as he had to leave for his case. How could Rhea say "No" to this offer as it was a golden chance for Rhea to create a misunderstanding between the two.

After Neil, left the room, Rhea excused herself to her room, calling Ali, explaining him that this is the right time to confess your feelings to Avni as Neil is not there. Ali agreed and straight away went to Avni room where he wanted to open up his feelings. Rhea soon dialed Neil no to ask about her tablets, as he had not gone far away , he himself arrived at his room, seeing Avni and Ali engaged in the conversation where Ali said those three words to Avni

It didn't matter to him who said what, his eyed had turned red, he was anygry not on Ali but on his wife, whom he thought belonged to him but he was wrong. He didn't think even once to see what were Avni feelings. It didn't matter, but to him it was the right time, to end this fake relationship. Since, they were away from family, it seemed correct to hand over Avni to the man she loved -Ali.

He closed the room door , leaving Avni petrified. She knew something was wrong, Ali was there on Sofa and didn't knew how to react. Avni ran after Neil, just to hear the final word " All is over now Avni, everything is finished, all these days you were playing with my heart and my feelings. But not now, I won't let you play, you love Ali, go be with him and leave me and my family alone

Avni couldn't bear the words what Neil said, she couldn't believe, her fate was taking the same turn as her mother had. But no, she was a strong independent lady, who does not need a support system, and how can she depend on a man who does not want to hear a word in his wife defence. All men are the same, she was right to hate them.

Avni reached her room and in tears , when Ali asked what did Neil say, she remained quite and asked Ali to leave her alone. Ali, went to Rhea to disclose what has happened there in Room 110. Rhea was happy inside. and showing her fake concern as they were talking in the garden. Far away from them Neil was broken , drinking heavily asking himself why does it happens with him the woman he love had to leave him halfway. Soon he saw Ali and Rhea talking in the garden. And he realized where is Avni then.

In a hurried manner , he went to his room only to find it empty with a note on the table " Am leaving you forever, don't try to find me"Below it lied the divorce papers. He couldn't believe his eyes, she has left him, but not for Ali but for her self respect. How wrong a man could be?. He wanted to find her, ask Ali. But no that would not look good. He can take help from DD.

It was raining heavily outside, anyway Avni had to leave, there was no point to wait here. Drenched in her saree , she looked like an eye candy to the few men around her. Her cab arrived and she planned to be at Banglore airport to take a flight back to Mumbai. As the weather got worse, the roads were blocked due to mud sliding and she had to stay in a near by place.

As she went out to look for a place to stay , few rowdy men followed her and started manhandling her. She was looking for help and only one voice came from her mouth "Neil , Neil". DD traced the phone of Avni Bhabhi somewhere in middle of the highway , 53 km from Coorg a small village.

Neil was worried, why was his wife not picking up the phone, DD was consoling him. DD received another call , that Raghav Pandit activity has been noticed from the same village where Avni phone was last tracked. Neil prayed may his wife be fine, safe from the hands of these wolves. He cannot allow anyone else to touch his wife . Be it Ali or any damn man on earth. She belonged to him only.

Noticing the increasing speed. DD said " Sirjee calm down, Bhabhi would be safe . But Neil was in no mood to hear, broken from the feeling of guilt on again after seeing her with Ali. His wife was pure as white. It was only he who time and again didn't trust her.

He noticed Avni suitcase near a car that lied empty , with the cab driver unconscious. His heart was thumping heavily worried for his wife. It was hard for a tough cop like him to confess his feelings, but here he was breaking down, tears rolling down from his eyes. He wanted her to safe and return to him.

DD noticed all this and couldn't stop himself to say " If you love Bhabhi so much, why don't you say it to her. She dosen't love noodle bhaiya. You know it, that's why she left alone. Still you didn't believe her. Why don't you understand sirjee, if you set her free and she comes returns to you always , then Avni Bhabhi also loves you."

Neil said " I know, I know, ho gayi mujh se galti, but what to do now. I want her back, I cannot live without her. Where to find her . "Raghav Pandit didn't matter to him now , his wife safety was more important. Soon they noticed the puddle where Avni phone as lying. Means she was nearby only.

DD and Neil decided to look for her in opposite directions, after walking half kilometer. Neil noticed some dim lights in house and few men enjoying their drinks. He approached that place, where a similar smell of his wife filled his nostrils. He knew she was near by and he had to save her .

The men didn't seem to understand his language, as they ignored he moved further, when again he heard a noise of falling utensils. He knew something was wrong and his wife was nearby. He went back of the house without being noticed, where he saw Avni tied , bruises mark here and there. Soon he called DD to come with a full police force.

Here, he was alone and it was his responsibility to free his wife from the goons clutches. He entered through the back door, and silently opened the ropes. While Avni was half unconscious. He carried her outside, when some men saw him carrying her. Followed by another round of fight,a round of gun shots were heard . The muscular men could over power him as well as Avni. But since she was motionless. The leader of the gang Raghav ordered to tie her again , as she had to be deported to Middle East.

As his men carried her, he was getting furious , how could someone touch his wife. No!! he took out his gun and shot on the leg of man who was carrying his wife. Some random shots to run away. It was best to run from this place then fighting those goons.

Neil strategy worked. He was able to engage those men in by lighting fire in hey, whilst he carried his wifey to a secluded place. She was down with fever, however, after sometime they found a place safe from those goons. Avni gained consciousness slowly, but something had hit her head hard and blood marks were still there on her blue saree.

As, he cleaned her wounds with a white muslin cloth tears were rolling down from his eyes. Avni couldn't hold back to see what she was seeing a man she loved so much was crying in front of her like a kid. She wanted him to speak, but Neil was so guilt ridden that he had no strength to meet his wife eyes.

DD, arrived the place with the police force and all the gang of Raghav Pandit was arrested. But Neil sir was no where to be found. Soon he called "Sir jee aap kahan ho. Neil shared his location details with DD.

Avni took his head in her hands and wiped his tears, asking "Neil why are you crying, I am fine ". Neil replied "Fine with me or without me.

Avni: What do you mean to say?

Neil: Again I am asking you are fine, with me or without me.

She didn't got what he wanted to say and raised her eyebrows, as it was still unclear what he wanted to convey. But here he was all furious holding her hands tightly asking " How you could you be fine without me. Waise bhi tumhe kya farak padta hai. How much worried I was for you, kahan kahan nahi dhunta tumko?

Avni was hurt by what he said but still she composed herself and decided to leave him as he rightly said kya farak padta hai. As soon as tried to stand , her broken knee reminded her not to move without any help. But does that mean she has to listen to his tantrums all the time. No, she has to reply back to him " Farak kaise nahi padta, you were the one who does not believe me, who always raises question on my character. Sometimes I wonder why my heart loves a man who does not even believes me."

Neil knew where his fault was and how badly he had hurt his wifey. Yes she said it, she loves him and not it was his turn to speak up . He pulled her in his arms , softly laying his princess on the pile of hey " I am sorry, for whatever I have said to you at the hotel, but its true, I cannot see you with any men eyeing you like that. Be it Ali or anyone else. Call me possessive. But I cannot share my wife with anyone else. You belong to me. And nobody has the right over you except me"

Avni wanted to hear something else , and he was going authorative in voice, typical Indian husband she thought. She retorted " Why do I belong to you, after all our marriage was fake right?

Neil couldn't take it any further " How damn you say that the marriage was fake, it was very much real, you and I are husband and wife. And as your husband, I have full rights over you. Apart from that, I never imposed my feelings on you. But, I cannot imagine my life without you, you are my world, and you should know how much I love you"

There was a honking horn outside, DD was waiting outside. Looking at the two love birds, he understood that they needed some privacy , so he sat in another jeep. Both were dropped at the same hotel, where it was around 5 am, morning time, where world was waking up for regular chores. But two souls will be busy finding themselves under the folds of the bedsheets.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing OS dear..
How much I am waiting for the honeymoon track of AvNeil ..
Love to read it and imagining it .. 😳
The beautiful confession.. Neil can't see his Avni in pain ❤️
Thank you for writing it and write more 😳
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Amazing OS..
I was grinning at last line... ☺️
Do write more...
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Beautiful OS :)
Loved it :)
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Thanks Guys, for the new OS, going with the spoilers I will keep on updating the story here. So here is the next part

Chapter 2 : Faulty lines

It was 9:30 in the morning Neil woke up first, Avni was still lying in his arms, not ready to let him go. Her sly smile made him crave for more. But she was deep in sleep, and he had to update his case file too. He slowly moved himself away, mesmerized by the beauty of his wife, her white pale skin was glowing after what they had last night.

As Neil left for shower, Avni woke up, unable to hold her tear, she was guilty over what happened last night. How could you do this Avni, how can you cross the line, you know this marriage is farce, and Neil is not bounded by this marriage. He can leave you still how could you cross the line Avni? What is wrong with you?

Neil was out from bathroom, in happy mood, but suddenly his expression changed of fear of losing her. She was crying and he can't stand that. " Avni, what's wrong with you, why are you crying? "

Avni knew she had to maintain a distance, so she freed herself from his arms and said " Neil I am sorry for whatever happened last night in between us. I know it shouldn't have been so. I shouldn't play with your feelings. " And she left in the bathroom.

Neil was dismayed, how can a girl react to such beautiful moment of her life in such a weird way. He was angry with her but he remembered Neela maa words, that Avni has never fallen in love before and he needs to wait until she realizes it before taking it to next level.

So what happened yesterday, why she said she loved me. Probably, because the fear of losing made her say that. Ofcourse it was an organic conffesion between the two where fear of losing brings out your subconscious, your inner feelings to the core.

His cop job has also given him the insight of psychological behavior of his criminals. Thanks to this experience, he could understand his wife.

It was half hour and she was not out bathroom, Neil opened the door with spare key, to notice Avni crying uncontrollably under the shower. He took his wifey in his arms and said " if I have hurt you then I am sorry. But you don't need to be guilty for what happened last night. We both were feeling low and these things are unplanned and it happens with flow of emotions. "

Avni added" I think we need to practice restraint as we both know how our marriage occurred and this thing shouldn't have taken place "

Neil was breaking inside, but he had to maintain his calm posture. It was the need of the hour " Avni do not cry, listen if you feel that you are at fault then I am equally responsible too. And I promise I will never cross my line until you agree. And you don't worry for we are husband and wife and we did nothing wrong if you think the other way round. "

He wanted her to feel better so he took her up in his arms and wiped her hair then face. Avni, said ' I will get ready myself "

Neil had to excuse himself as he cannot even cry, to show how much hurt he was, was he bad at sex, or she didn't like my touch, what kind of girl is she. Patience Neil, patience !!

The rest three days passed as normal roommates lived. The visited places, but a safe distance was maintained so as not to cross the " Faulty lines"

Edited by njain16385 - 8 years ago
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Ohhh you actually made another part of this OS.very nice part yaar . really it's brilliant...can u make another part too.itz amazing dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic update
Though Avni loves Neil but she feels guilty too
Neil had to keep lots of patience to make Avni realise her feelings
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...
Its great that you thought to write more...
It was nice reading your story..
May be it was short but awesome..
I thought now they have confessed there will be lot of moments.. But it's also nice coz now their will be more tension between them...And it will be interesting to read it..

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Chapter 3 : Standing Together

They were back from their honeymoon early to plan for Neil parents anniversary. Avni really wanted to mend her relations with Shweta. But Shweta on the other hand was furious at Rhea for they had failed in their mission. It was time to throw their trump card- Yes Avni real identity in front of Bebe. The plan was ready how to do it ?.

Avni was not feeling well from the day she was back from Coorg. Probably because of the exhaustion or was it something else, wait she had missed her periods too. After a busy schedule , she bought a pregnancy kit which later confirmed on the D day morning that yes she was expecting. She told to herself "Avni you need to discuss this with Neil, do you want this child, what if Neil's family fails to accept you after knowing your truth, will Neil stand by your side?. No, no it is good to abort this child as she doesn't want any illegitimate child drama any further in her life. She had to do it. " And she threw the kit in the dustbin placed under the bathroom sink.

Avni was busy in the preparations of anniversary function. Neil could see her tensed, but thought to later discuss after the function. Neil went to washroom to get shave his increasing stuble, when he noticed the two pink lines in the dustbin. He wanted to talk to Avni about it. But something hold him back, why didn't she disclose him till now, such a big news. Anyway, he planned to discuss with her about their future later at night.

All were ready, Shweta and Praskash were remarried , and then the guests at the venue started leaving . Only family members when the projector started which showed Shweta and Prakash old photos -a journey down the memory lane. All were happy and suddenly a birth certificate of Avni Ayesha, and power went off.

Shweta, was miffed, how can power go at this important moment, when she found Ali was behind this. Shweta " Why Ali, you want Avni, then why did you do this. Ali " Because, I am not like you Aunty, I want Avni, because I love her. But I wont let anyone tarnish her image. I am her best friend who can never see anything bad happening to her. "

As, Shweta left the place, Ali said to himself" I know Avni, you love Neil, watching you both happy together. How can I destroy your happiness. And my love for you is not selfish, its selfless and unconditional

Shweta, was angry as her plans were failing back to back. When power came back, the CD player was stuck at the birth certificate of Avni. Shweta knew this is the last resort to play her trump card. She asked in front of Bebe, who was this Avni Ayesha, and her real identity was unfolded. The illegitimate child of Ashish Mehta. Ali and Neela maa defended her. But it was of no use. Bebe was not ready to listen. Avni was explaining everything and Neil didn't say a word. He was just watching. Bebe was hurt, the person she loved so much broke her trust. She was about to fall when whole family took her to the room

Everybody left the place, even Neela and Ali. It was just Neil's family. Avni was standing alone in the balcony crying saying it herself "Whatever happened its because of you Avni, Bebe is not well because of you. You have no right to play with Neil and his family feelings any further. Its better you leave now. After all even Neil didn't say a word today when you wanted him to speak.

Neil , was there in his bebe room where doctors told not to give her anymore stress and keep a watch on her blood pressure levels. She was asked to rest and all other family members also left to their respective rooms. Neil went back to his room, seeing Avni packing her bags. Immediately he also took one bag and started packing his clothes.

Avni asked " Where are you going Neil. I want to leave you and your family, because I know they will never accept me

Neil replied " I am going with you wifey, wherever you go I will go with you. I know it will take time for my family to accept you as their daughter in law. And we should give them that time and space. But as your husband I am not leaving you alone. I am coming with you.

More then his responsibility as a husband, Neil knew his responsibility as a father of the unborn child . He had to take care of Avni, he cannot keep her sad at this point of time. He didn't want to lose their baby . He had to take a stand and without making much noise they both decided to leave the Khanna house.

It was night 1 am, when Prakash saw two souls standing together at the entrance of his house. When he asked "Neil where are you going with Avni, so late at this night. He replied " Dad, jahan meri biwi ke liye jagah nahi, whan mein kaise reh sakta hoon. I will be back in this house, when my wife is accepted back with her full dignity as your daughter in law. Until then she will be my wife always

Avni, could see all this and remembered how Neil was so much different from her father Ashish. How her father had left her mother in mid of nowhere and here was Neil her husband standing together to begin their new journey. He took her hand in his and left for the Neil's studio flat.

Edited by njain16385 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous...
Yayy Avni is pregnant and Ali tried to help her too
But Bebe and Shweta is ready to listen anything
Neil took the right step by standing with Avni
Update soon please

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