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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Amazing update
Neil took good care of Avni and his baby
And Avni is happy to have his support and love
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Wow... It was so nice...
They living in bachelor pad and Neil taking care of his wifey..
And Tillu ka Pillu aaega... Yeaayy...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Such a sweet update
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry guys I didn't update the post long time as I didn't like the memory loss and Avni duplicate spoilers. However since the story is on track. So here is next part for you

Chapter 5 Without You

Avneil visited the doctor, where she gave them the milestones on how would baby grow at each stage, few tests,medicines and lots of rest. Avni knew she could handle it, just like her mother did. But a few drops of sweat due to nervousness didn't go unnoticed by Neil. He gave her his hankercheif to wipe the sweat and said " Maine kaha naa tumse, mein hoon tumhare saath ".
At this point of time, a woman needs her mother more, then her husband, someone who could understand what is going inside her body. Avni asked him to drop her to Neela Maa house.

Neil knew, someone from their family will try to harm the baby if the person gets the news. But Neela maa could be trusted. They shared the news with her, and her happiness knew no bounds " finally I will have my grandchildren ".

When Avni went to rest in her room, Neela asked Neil " so finally you have become one, but I do feel something missing between you two, you don't seem to be happy ".

Neil replied " because your daughter still thinks, that whatever I am doing is a Ehsaan for her".Neela understood where the gap was. Avni needs to realize that she loves Neil. She asked him" I agree my daughter will never understand that she loves you. But why don't you confess? "

To which he said " I don't want to now. I don't know how she will react. She expects that she has no right to be loved. Like an outcast having normal dreams she is not used to. Those hopes and aspirations of a normal girl were nipped in bud by Dayawanti Mehta . Until she does not come out of that trance, there is no point to confess my feelings "


After, Neil left Neela wondered on how to make Avni realise that she loves Neil. Anyways after that fiasco, Amol was living with her, and she saw no harm to share the good news with him.

Neil only wanted to share this news, with only two people he trusted, his dad and Neela Maa. Else no body is trustable. Meanwhile, Rhea was thrown out of the house. When Ali asked her to live with him, just to keep an eye if she was planning anything evil against Avni. "

Shweta as usual was not happy, her son was snatched away from her. The loneliness, the silence was not liked by bebe too. The sunshine of the house was gone along with the sun. The darkness filled in the rooms as well as there hearts. Bebe joined satsang session, just to keep some positivity in her life, away from madam Madonna.

Janmasthmi was being celebrated, with whole Khanna family present at the same venue. Avneil did the aarti together. They took the blessings, but bebe and Shweta declined.

"A lie spoken to save somebody life is greater than thousand truths". Those wordings of lord Krishna echoed in bebe ears while she attended those satsang session. Was Avni correct, the one who took care of my family happiness, I refused her to be part of our life.

Before, Bebe could think further a speeding truck hit the car of Neil. Avni was thrown outside, while Neil body was dragged few meters with the car.

Ambulance was called, Neil was rushed to hospital, with lots of blood loss in process. His head was hit severely, the MRI scan revealed internal injury. But Avni didn't want to lose hope, she will bring her husband back to life.

Neil had a rare blood group. Avni and Dd started calling different blood bank but to no avail.Finally with help of Ali, the news was broadcast on radio channel when one donor was found.

Bringing him to hospital on time was tough task. But Avni did the impossible, he was here to donate blood. Neela was feeling proud of her daughter. Neil was shifted to ICU, still unconscious. When doctor said only one person could visit him now.

Avni went inside, where whatever she said the fear of losing him, what Neil meant to her. What was life without him. What Neela never expected that her daughter would say but Avni was saying and she recorded it in her mobile.


Neil was kept under observation, under critical condition and Avni always kept an eye on him. Neela maa forced her to eat something as it was just not for her but for the baby too. For Neil's promise she had to eat.

She didn't rest a single minute,the care and prayer didn't go unnoticed by Bebe. She bent in front of Avni to seek for her forgiveness. Neil was conscious and the first person he wanted to meet was Avni.

Teary eyed she entered the room, when Neil said " akhir tumne mujhe bacha hi liya ",when Avni replied " kaise na bachati, tumhe pata hai mein tumhare bina nahi reh sakti. Don't you ever think of leaving your wifey as I am nothing without you ". He pulled her near as he wanted to hear more, but she restrained as it could hurt him.




Edited by njain16385 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
aewsome part...as avni was thrown out of the car what about their baby?????and plez one more part...this time I want a big part...plez plez plez
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry for late comments
awesome upt
loved it
waiting for next part
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Superb update
Thank god Neil is fine so as Avni
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 6 Old flames

Neil was discharged from hospital, and back to Neil Avni ka ghar as the nameplate read. Neelag came to visit Neil when Avni said " Maa you be here with Neil, I will go and bring some fruits, medicine for Neil"

After she left, Neela asked" so how do you feel now, is she taking good care of you ".Neil replied " health wise yes, she is taking good care of me. Before asking she knows what I need. But your daughter always freindzones me. I don't know what to do with my tube light wife"

Neela took her mobile and showed him the video she had recorded at hospital where Avni holded his hands and said " Neil you can't leave me like that. You promised me that you will be always by my side. Then what now? If you are angry then I am sorry. But you know how much importance you hold in my life. I am incomplete without you please don't leave me". When Neil saw that video he said " itna sab kuch bol diya par woh nahi bola jo mein sunna chata hoon".

After Neela left, Neil promised himself that he will get a confession out of Mrs Avni Neil Khanna soon.

He tried to get near,touch her, flirt with her ,dropping hints here and there. But to no avail. Avni thought it was because of his internal journey.


Meanwhile,Shweta contacted DM on how to win her son back. As per advice, there was only one link which connected her to Neil, and could be used to separate him from Avni. How she wished Juhi was alive. She dialed her local number where a home keeper said that after declared brain dead, Juhi was taken to US for medical recovery. She was in coma for 3 years,but from last 2 years, her body showed signs of recovery and she was leading a normal life.

Avni was back and Neil asked her to show sonography reports where a normal meant that the baby was safe. Had it not been alertness of Neil, when he saw a speeding truck and forcefully threw out of car. All three would have lost their lives. And Neil couldn't let anything happen to both of them.

Shweta through her contacts got Juhi no in US. She convinced her to come back to India. It's been five years when everyone assumed she was dead. Everyone had moved on in their life. But Shweta told her how her son was stuck in this fake marriage and wanted her help to win her son back.

Neil was sitting in his police station, recollecting how it all happened, a speeding truck on a residential area road, the CCTV camera footage, driver confession. The sketch on whose order it was done. DD placed the envelope in front of him-Amol Mehta. Neil said loudly.He didn't wanted to disclose it to Avni as it would shatter her badly. Just then there was a knock on the door and Juhi arrived.

Neil was taken aback, how was she alive. His mind went into flashback cherishing all the good times they shared. For a moment he forgot that he was a police officer. Juhi narrated her story how she regained consciousness and was back in India to meet her old friends. She said " Shweta aunty said that you are married, when could I meet your wife ". Neil for a moment hesitated and replied " some other day"

Neil called Neela maa and took her into confidence not to disclose anything to Avni. Neela asked Amol to go on internship, while on his way to Hyderabad he was arrested. 10 years of imprisonment court ordered, Neil wanted it more but for now that was enough. He couldn't let anyone harm Avni.

First trimester was over Avni, but still the baby bump was not visible. She looked chubby and cute. Neil would take her for stroll, planned her diet,so that she ate healthy. Sometimes Avni wondered what would be life even a day without Neil. She was so used to his touch and feel, that if it didn't happen, she assumed something was missing between the two.

Neil and Juhi met often recollecting their past memories. He often wondered how he was in love with her, then that accident happened. He lost Juhi forever, to punish her culprits he left his MBA dreams in between and cleared IPS exam. The culprits were punished, but he had lost Juhi forever. Then he moved on and Avni came in his life. The man who always said to himself that he will never fall in love again something was forcing to change his notion. But do I really love Avni, or is it I as her husband fulfilling my duties. Had he married Juhi there would have been no separation from his mom too. Reality was something different.

Presence of Juhi around him often placed him in dilemma that did he really loved Avni like the way he loved Juhi. Juhi requested him to meet his wife. And this time Neil agreed, for how long he could ignore her. Back on their way Neil thought to himself " what would Avni think, will she feel insecure, will she leave?. No Neil, she is your wife and she can't leave you". Few drops of sweat were falling from his head, as he himself didn't know what will happen when his past meets his future.

Edited by njain16385 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
You had written is so well . I am in love with your story . So now Juhi is gonna meet Avni . I am happy that Juhi met Neil first . I feel she will be positive .
Neil's haal-e-dil is understandable . He is really questioning him that he loves Avni or not . So double confession is gonna happen 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Nice update
First Avni didn't understand her own feelings now with Juhi's entry Neil is in delimma that whether he loves Avni or not????
Amol is arrested and Avni doesn't know about it???
More misunderstandings between them
Update soon please

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