(MG-SS)REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE SEASON 5 (BETRAYED) THREAD 1

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Instead of a man of peace and love, I have become a man of violence and Revenge... Maan

While seeking Revenge, dig two graves - one for yourself...Geet

The problem with revenge is that it never evens the score. It ties both the injured and the injurer to an escalator of pain. Both are stuck on the escalator as long as parity is demanded, and the escalator never stops.

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Intro/Chrs/Prologue PG 1

PART 1 and Teasers





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Maan:- 26 yrs old...Handling his family business, after passing out from college...He has been cheated...betrayed...and now is on Revenge mode...

Geet:- 21 yrs old...Sweet, simple, lively and ambitious girl...Wants to study architecture...and become one of the best architects...But, she's been suffering for someone else's sins...

Payal :- 25 yrs old...Geet's elder sister...She played a dangerous game...with a dangerous man...Just to fulfill someone's wishes ...And in the bargain of it, lost someone very precious...

Vikram:- 26 yrs old... Payal's love...Her life...

Rest of the chrs are added as and when needed in the posts...since the chrs I post in the ch sk are just the major, minors are never in my list ...

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Payal was getting ready for her marriage, she was very happy...Finally she was getting her love after all the hurdles of this society, she was going to get her happiness...Geet-Her baby sister, was as excited as she was ...It was her Di's wedding day, and she was more happy than Payal...

Payal looked at Geet as she entered her room with her wedding dress...It was a beautiful pink lahenga...Her dream lahenga...finally, she was going to wear it...For a few secs, she was lost in her past, and felt a bit guilty too, but shrugged as Geet eyed her in confusion...Both the girls smiled at each other and then suddenly Geet reminded of something ...

Geet:- Oh!!! I forgot, matching bangles...Will just get them ...(With that said, she put the dress on bed and was gone)

Payal shook her head and continued to remove the jewels...Suddenly, there was a bang on the window and she saw a man in front of her eyes...The man she has cheated...The man whom she betrayed... as he smirked checking her out...

Maan:- Congratulations... I heard, you are getting married today, so came to wish you luck...

Payal:- Maan??? What are you doing here??? (She was startled but was scared more)Just...Just get out...

Maan:- Calm down Payal...I mean no harm to you...I just came to see, how are you going to look wearing this lahenga, for someone else ...(He looked at the dress...with sadness in his voice)purchased of my money...My hard earned money...(He spat in anger but his eyes smirked and she knew he was here for something...She has known this man for quite some time now...and now she knew him a bit well to know when and what he was upto)

Payal:- Maan, plz...Don't do anything...I can explain later...For now, just go away...plz...

Maan(came closer to her with laugh):- Hmm, explain then??? I want to hear you...

Payal(gulped, scared of his intentions):- Am getting married today Maan, plz don't spoil it... (She begged)It was really hard for me to arrange everything ...Set everything in place, plz don't spoil it...

They would have talked more when he heard a sound...and next moment, he hide himself behind the door, that was opened by Geet,as she smilingly entered the room, with bangles in her hands...Before she could have asked her Di of, reason of her shocked eyes, she found a hand on her mouth and a knife on her neck...The bangles dropped on floor and were broken...Geet frantically, looked here and there and then her Di, who gasped...

Maan:- Ssshh!!! One small voice, she is going to die right here...(He warned)

Payal:- No, plz...

Maan(calculated something quickly and ordered):- Now, you go inside that washroom...

Payal:- Plz Maan, don't harm her... Let her go, she doesn't know anything ...plz...

Maan:- Do as am saying, else...(He hold knife a bit more firmer this time, near Geet's neck, causing her to wince and Payal got scared for her sister's life)

Payal:-No... Am...am going...Don't do that...

With that said, she entered washroom and Maan locked the door from outside...Leaving Geet, after warning her to keep her mouth shut...

Geet was oblivious and shocked of the happenings only looked at her Di for any answer...Geet didn't know the guy, whose attention now was on her...while, Payal looked out through the small of the ventilator of rest room...

Geet(called out to her sister as the guy approached her):- Di...

Maan(looked at Payal and commented):- Oh!!!! You got a sister too??? You never told me???

Payal:- Maan plz I beg you, don't harm her...She has nothing to do with my Betrayal...

Maan:- I too, didn't deserve to be cheated and betrayed, did I ???

Payal:- Maan, I can explain...

Maan:- Sorry, time's up...and now, am not interested in your explanations...

With that said, he inched towards Geet...who in no time was cornered to the wall with Maan blocking her way out...Looking right into her scared eyes with his dead ones...

If readers found earlier Seasons of RM Dark then this is going to be a point more Darker than previous ones... This is a Fiction, take it that way...

Am not sure, of how many parts, this story would be...since the responses are too poor to post a FF...But, I might get this story on, for 10 or so parts...Continuation of this story as FF, solely depends on your responses...And Posting of This Story in the Forum also depends on your responses...

I do not intend to copy any of writer's work and expect the same from others too...My stories are different from others, and won't resemble with any other's works...However any resemblance will totally be a coincidence..

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For Pms:

After sending PMs for this Intro and Prologue, am gonna clear my pm list...And I request YOU ALL, to again add my PM id i.e DrRose.RM4.PMs for getting pms of RM Season 5 (Betrayed)..And this Id will continuously be monitored after every single part posted either here on IF or on Blog, so be an active reader to get pms ...I would be glad if the comments are more than just the two words, else I might remove that reader from my list too...That was enough of my patience level...I need words now...

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Nice prologue... Payal betrayed maan with her lover for money... How cheap.. now geet is going to bear her punishment... Maan barged into payal wedding for revenge... Will he take geet with him or... Cont soon... Eager to read further...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations On New Season ,

Character sketch is interesting
Payal Geet's elder sister has her own love interest yet cheated on Maan

Prologue

Wow its amazing already so Captivating

Its Payal's wedding day and Maan seems to be there to take his revenge from her
but this time innocent Geet too is present with her sister
I'm already excited for the first chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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SUPERB CONCEPT AND CS
I CANT WAIT FOR READ
DO CONTINUE SOON
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nice CS and pro
payal betrayed maan to have his money
and even hr fav lehanga is from maan's money
she's happily now getting marriage and getting ready
maan barged in and saw his sis geet and he thought
something he saw how payal concern about hr sis and
he now fr his revenge punish geet to see payal in pain
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations DR...

Sorry for the late/delayed response.. was shifting house so only reading from phone...
anyways... nice prologue... waiting for the revenge to start... and please dont let geet misunderstand maan for long... and vice versa...

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