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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Superb sis..
I loved it a lot..
What a kiss..naughty chakor..
I don't know y suraj didn't pushed her while kissing if he don't want to kiss her?
But i loved the kiss..
Vivan was super cool like her sis..
Poor suraj..he can't digest the thing with her student..
Atlast if suraj gets attack or not..after reading chakor txt i got an attack..
Throughout the story i was just smiling and laughing like an idiot..my mom is looking at me like i m mad..
Tq for the super cool update sis..
Luv u..❤️

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you loved it!
I think we all miss the thought of Sukor here! Am I right?
Suraj tried but not efficiently and I don't know how much he will go without hurting her!

That arrives to me too when I read something and I have a monkey smile plastered on my face and everyone see me!
You know I stopped reading comment during work time as mostly I'm grinning with all the comments I receive! LOL

Thanks once again dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Charaju
Nice update 👏
Chakor kissed suraj & suraj didn't push away 😛
Vivan was cool in this part eventhough drunk he remembered
Eagerly waiting for suraj's reply

Thanks yaar!
I think Suraj's heart didn't left him think! LOL!
Vivaan and cool, I'm happy to hear that this Vivaan is liked!
Will try to update this evening!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved how chakor initated the kiss😉
Poor suraj , the more he want to stay away from chakor she gets more closer.😆
Loved the text of chakor to suraj😆
Vivan is so cool here , he remembered everything😊
Waiting for next

Thanks buddy!
Glad you loved Chakor's gutty kiss!
You are absolutely right! @ bold
I'm happy that you loved the sms! There is more to come!😃
Will be updating in some hours!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Loved it👍🏼
Vivaan knows his sister very well😆
Waiting for next !!

Thank you!
18 years of bloodhood, of course he know her but in the next part, he will know after effects of his freeness! LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: arena99
Just loved shy suraj and bold chakor
Waiting for next part 😊

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you love this combo!
Hope you will like the upcoming tracks too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Loved it!
Vivaan is so easy going.
Chakor doesn't take no for an answer! Can't believe she's already thinking of baby names 😆.
Poor Suraj, he'll spend the night under the same roof as her.
Can't wait for the next update.

Glad you loved it yaar!
Can you see that! She is crazy! And I don't know how I'm going to deal with her when she will be alone with him, in one room, only both of them.
Yep! I too pity him along with you!😛

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Aslesha99
Absolutely loved it!
Waiting for next part.

Thanks dear!
Happy that you loved it!
Will be updating this evening!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer

Great update

Love this Chakor and Suraj

Waiting for next part 😉😊

Thank you!
Glad you love this pair of shy and naught couple with exchanged roles!
Hope you will like the next part too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Hello!

Sorry for making you all wait!
Glad you are all liking the parts and especially the bold Lady!

Link to previous part: Part 7

Happy reading!

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Part 8

She grinned after sending the message and made her way to continue her other classes.
She expected him to send a warning message or something but nothing came.

on the other side!
Seeing the message he received, he was shocked! Nope! Shock could be an understatement of what he felt at that moment.
He immediately called Vivaan.

"Yo Buddy! What's up?" taking the call.
"Hi! Just want a help."
"Yeah! Sure. You sound different."
"Can you talk to your sister?"
"Oh! She is the reason. I may try!"
"You have to! She"
"Did she do something in class in front of other students?" interrupting his friend.

"You are her brother and you should behave with more responsibilities." sounding serious.
"Calm down Buddy! I know her. She will listen to her heart more than anything. May be you should talk to her."
"What should I talk when she is calling herself to be" he stops mid-way sensing what he was to say "Nothing! You have to talk. And that's it!"
"What is she calling herself?" not giving a tiny bit of attention to what his friend said after that.
"I said nothing?"
"Your lover or your wife?" he asked amused and heard a gasp "So tell me! What happened?"
Composing himself "You are her brother"
"And I need to behave like one! I know! I know!" completing Suraj's line.
"But you aren't!" he stated.
"What can I do buddy? I get to entertain myself with you and my sister."
"It's my fault that I called you."
"Yeah! You should have called her. She could have calmed you. Do you want her number?"
"Unbelievable!"
"Thanks for the compliment! See you this evening!"
"If I don't get an heart-attack! Bye!" he hung up.

"Like brother! Like sister! Crazy!" he murmured and continued his day as teacher before turning back in to a student.

He again tried to put some moral in Vivaan's head but his bloody head didn't accept anything his friend said.
The time he got to his house and had dinner, his phone beeped with a message from the unknown number.
And he knew what he has to face now.

"Honney!
How are you?
Why are you not replying me?
Instead of resolving my maths equations, I'm scribing your name as a prayer.
What is your favourite dish?
I will learn it and make it as my first dish as your wife.
Nice idea, isn't it? I know!
Ok! Time to sleep and dream.
So kissy kisses and hugs!
Sweet dreams!
Warning: Dream only about me!
- Your Love!"

He palmed his head and typed a message:
"Is it your manners to talk like this to your teacher?" but erased it and continued his task in hand, prepare for tomorrow as he know that his one reply can make him get 1000s of replies from her, resulting in giving him heart attacks for real.

Once everything finished he went to bed.
For the first time ever, instead of dreaming about maths and algebras, he dreamt about Chakor.
No not dreams.
He relieved their moment several times and each time he woke up with palpitating hearts and sweating forehead.
And when he tried to sleep again, he again got those same flashes of them kissing or more her kissing him.

Like this the night went without a proper sleep which made his mood not up to mark in school.
He got ready with his best to not show it and by afternoon, he got back to his normal avatar.

As planned by the project partners, the evening he made his way to Vivaan's house expecting her to be asleep or to be in her confined room.
Not knowing that her room and her brother's are in the same floor and that to just opposite to each other.

"I will get the person!" Vivaan screamed to his sister before making his way to the main door!

"Hey!" they shook their hands as he opened the door and let him in.
Suraj eyes roamed around the hallway until he was interrupted by his friend.
"Don't worry Man. She is in her room with her headphones. She will not hear you for now." he heaved a sign of relief which gained a chuckle "Come let's go!"

They went to his room and settled down on Vivaan's bed when Suraj's phone vibrated.

"Can't you inform your half that you will be at her house? Angry" the message he received as he checked it without her brother's attention as he was searching for his laptop charger.

"I think she saw me."
"Hey! Don't worry yaar!" finding his charger and turning to Suraj's side.

The door opens blast by Chakor who is standing with her hands on her hips, in a kali avatar.

"You know that I won't say you are not allowed in my room." Vivan said sarcastically.
"Get out!" she said.
Suraj got up.
"You sit there! You out!" she ordered her brother pointing him.
"Give respect Choti!"
"Now!" she demanded.
"Best of luck buddy! Tigress is out!" says his friend.
"Hey stay here!" Suraj.
"Do you want me to get killed by her?" seeing his friend's sad puppy face "Don't make that face. I'm not staying here." He left from there.
She goes to close the door and locks before turning to his side with angry eyes accompanied by mischievous glint.

"Chakor! I'm your"
"Teacher at school!" she completed as she made her way towards him "Are you afraid of me?"
"What do you want?"
"First answer to my question! Thennn" she trailed as she neared him and trying to take a seat on his lap "You!"
"Behave!" he said as he pushed her gently making her sit on the bed.
"I'm behaving as I should." sitting again in his lap.
"No! You aren't!" repeating his action and he moved a bit.
"I'm!" she said putting her leg on the other side of him and gripping his form as her arms took hold of his neck.

"Chakor! I'm not interested in all this! And especially"
"Shhh" she shushed him putting her index finger on his lips "I know you don't believe in family and all. You friend told me everything."
Putting her head on his shoulder as her arms tied around his waist "I will not leave you. I... I don't know why but" he felt humidity spread.

He lifted her head to face her but she shook her head and continued "I feel different. I feel it's right. I know you are my teacher and the relationship between a student and a teacher is sacred."
Tears rolling her eyes.
He tried to push her tears but she took hold his hand as his other hand automatically went to her back.
"Bro talked to me this morning. I said him I will try to be distant with you. But when I saw you here. I couldn't." she kissed his palm.
"It all happened soon and I don't know why. I.." she left his palm and hugged him.
"I love you! I know you like me. I know!" she started to sob.

He listened her fully without interrupting her as his heart started to melt for the girl who got a small place there.
Is he sure it's a small place?

He separated him self from her taking hold of her shoulder.
And held her face in his hands, making her see him.
Pushing her tears away from her cheeks, he lifted his head a bit and bent hers a little and kissed her forehead before coming to her eye level.

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Thanks a lot buddies for reading!
No questions this time!
If you like this part, I'm waiting for my LIKES & COMMENTS

Next Part: Part 9

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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