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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Awesome👍🏼
Is Vivaan supportive of Sukor or is it bcoz of him being drunk ?
Waiting for next !!

Thank you dear!

Answer for your question in next part!

I will be on time!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Hey!

How are you all?
I can see that you like how the Lady turned her ground.
Hope you like her more with all her naughtiness.

Link to previous part: Part 6

Happy reading!

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Part 7

He don't know what to say to her, so came up with what he remembered from school.

"There is no love. It's only infatuation." trying to move her away with no pressure.
"In that case, let's test it." putting her hands on either side of his shoulder.
"Chakor listen! I" and no words couldn't get out of his mouth as they are sealed with her lips.

She kissed him with all her life and he was too shocked to even react.
It didn't take long as it's her first and she didn't knew what to do.
She just put her lips over his and kissed him as if kissing a kid on cheeks but here it's a man, a teacher, her teacher and that too on his lips.
She broke it immediately and said:
"I love you!" she attacks again his lips when he opened his mouth to say something.

Locking her hands around his neck and pressing herself against him for support and to not let him push her away, she takes the life out of him this time.
She starts with the same process as the first one but this time she got lost in the kiss that she extracted all the juices from his lips along with his saliva.
Leaving his lips free, she came back to ground with her face resting over his chest.
He tried to move her away saying "Chakor se" she closed his mouth with her palm.

"I didn't know you were the friend my brother talked about all these days. I know most of the things my brother knows." with her body stuck to his, eyes talking to each others and his hands a bit shaking from the happenings "If it was infatuation, I would have never wanted to wait for you. I would have never wanted to spend my whole life with you."
Taking a deep breath she continues:
"I wanted to show you how much I want to love you.
I wanted to show you how much I deserve you.
I will wait for you.
I Love you."
Closing her eyes she adds:
"I want to marry you and become mother of your children." opening her eyes "Please don't avoid me."leaving his mouth free.
She peeked his lips one last time before leaving him alone in the hallway inside her house as she ran upstairs to her room.

Not knowing what he should do, he closed his eyes and rested his head on the door.
Few minutes passed before he opened his eyes and got his phone out of his pocket to send 2 messages:
"I don't know what you will remember when you read this but I need to say sorry!
Will be waiting to talk to you tomorrow." to Vivaan BF

"Close the main door!" to Unknown Number

Putting it back in its place, he exited from there and went to his apartment with a solo resolution 'Avoid Chakor 100%'.

All this while, the lady in the world of love was smiling ear to ear, imagining her future with her now Maths teacher.

The night went faster than expected for Vivaan but as slow as possible for the rest of human beings.
One in hope to see her Mr. Perfect while the other expecting this year to finish as quickly as possible.

Once Vivaan was awake, he searched the whole house for his sister but she was no where:
"Did they eloped without informing me?" muttering this he picked his phone to see that he has received several messages and his attention went toward two messages.
One from his friend and another from his sister.
"Going to school!
Lemon juice in fridge.
See you this evening!
Love you!" from Choti

He typed a reply:
"Thanks Choti! ;-)"

He next opened his friend's message and replied:
"Thanks from dropping your future wife's brother at his home. DEVIL
What should I call you now?
Tell me when we meet this evening."

He immediately got a reply, so checked:
"Nothing! :-|" and Vivaan checked the time to find it to be 8:47 AM.

He laughed to himself and went to grab the lemon juice which is waiting for him.

Time started to slow down for Chakor as she was restlessly waiting for his class which is the 2nd one in the afternoon.
The moment he entered the room, he went directly to his table and started to do his routine work except to have an eye contact with Chakor as she is only watching him and all his movements.
She tried to ask a question to get his attention but he escaped seeing her by turning his back to her as if writing interesting things on the board and asked her to say what she wanted.
He even prepared himself to not do any exercise today as she is the only person who raises her hand to answer.
Keeping a regular track of time, he got out of the class 1 minute before the normal time to avoid her.

Having lost her patience, she got her phone out during the 10 minutes break and typed a message:
"I said to not avoid me!
I really have a question in Maths.
Whom to ask?"

"Send the question!" he replied.
"Why is Y going away from X?" she texted and smiled.

She didn't got any answer.
And she know that the next day, she will meet him if only she had a chance to cross him in the corridor.
Else she has to wait for Thursday class.
And most probably that is what is going to happen.

After finishing all his lessons and taking a small rest in his apartment, Suraj went to his evening class and there his friend was waiting for him in the parking lot.
"So Dude! How was the class with my sister today?"
"Sorry!" he said sternly getting out of his bike.
"There is nothing to say sorry about!"
"Come let's go in!"
"What happened last night? Did she do something?"
"No! No! Nothing!" with a little agitation.

"So something happened!" raising his brows.
"Nothing!"
"Are you sure?"
"Mmm! Yeah!"
"I think I will ask my sister!
She will be more than happy to know that I'm with her and she may even say things that would have happened in her dreams."
"Nooo"
"Why?"
"Time for class! Come!" pulling him by his shoulder.

"Did you both confessed?"
He glared him.
"Oh! I'm sorry!" with a sorry poker face "I mistook you both. Did something something happened? Like kiss or" Suraj palmed Vivaan's mouth and glared before speaking.
"She is my student and she is your sister. So stop talking like an idiot.
And please no more questions, neither to me nor to your sister.
I want her to forget me and move on." leaving his friend free.
"In your dreams buddy."

Seeing their professor come, they entered their classroom and shut their mouth which opened only to answer.
Once they finished their class, both the buddies made their way out talking:
"We need to finish this project by this week-end." exclaimed Vivaan.
"10 more hours of works and I think it's done."
"Why don't you come and stay at my house this Friday, after your classes?"
"No!"
"Listen me fully buddy!" Suraj asked him to continue by nodding "We can work as much as we want without any interruption." he raised his brow.
"Yeah! My sister will be there but she is not going to be stuck to you." he opened his mouth to say something but Vivaan stopped him by showing his hand.
"I will be there and I will not let her eat you! Don't be scared of choti."

"You are unbelievable! I may come there after all the guarantee you gave me but I will not stay"
"Why not?" interrupting him.
"I don't want."
"Please!"

After a lot of discussion Suraj agreed to stay.

As predicted by Chakor there was no sign of Mr. Rajvanshi existing in the world until he entered their class on Thursday.
Time flew in the same way as it flew on Tuesday.
And this time, the message she sent might have given him a mini heart-attack.

"Mr. Hot!
Please don't avoid me!
You don't know what I can do if I get a hand on you.
I wanted to discuss about our future and you left 2 minutes before the end.
Bad boy!
No problem! We will discuss about it through messages!
What do you think about the name Chakra?
I think it's the best name we can find for our little baby boy in future.
How sweet of me? I am thinking about our future.
If you want a girl, I will try to come up with a name. Promise!
I'm stopping here as we will discuss the rest face to face.
Take care. Eat well. Come to meet me!
Tons of love & kisses!
- Miss Future-CSR (Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi! I love this name! Thank you for giving it to me.)"

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How was the kiss?
I mean did I keep it simply sweet or was it harsh?
Let me know it through your LIKES & COMMENTS.

I can't say if I will be updating in the morning or evening as I will be busy with my parents marriage anniv!

I can see that this story isn't getting as much attention as the other one, is it due to the story line or is it because there is no suspense?

Next part: Part 8

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Superb sis..

I loved it a lot..

What a kiss..naughty chakor..

I don't know y suraj didn't pushed her while kissing if he don't want to kiss her?

But i loved the kiss..

Vivan was super cool like her sis..

Poor suraj..he can't digest the thing with her student..

Atlast if suraj gets attack or not..after reading chakor txt i got an attack..

Throughout the story i was just smiling and laughing like an idiot..my mom is looking at me like i m mad..

Tq for the super cool update sis..

Luv u..❤️

Edited by Sania_suraj - 9 years ago

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Charaju

@Charaju

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Nice update 👏
Chakor kissed suraj & suraj didn't push away 😛
Vivan was cool in this part eventhough drunk he remembered
Eagerly waiting for suraj's reply