karan+shubhangi aka robbie+kasturi part 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well guyz heres my nxt part plz comment!

kasturi:okay thx tanu

tanu:di lekin aap unkey address kyun chahtey hai

kasturi:zyaada mat bol ja mama ke paas aur koi kaam mey unkey hat bada ja jaldi

tanu:leki....di....

kasturi:jaoon na tanu

tanu:okay jathi hoon jathi hoon ------------------------------------------------------------ ------------

j:ma!ma! kaha hai aap!

nandini:aoney kamre mey hoon kya hua esey chila kyun raha hai

j:wo ma kehni thi ki kal robbie key saath purey din masoori ja rahi hoon tikhey

nandini:lekin purey din kyun tujhe oatha hai na aaj 5 saal key baad vandy arahi hai

j:arey vandy arahi hai wow ma apney muhe pathaya nahi well tikhe mein 2-3 ghantey mein wapis aajoonga tikhe

nandini:ha betey jaldi aana

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k standing in front of the mirror dressing up

k:arey meri chain kaha gayi

startz looking 4 ger chain

k:oh no mandir sey us aunty se jab takrayi tab kahi pad gaya hoga kesey laoon mein ab wo chain bauji ney di thi kitney pyaar se di thi.. ab to wo chain lana hi padega lekin kesey kaha dundu mein unko. ------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------------------------------

nandini: arey ramu kaka merey mandir ki thali tayar kijiye mujhe vandy ke liye manat mangi thi aur ajj wo pura hogaya hai aur mujhe nangey peyr mandir jaana hoga

ramu:ji ye lijiye thali aur vandy agar agayi jaldi to mein unhey mandir bech doonga

nandini:haan tikhe

she suddenly looks down on the plate to check if everything is set and she spots sumthin

nandini:arey ye chain kaha sey ayi thali mein arey yaad aya wo do din pehley us ladki sey takrayi thi usika chain hoga agar wo mandir me miley tho wapis kardoongi

she calls raunak to go with her

nandini:arey raunak chal beta mandir jaana hai vandy ke liya manat pura karney

j:ji ma chaliye.......driver gadi nikalo

nandini:nahi raunak hum gadi sey nahi ja rahey hai pedar ja rahey hai tu gadi sey aaja mein pedar chalti hoon lekin ma mein aapko akeley nahi janey doongi mein bhi chaloonga aap key saath

nandini:nahi raunak tu gadi sey ja mein kehrahi hoon na akeley chali jaaongi tu ja jaldi warna der hojayegi ------------------------------------------------------------ ------------ ------------------------------------------------------------ -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

k:ab kya karoon wo chain mere liye kitni kimteii hai arey mein mandir ja kar doondthi hoon phir shayd chain milsakta hai.......ma mein mandir ja rahi hoon

kaushalya:tikhey betey jaldi ajana

k:ji ma ------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------------

nandini and kasturi both reach temple and raunak reaches b4 them and is waiting for nandini to arrive

j:kaha rehgayi ma unhey kuch.nahi nahi esey nahi sochna chaiye

nandini spots kasturi

nandini:arey betey sunno!!!! kasturi does not still see her then nandini hold her on her soulder kasturi turns rond

k:arey aunti ji aap!

nandini:ha beta wo tumharey chain rehgayi thi merey paas jab tum takraye they mujsey aur sorry beta meine pehli dekha nahi tha tumharey chain warna wapis kar deti aur ye lo tumharey chain beta

k:arey nahi nahi tikhey wo mein yehi dund rahi thi wo ye meri bauji ne di hai

nandini:haan beta mein samhajthi hoon

j is looking 4 nandini and he finds her

j:ma! ma!

k:thank you anty mein chalti hoon

nandini:arey ek minute beta prasad tho leke jaoon

k:ji

nandini:wo beta bula raha hai abhi aati hoon yaha rukon tikhe beta

k:ji anty mein yehi intezar karoongi

j:arey ma aap yaha hai mein aapko kaha kha nahi dundrahi hoon chaliye mandir ke andar manat pudi kar lijiye

nandini:arey raunak tujhe humesha jaldi lagi rehti hai ek minute us ladki ko prasad dekhey yi

j:wo kaun hai?

nandini:wo koi ladki sey mein takragayi thi aur uska chain merey paas rehgaya yehi wapas karney ayi hoon

j:kya?tikhey chaliye

nandini:bad mein kisa batati hoon pehli chal wo intezar kar rahi hain

k:tum!!!!!!!

j:tum!!!!!!!!

nandini:arey!tum dono ek dusrey ko jantey ho great tum dono baatey karo mein mandir hokar aati hoon prasad lekar

k:aap yaha kya kar rahey hai

j:mein? mein apney ma ke saath ayi hoon kyun?

k:wo aapki ma hai?!!!!!

j:haan

k:chi!aap key dost ne jo merey saath kiya hai uskeliye mein unhey kabhi maaf nahi karrongi aur mujhe prasad nahi chahiye mein ja rahi hoon

j:arey rukiya to merey dost ek mashoor rockstar hai aur apney jis tarha unkey saath baat kiya wo tik nahi tha

k:haan aur esey kisi ki ghar mein aakar unhe bezati karna tik tha

j:ye to nahi kehrahi hoon lekin mujhe patha hai mera dost ghakat tha lekin aapne kud gadi sey takrakey itni baat badakey ye tik hey

k:nahi mein apni galti maanti hoon lekin unhey istarha ye nahi karni chaiye thi

j:mein usey bataoonga mein jaanti hoon ye tik nahi tha

k:ji nahin tikhey aapko kuch karney ki zarrorat nahi jo karna hai mein kud karrongi

j:aap chahe to mein aapki madat kar doonga wesey aapkey saath kitni badi hadsa hui bhe right

k:badi hadsa to aapne dost ne karvaiyi thi to mein aap pey yakiin kesey kar sakti hoon

j:ye lijiye merey phone no. agar koi madat key zarrorat ho to mujhe bataye ga aur isey zyaada merey pas saboot nahi hai chalta hoon

kasturi thinks and sais why not ill take th offer

k:tikhe mein offer le leti hoon aapki leki nkya garantee hai ki app mujhe dhoka nahi dengey

j:i promise ye kaafi hai

k smiles

k:okay

they hand shake

k:ab dekhtey hain robbie the rockstar mujhsey kesey nipat letey hai

j:haan aur mein bhi tumharey saath hoon!

k:thanks wesey aapka naam

j:raunak singahnia tumhara?

k:kasturi chawla

thts all hope u liked it plz comment i am eagerly waiting 4 them and i wil rit nxt prt soon thx ur all sooooooo sweet!!!!!!!😊

plz tell me if thers anyithing wrong with it ill try my best to sort it out at the earliest thx again😒

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guyz sum of the wrdz r wrong plz 4give il make it btter nxt tym sorry and thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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