Synced Heartbeats|ShivIka FF| Teaser Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Remake of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai(My SoorYa FF/Diya Aur Baati Hum)

Shivaay and Anika have tied knot with each other in childhood but they have grown up in their respective households as they cannot stay together as their marriage cannot be legalised. But in the years of separation they have formed a quintessensial connection which cannot be expressed in words.
Shivaay had sent his men to bring Anika as they can get married legally. But like usual,
Anika's father Amit had demanded Shivaay's standing on his own feet.
Time passed away, Shivaay is now one of the youngest successful and iconic business tycoon of country. This time he again senr his men to Anika's house to bring her to Mumbai.
On their way back to Mumbai, Anika got separated from Shivaay's men in the forest. Now her struggle begins from here.
She has to find her way to reach Mumbai and unite with her husband.
Will she able to find her way back to him?
Will Shivaay get his Anika back?
Will they ever reunite again?


Hope you like my plot.
Should I forward with this story?
Comment and hit the like button please. It was my first FF which I wrote and was discontinued due to personal problems.
I'm remaking it. I'll post character sketch along with prologue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nyc ...interesting nd different stry line
Continue soon
Plz do tell me ur name so that i can address u with that
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Originally posted by: farinaks

Nyc ...interesting nd different stry line
Continue soon
Plz do tell me ur name so that i can address u with that


My name is Pragnya but everyone calls me Daisy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting Story Daisy..
Loved the starting..
Do continue soon
Waiting
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Prologue- Shivaay The Ishqbaaaz

Story will be from Shivaay's perspective.

"Well! Well Mr Oberoi I've heard lot about you."The girl in yellow off shoulder chudidaar and was wearing only a watch and different colour light bulb(Nagini's entry scene outfit in front of Shivaay) praised me.

"Well I can say same for you Ms Malhotra." I said politely. We are in the Malhotra Headquarters at Andheri.

"I have a proposal for you" She smirked at me seductively. Well two can play the game, why she alone.

"What is the offer?" I asked curtly.

She smirked again

"Marry Me. You'll get a merger of 4.8K crores in return." She offered.

I clapped my hands after hearing it. Tightening my coat's buttons, I crossed my hands in my arm.

"Miss Ragini Anuj Malhotra, I am pretty sure now that you have really underestimated Shivaay Singh Oberoi. " I spoke with a smirk of my own.

"Before being a businessman, I'm a man of principles." I spoke in a firm voice.

"Marriage is not an important business deal which I ought to gain but it is a union of two hearts in a sacred and pure bond. A mere amount of money cannot change my decision"

"How about 5K crores?" She again offered.

"Ms Malhotra, now I'm taking my leave. I prefer you use the offered money on the treatment of your mind and ear instead of a mere contract marriage." I advised her and took my leave.

I drove in my car to the Juhu Beach for some relaxation after meeting Nagini. I sat on the hot sand and was enjoying the tranquil hot waves. I watch the waves crashing in the sea.

The waves break around the rocks in the shallows, their foam crests becoming chaotic lace over the blue. Jazz watches it swirl, mesmerized, as if the movement of the water choreographs his thought process.Waves come, transient yet always there, rising, falling. They scatter the light, the hue of the water ever changing yet always familiar, always blue. How could I fail to love them as they dance inward to crash on the pebbles? How could I fail to appreciate the salty air or the cold caress of the breeze? They are stalwarts of this ocean-side life, present and passing, always the same and never.

My thoughts drifted like the winds towards her. I closed my eyes shut.

Her hair shone like the sea at night, the black strands utterly white where the bright rays fell. As she moved, her anklets make a beautiful melodic symphony of music ever created. Her deep chocolate brown eyes shone with mirth and gaiety. Her lips were a pale pink that reminded me of a rose bud. The top lip was thinner, but not too thin, and it had a natural cupid's bow; the bottom one was larger and more plush.

If the eyes are the gateway to the soul, the lips are the same thing for the body. They are softness, passion and the promise of the sweetness to come. I blushed at my wild thoughts about her.

My heart is already her. I'm already hers. My soul, My mind and my whole body belongs to only her. I'm always hers forever.

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Next Chapter Annika's entry.

This story is actually remake of my first fanfic Pyaar Ka Dard Hai:The Beautiful Pain which was on Sooraj and Sandhya which I worte years ago.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey there! 😊

I am liking this plot! It's very different from what I have read before!

Anika getting lost and has to find her way to Shivaay 😲 That's pretty cool!

On top of all, they're already married! 😳

Very excited to read he next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Phenomenal ...loved it Daisy
Continue soon
Do pm if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing loved it yaar..
Shivaay is already in love with her..
What a surprise..
Loved it Daisy..
Update soon..
Waiting for next part

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