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DipaliG

@DipaliG

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Interesting prologue..

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply

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Akanksha

@agm1998

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Ishu is so broken

Continue soon

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

very emotional and nice teaser
loved the concept
do continue soon

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Omg this is so emotional and so right!!
Ishita is right!!
Legally also Shagun is their mother!!
Even Pihu's mother too as Raman has registered Shagun's name on the birth certificate!!!!
I have not been watching the show so I don't know what is going on!!
Did Raman call her sauteli maa again!!!????

But what you have written so far is amazing!!
Please continue - please please!!!!!

You know until he stops insulting her with his venomous words every time he gets angry this situation will never be resolved!!
As he himself does not believe her to be their mother how will the children ever believe it?!?!!?!?!

Please continue soon and thank you so much for the pm!!