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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 4

"Please kanak don't run, we need to talk" she heard him say.

what he wants now? He made a joke of me in society. How can I ever face my collegues then? He made my already difficult life more complicated.
"why I should even stand here?" she asked shooting glares at Uma in anger.
Uma shook his head a little and covered up the distance between them. Kanak took a step back as he stood now at her close proximity.

She tried hard to maintain the rage she felt few minutes before but to her surprise now her all anger were slowly getting vanish and these emotions were quietly getting exchanged with the better ones. What was she feeling suddenly? She did not knew. All she knew is about pounding heart that drummed their music enough loud to let the world hear. Her lips parted on their own as he leaned a bit towards her face. Her breathe caught in her throat as she felt the mint of his breathe fanning on her face. What could possibly have change the scenario? She was suppose to be angry but now she is more calm than ever. Just his presence made her feel like she is floating in air, like it's a spring season and she is surrounded by millions of dawning sun color flower, showering from sky directly on her sensitive skin. Kanak, you are angry' she tried to explain herself making a weak effort to get control of her chameleon emotions.

Uma smirked noticing the effect of his mere presence on her. He had not even started with his apology, he wanted to say many things now. How badly he now felt to get her forgiveness for him. The reel of earlier evening made a silence paw inside his little boyish brain.

He looked up to her with a twinkle in his eyes. His eyes caressed the mark on her cheek which he had made it. His heart went out for the lady standing so close to him. Its like his hand had their own mind, and they craved for the single touch now of her baby soft skin. What was he feeling now? He did not know. All he knew was he need to get a little touch of her against his skin. The thought crept his mind and the hand functioned on their own tracing her single strand of beautiful air flying over her face. Giving a light feather touches his index finger walked the path of her hair from temple to her cheeks. The delightful touches of his magical finger made her shut her eyes close. Her chest heaved up and down in nervousness. She was nervous and excited too. Why? She dint exactly figure. Her face tilt on its own craving for his touch as his finger slide back to the single strand over her face. He left his track over her cheeks, circling the thin shield of redness made by him. The little sensation of burn twitched her face, she shivered a little; letting eye lids embraced. The little burn traveled from her heart, making the way through skin it reached to his soul. His eyes narrowed in pain and a small chuckled escaped his rosy lips. Immediately a drop of tear surfaced his eyes, making him go blind for a while. He leaned a more, aiming lip over her reddish cheek. She hooked on a breathe, involuntarily waiting for the kiss. The eyes of him were fixed on the pain he caused, his lips formed o' making his feature cuter than he already was. He blown warm minty air from his lips to her cheeks, making the burn replace with tingling sweet sensational bliss. He circled his lips up and down, the wave flow through her cheeks to eyes making her features more than calm. The sudden churning of her stomach made her worry, her eyebrows scruched up as she looked at him with a wary, his eyes were closed and the calmness complemented his features . she felt watching this man like this forever. A small beautiful smile crept back on her lips, she shrugged now every emotion and let herself set free. He gasped on sudden touch of her soft fingers on his jaw line. He shifted his face as per the track of her fingers going. His body gave a various kind of signals, every posture he adopted was just to get her more near. His heart betrayed him and weaved a instrumental music with the white cage, the movement of his chest him with her heaving chest. The soft music of air played like a flute in air. They forgot the reason they were because here. The stars smiled coyly looking at the swan down the earth. Water shimmer a little, glistening their petite world.

She shivered a little on the contact of cold air to her face, her face buried more in his embrace. The shifting of his jaw marked their intentions. He moved his face without breaking the contact with her skin to his. Birds chirped shyly somewhere in dark. They were the silent visitors with cupid in spark.
Their lips quivered on their own making them brush each other at the corner of their lips. A shiver ran down their smile making their lips part more than before. The world was ready to witness now the first dew of rain on earth. The emotions were high and the time was low.

Their face moved inch by inch, till they were hovering at each other lips. The intoxicate breathe of him made her go weak on knees, he shuddered as he engulfed a hand behind her waist. The cold skin of her melted with the warmth he gave. Her eyes teared upon the open dream that made her content. They breathed on each other face resting their forehead together, without letting their eyes open. The feel of their skin directed their next move; the quivering of their lips complemented every groove. He let his nose touch her petite one's in a process to reach her forehead. The contact never left as his nose traced the path of her head to chin again. She raised her chin to give him more excess; he kissed the dew waiting on the edge of her chin. Tracing the thin path of water from her chin to eyes in descending way, he let his lips brush on her the eyes letting her gasp in shy. Her hands rested on his shoulder as he pulled a little more in drowsiness to her torso. They released heavy breathe as again the lips were at their junction waiting for them to meet the edge of emotions. He brushed his lips over her ever so lightly, yet it made her feel like a quill flying in the air liberally.

The strange emotions started to scare her, her mind slipped back from trace tracking the path he was now were! Her eyes flew open as the situation sunken her in. she quickly dropped her hand and pushed him far. The rude gesture made by him, took him off-guard a bit. His eyes were still sleeping as his brows furrowed at the loss of contact, it took him a minute to finally dawn upon the situation he was at. A small crimson color climbed upon his cheeks, he slowly opened his eyes promising to not let a single trace of regret ever spot in them for this. He shook his head with a no as now reality has finally has drawn upon; looking at her guilty face he was sure she took him completely wrong. Taking a step ahead he tried to say something to make her feel better, but she flinched a step back shivering from utter guilt and fear.

"I ... i.. didn't ..i mean..i" he tried to take out something sensible from his mouth but his tongue felt heavy on the image of her in shivering form.

"I think you should leave." She said in a weak tone, not meeting his pleading eyes once.

"Kanak...i..am.." he tried again this time harder coming from the shock. But before he could complete with stammer words popping over his tongue she silenced him with a tone which he took as he command.

"please uma, JUST leave!"

He turned his back to her, turning his head which every stride he took. She stood there hugging herself in the moist freezing air of earth, eyes making tears as she muttered something under her breathe. Just by her face he could make out what was going on inside her, he could bet on the fact that she had taken every blame for this on her. He so wanted to get back and pamper her with hugs and kisses, why did he felt so he himself didn't know?
She watched him leaving as the silence swallowed up the surrounding again. Her hands reached her hair , pushing strand of air behind her head. She tried hard to reason for the act she participated in it. She hated him than why did she stretched the coziness to the extent where it should never be reached. She was the one who should blame as she let him to take advantage of her. She cursed herself as she considerate that uma being a co-star could easily mesmerized anyone for the fact. It was she who loosened up the barrier between them, how could she ever forget this night now even if she hardened her wish? She pressed her palm over her forehead as she cursed herself for letting this carried too far. "how could I let this happen? How could i?" her inner soul defiance her, there was purity in his eyes, they explained her. But refusing every verdict she cursed again blaming him for not saying anything after he shared the emotional moment. May be he got what was he here for. With that she retired for her room, promising to never let heal the engraved scar.

Here, uma drive to his home was something to watch. His face changes color faster than any formula car. He was confused at one time, and shies at other. The moment of them together aroused an silence desire. He felt butterflyes dancing behind the skin of his wall. His heart fluttered as he could still smell her perfume on his shirt. A single piece of hair broken in intimacy made his heart dance. Was it a weak moment or something he really could not lay his finger upon?

He really felt bad with the reaction of her in the end, he wanted to say many things but everything got seized with the guilt in her eyes. He could understand that she might take him again wrong, but he promised himself to seek out every misunderstanding even before it gets form. He really didn't wish to fight after the moment they shared together. He scoffs on his own boyish grin as he reminded himself about the feather touches. He made a mental note to clear her every misunderstanding meeting her with the first sunrise that comes tomorrow, with this determination he pulled back his car to garage of his home. His eyes scrunched as he spotted the flash shining in air from various spot, what it is probably his mind taunt him to ask?

He walked towards his entrance and found his complete family standing with head down and his PR and friends are trying to talk to media while there is a police van right before his house.

The moment one of the media man spotted him, like bees run for honey everyone surrounded him. The sudden attack of people left him freeze on a spot, thanks to imraan and prasad who helped him to get out of the eager mass.
"ye sab kya ho raha hai?" Uma asked looking at imraan whose heads went down with question.
"bade bhai, police ...ap ko arrest karne aai hai" vansh answered for imraan with his head down.
"kyu?" asked confused and worried as his eyes laid on ammi and najma who were struggling hard to get free from flashes.
"Ms Kanak Rathi ne apke khilaf 'Abusive behavior' complaint file ki hai" he said in a low voice.
"Kanak ne?" Uma felt shock as he really did not get it as why she did this he said sorry, I mean he tried to and the moment...! How could she do this after sharing that intensity? She really took me as a rapist? He opened his mouth in shock "how could she possibly think this?" he asked vansh with seriousness. He was hurt. Vansh noticed it and what added was he was hurt because of a strange woman whom he hardly met. Who he hates to be precise. Did he expect her to not do this? But expectation only come with feelings, does bade bhai feel for her? Vansh muttered in low voice and unknowingly a small smile sat on his face proudly.
"You are in love bade bhai!" he chuckled at the thought... while uma now regretted the promise he made with himself a minute before "I hate you kanak, you ruined it!"
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Wow ...was waiting for it eagerly ...ab review after i have read it n fallen in love with it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"She tried hard to maintain the rage she felt few minutes before but to her surprise now her all anger were slowly getting vanish and these emotions were quietly getting exchanged with the better ones. What was she feeling suddenly? "
Cant imagine a better way of putting things in such sitiations...excellent words
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That emotions made me feel every bit of it ...its just like teenagers story where these moments create magic much before some actually falls in love ...
You are really a gem in putting forth scene by scene pictorial xplaination...

I was totally mesmerized...and really feel why the hell kanak felt that hatred rite when they were about to be more closer ...:)

Keep updating
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thoda late ho gaya reply karne main.
Nice update. They both are fighting their inner personal self. They both have feelings for each other but can't seem to understand it.
Arey someone needs to tell Uma that kanak had filed a complaint right after the slap and not after his ahem ahem visit at Kanak's house.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Kanak-123

Wow ...was waiting for it eagerly ...ab review after i have read it n fallen in love with it

...love you bas😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanak-123

"She tried hard to maintain the rage she felt few minutes before but to her surprise now her all anger were slowly getting vanish and these emotions were quietly getting exchanged with the better ones. What was she feeling suddenly? "

Cant imagine a better way of putting things in such sitiations...excellent words

Thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Kanak-123

That emotions made me feel every bit of it ...its just like teenagers story where these moments create magic much before some actually falls in love ...

You are really a gem in putting forth scene by scene pictorial xplaination...

I was totally mesmerized...and really feel why the hell kanak felt that hatred rite when they were about to be more closer ...:)

Keep updating

she dont wanna fall for him. But the magnet in him is pulling her across. Thankyou so much for your beautiful inspiration. Cant love you more for this comment...wwwooo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Star_Wonder

Thoda late ho gaya reply karne main.

Nice update. They both are fighting their inner personal self. They both have feelings for each other but can't seem to understand it.
Arey someone needs to tell Uma that kanak had filed a complaint right after the slap and not after his ahem ahem visit at Kanak's house.

yeah exactly. Someone tell uma..she has complaint for slap and not for kiss...almost...
Hey...its okay to be late...you commented...thats imp

They both are idiots😆 they need a wake up call to see the love they have.

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