Rising sun and falling stars ff (chap 4 / 18 june)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone😳
I love writing stories. I have already started 1 whose name is still to be decided. So for now lets assume the title..undecided.
Being in forum for past few years i have wrote many stories in different forum. Some were completed some i couldn't make it till end. One of that story close to my heart is Rising sun and falling star.
I feel like uma and kanak chemistry can justify my characters in this story.
So i want to write the story here and take it to the end.
Hope you will support me.


Chapter 1- page 2


Chapter 3 - Page 5



Yours
Tia

Note: below find the prologue for same. I will post the chappy too in a while. If good number of readers wants it. I shall continue it.
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Prologue



The story starts from a small town boy. He resides in the heart of the city called rajasthan. He came from a family where the life revolved around love harmony and business. His bringing up exceeded par from excellence. He was blessed with everything, love family, success and now the only empty place in his life was soon to be filled by a special enemy. Journalist Kanak Rathi. Who hated him like she loved him. Anything and everything done by him was a mess in her eyes. The tag of superstar was nothing but a yawn worthy joke for her.
No one ever thought that the storm in his life would change so much in his life. His attitude towards life changed. He changed and turned more tough as he fought more with the situation against him.
This story is the journey of a superstar, who now knew the true meaning of fandom. A story of a king who learned to rule several hearts without kingdom. A story of a faith and blessing which lead him and her into one soul. A story of an enemy turning into best wisher. A story of love with all it's purity. A story of life and its rise and fall. A story of Kanak Rathi and Uma shankar and their journey of rising sun and falling stars.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue and waiting for your update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithi12

Nice prologue and waiting for your update

thank you dear😃 i am glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey tiara. This is beautiful start. Please continue. Count me in
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Originally posted by: Kahaniya

Hey tiara. This is beautiful start. Please continue. Count me in

thankyou😃...i am happy you liked it😳
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Superb start..Btw, Kanak ka surname mention kiya.. Uma ka nhi kiya?? Kyu..Toshniwal k sath itti na-insaafi !!😆😆
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Superb start..Btw, Kanak ka surname mention kiya.. Uma ka nhi kiya?? Kyu..Toshniwal k sath itti na-insaafi !!😆😆

you wont believe me but somewhere i was waiting for you to come here. Hahah and you did.
Toshniwal...kaisa surname hai ye...
Chappy 1 me bhar bharke use hai...
You have to wait and read it. Bas...ruko tum aa gai na..post kr deti hu😆
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Chapter 1


kitna aasaan hai tumhare liye simran. Bus ek tufan or hath chorkar ja rahi ho." A man in black sherwani confronted a beautiful girl in red attire. He holds her hand and drags her to the middle of stage with anger and pain in his eyes. His possessiveness could be easily witnessed through the red line appeared on her wrist, due to his strong grip over her wrist.

"I am sorry..."she whispered sadly as tears dripped down her chin. She looked at him with pain and tears as she could see the amount of efforts he is been using just to control himself from breaking down.

"Please...just please" he begged this time no demand, no order just request. The tears in his eyes made a trail down to his neck and disappeared inside the collar of his shirt.

"I won't live without you." He said as he stammered on his words, attempting to say it correctly with lips quivering in tension.

Simran simply nods her head in no as she looks at her east, where her family is sitting with guest and all looks excited.

"It's too late...kabir" she sighed looking at the door and she swayed her hands to get out of his grip.

"NO!" he yelled loud enough to catch attention of anyone passing by. He caught her hand and pulled her for an intimate deep hug.

"You are not going there. They will steal you from me. I love you please. I beg."He took a deep breath as his body started to give up.

"I love you ...do you get that simmy...I love you!" with that he collapsed on floor taking her with him. With Never letting her GO. GRIP!

For a minute everything turned in to pin drop silence all could be heard was little sniff and weep across the wall.

"AND CUT IT!" yelled a man standing with crew in the middle of the set. While suddenly the darkness in the room turned bright as the spotlight switched in to regular bulbs.

The camera man sighed sadly as he blinked his eyes to get out of the emotions.
"Wow sir what a shot!" director came towards Uma and gave him a tight hug, patting his back in a reward.
"Excellent acting sir" camera man praised him from where he is sitting.
While the actress Sara shook her hand with Uma and clapped for his incredible acting.
"What a shot sir!" she praised in awe!
With that everyone on the set started clapping and praising Uma for his wonderful acting. His fans that came over to visit him too stood in proud and clapped, showering complements at him.

"That's what our superstar is!" one of the young beautiful fan yelled from the corner.

Uma smiled to all and mouthed a thank you looking in everyone's direction. He grinned from ear to ear as his female fans started to whistle for him.
He called his boy on set for refreshments and soon he was all set to give interviews and meet his fan followings on set.
Must say; It's not an easy task to handle all crazy little girl fangirling on his every move .But I guess it comes hand in hand with the tag superstar. He is a superstar of silver screen. No one can match him in acting, nor in his personality. Fans are really crazy for him; any word from his mouth is a command for ladies. People across the world pray to meet him someday. His fandom have reached across the world with his ongoing show "Nasamajh DIL" Where his pair with simran a.k.a Sara has become the craze amongst youngster. Uma is not a newbie; he has been very much in industry from a long time. Majority of awards in year are always on his name. He is 30 and have accomplished with two blockbuster projects "tamanna" and "wada raha" where he had got a popular award back to back for three years. Tamanna' has been youth oriented and his success actually started from there. This show gave him a lot of Name, Fame and in one night he became SUPERSTAR!'
"Ok Uma next shoot starts by 20 minutes." A lady with a smart personality signaled uma from other side of the set.
"Yup, I get it!" Uma replied showing his thumb in air. He turned his head back on the book where he was giving autograph. He handed the book back to the teen who is literally drooling over him. Her eyes didn't left his face even for once as she sweetly smiled at him.
"Can I have click with you?please sir!" she requested him with sparkling eyes.
Although he was really tired but still his principle did not allow him to disappoint his fans. So he smiled warmly at her before offering her to hug him. The girl cheeks turned crimson in color when she felt his warmth against her.
After posing for few more fans finally he was free for few hours.
"Uma?" he heard assistant director calling him.
"you know that there is new track commencing in this show. So to convince people , channel and authorities have planned for a live interview of simran and kabir." (Sara and uma onscreen names.)She bites her lips in nervousness as she felt his aura overpowering her.
Uma looked at the pretty lady and nodded his head in yes without asking any questions.
She turned with a content smile as she was expecting some tantrums from his side, may be something along with lines 'I have already worked double shift and so I need some rest' or maybe we can post pone it tomorrow.' anything but not yes, she felt surprise by his dedication towards his work. Everybody on the set was impressed by him as he never showed any irresponsiveness and laziness with the work assigned to him. He never complained, not even once.
Uma signaled Imraan and Prasad that he is going to his vanity van, before last time checking up his schedule for today. Prasad quickly brought his script to him which he readily took it reciting its lines for next shoot.
Uma opened the van tired yet focused with the piece of paper in hand as he stepped inside the van.
"Surprise!" he heard Palomi (his assistant) squealing at him, his eyes darted towards her and soon his smile washed away.
"Miss Rathi" he took her name out as if talking about some bitter vegetable.
"Yes Mr. Toshniwal" she replied, slapping a fake smile on her face. Uma huffed in annoyance as , the only last thing he wanted to see for the day was her. No, not because of her appearance. She is really sweet, intelligent and more than require beautiful. I mean really beautiful. Too hot to handle in Uma's description, but the only things which made him run away from her was her unnecessary hatred towards him. She simply disliked him, don't know why but for strange reason the way she behaved with the rest of the crew was different from the way she behaved with him. She behaved rude at times and always taunts him for being a superstar. It won't be a complete lie that in their first meet sparks could be witnessed in their eyes; there was sudden surge of passion in those eyes. Uma thought to take this meet for next level, he was that much attracted towards her beauty but the next moment ruined it all. She came to know he is the superstar she came for the interview and the innocent and sweet expression she holds turned in to cactus.' A thorny sharpie and pokey cactus' uma thought in his mind before occupying a seat beside her.
Palomi giggled on his situation as she very much knew how much fun it is when they are together. She thought something and decided to leave them alone while she quietly escaped without letting them know. Uma was so lost in her eyes that he didnt notice the exit of palomi from van. The sound of shutting door brought him to present.
"ap..ap ka kaise ana hua?" he asked trying to be sweet.
"apka intezaar kar rahi thi; interview lena hai na. Per ap itne busy the ke crew ne bataya nai hoga? Nai, Mr. Superstar" she asked with an annoying mocking tone.
Uma rolled his eyes on her attitude not again." He murmured to himself.
Uma chuckled as he dialed up a number and ordered for an orange juice and snack in his van.

"Didn't even bother to ask me. Hun!" she cursed him under her breathe.

The distance between them was too low to keep the word as secret, he smirked on her cursing.

"To interview start kare?" he asked positive drinking water from close table.
"Yeah, sure "kanak again gave him a stupid mean expression. Why can't you behave normal with me for once?' Uma found asking himself , but was too afraid to ask her staright on face.
He shifted in his place a little and kanak involuntarily backed off on her seat.
sorry' uma whispered by clearing his throat.
"ok mr umashankar...now tell me about your experience with this show?" and questions like this started to appear from one end to other. He tried to be as calm as possible but with her it was impossible to be sane in one roof. By the time the interview ended both had a frowning expression on their faces while their eyes were rotating on every corner of van but each other.

Finally all questions ended with a good note, few were answered honestly other were responded by witty and spontaneous take, and few of them were handled with diplomacy by him. She noted down each and every line on the paper and taped the recorder to stop recording their chat.

The van again slipped in to pin drop silence as the only thing could be heard now was her heart beats which god knows why were running on high speed. It's due to the weather she explained herself.
Uma shifted his glance on her and quickly looked on other side as he didnt wished to be caught by the only person WHO HATES HER (please note the sarcasm)
"Ok Mr toshniwal. That was it for today. I shall take a leave now" kanak said with a beautiful smile as she tried to get up on her heels.
"Ok Miss Rathi-"before he would complete his sentence, she was already on her running shoes to escape from his den, I mean van. Uma sighed again softly on disappointment, he somewhere hoped for the change in her behavior with him, at least for today but no she was rude as always.
As she was about to open the door, someone on other side pulled it to his side making her off balance and she slipped towards floor coz due to off balance with heels.
She thought for a minute filmy pitcher where hero being lifting her before she fell, but nothing like that happened. She landed on her hips and shrieked in pain.
Uma really ran towards her to catch her before fall but then it struck him about the incidence in past where he was in similar situation with her and she freaked out becoz he had touched her. I mean seriously?

"ap theek to hai? He asked worried yet dint helped her to get up.

"hmm..." she nodded partially in agreement partially in embarrassment to fall in front of two male's.
Kanak tried to get up when she saw a hand hanging above her head, her eyes darted towards the the hand , it was him offering help. "Let me help you?!" he asked more like saying.
Kanak refused to take his hand and shifted herself up of the floor with a soft shriek as her hips really hurt this time. "Did not help me before from falling, now what's the use to show concern?" she complained in her thoughts.
Kanak dusted her jeans off dirt before banging the door behind him for exit.
"sorry madam. Maine dekha nai tha" spot boy apologized in fear with his head down.
Uma hummed him as his eyes were focused on Kanak who was probably fuming with anger, and he knew she would blame him again for this accident, which was so true. He mentally palmed his face before turning his attention towards the poor spot boy who stood frozen afraid of him and expecting some kind of scolding.
Uma smiled at the boy and patted his shoulder with right hand before whispering It's ok, no problem' to him; "ye juice or ye snack madam ko de au. Jo abhi yaha se gai..unhe" uma said looking at the door.
"per wo to ja chuki hogi" spot boy said with scrunch eye brows.
Uma chuckled before answering " nai gai hai wo, bahar baithi hongi...mujhe bura bhala kehte hue" he ended so softly so only them to be heard.
Spot boy left the van following the path where uma told him kanak would be sitting and surprisingly he spotted her in the same place doing the same activity as said by uma. She was cursing him for her fall!
Kanak was surprised to see a plate of fresh fruits and a orange juice sitting in front of her on a blue chair. She looked up to the man who got them.
"thanks bhaiya.ye sab ke liye." Kanak said smiling at him.
"thanks mujhe nai madamji uma sir ka kijiye, unhone bheja hai." Spot boy said happily pointing towards the van in Far East.
Kanak kept looking at the van with a confusion written all over her face as her hands moved towards the juice and fruits to feast on.
khane se kaise dushmani , kanak!" she explained herself for the act. The spot boy chuckled before slipping a hand in his front shirt pocket.
"ye kya hai?" Kanak asked with widen eyes.
"pain killer and balm sir ne kaha hai apko dene ke liye" spot boy said with a small smile.
"mujh... mujhe nai chahiye. Keh do apne sir ko" kanak pouted reminding her that he didn't help her.

The spot boy chuckled before keeping the Medicare on the chair beside her "maine de diya, ab apko nai chahiye to lauta dijiye sir ko , khud he" with that he left from her sight.

Kanak kept looking at the juice and the pain killer before calculating something in inner mind. As if she came to a certain conclusion she quickly tore a pill from the packed and gulped it in with the juice. She opened the balm and took some gel on her fingers before rubbing it to her ankle. She felt much better as her pain slowly subsided. A blissful smile appeared on her face as she ate the rest of the meal on plate without noticing that uma have been watching her all the time since the spot boy said about her refusing to accept any medical help.
Kanak settled for sometime on seat itself resting her ankle coated with balm . For time pass she called up a boy passing her to get her newspaper to read.

She whispered a sweet thankyou! Before taking the newspaper from him. She opened the first page and read the headlines in dark black.

"One more Actor shown the door by XYZ channel on the basis of unprofessionalism"

She read the complete article in one go as she reminded herself one of the many reason of not liking any super star. "Result of their over smartness" she commented before closing the paper.

"jitney kadam kamyabi ki taraf badhte hai, utne dimag in stars ke ghutno me utar ate hai" she again added looking at the van.
Kanak finally felt some relief before exiting from the xyz channel sets for the day.
Edited by -TIARA - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -TIARA

you wont believe me but somewhere i was waiting for you to come here. Hahah and you did.

Toshniwal...kaisa surname hai ye...
Chappy 1 me bhar bharke use hai...
You have to wait and read it. Bas...ruko tum aa gai na..post kr deti hu😆


Hayee!! Itti mohabbat mujhse😳😳

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