Lakshmila OS : The Loss Of A Heart..

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Hey Bhaggu...Sumo tujhe itne reviews mil toh gye

Hume toh itne bhi nhi milte😆

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Arna sharma

@arnasharma

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Di...u left me speechless...it was so so emotional...😭😭😭

The last moment of lakshmila was awesome...

Laksh waking urmi n laksh's condition literally broke me...it was as usual amazing ...the funeral also brought tears to my eyes...

The convo of mahalakshmi, vishnu, ksheer n shesha was great...i don't have words to express di...its one of the best OS's i have ever read...loved it so much...

Keep writing n rocking like this di...

Give us more of ur gr8 works...

Love u loads❤️

Arna

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Beautiful piece of work yet again sumi

All sort of emotions in one shot of story

From love to care to separation to pain and memories .

The divine love of lakshman n urmilla

The bonding and pure love between ram n lakshman The way ram console his younger brother was treat to read

and most importantly the princes of ayodhya n thier feelings for urmilla such n emotional phase that was.

And the teaching of sita to urmilla that how our. Life must came to end when our purposes get fulfilled .was beautifully written

Thanks for pm dear

Awesome work

And thanks for pm

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Mohini

@..Dharma_dasi..

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Beautiful one Sumi!!!

You made me sob all through it... The emotions were dealt so good, and bringing the last part was a great imagination...

It gave a Smiling ending as well as a whole completeness!

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hey kiddo!
Sorry for the late late review, teko pata hi hai ki kyun 😆

Coming to the OS- Brilliant conceptualisation, brilliant execution. Rula diya yaar tune to!
The beginning, where they are teasing each other, and joking, and suddenly they become serious, then the vision Urmi had, and then everyone's emotions on losing Urmi... the whole thing was so moving and I loved it!
One thing that I really loved is the way you did not miss out any of the characters, that's a really important thing for me!

Loved the OS baccha, keep giving us more and more!

P.S.: The banner is also really nice, you are improving, gallery kab kholegi?
P.P.S: Milz, whatcha doin'? 😆

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Res

Unres today pakka wala :*

Unres (Told youuu :*)

My darling darling Sumii 🤗

This is so utterly beautiful and enchanting. The beauty of LakshMila, of SiyaMila and of RamaLakhan. You made me cry with your words doll <3 It was so enchanting :)

And Lav-Kush calling Urmila their Maa

And the teasing banter between Ksheera and Sesha ❤️

You are improving with every word doll 👏👏👏 I loved thisss.

P.S. Write moreee

P.P.S. A is mad 😆😆

Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 8 years ago

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Why is everyone mad at me? What did I do? 😆

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Sumo thankyou for keeping my suggestions and atleast writing an OS which could make people happy at the last. 😆
Do I need to tell you abt your emotional scenes? They will always make me cry :/
Leaving that... true emotions, good potrayal!
Everyone❤️ And the children❤️❤️
Sisters <3
And and you can never get tired of readimg that last part..
Absolute love! Now get back to writing happy happy stuff 😉
Okay, keep improving!

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